You've definitely got something to work with here. Perhaps you could elaborate further on the daughter and discuss her dislike for the establishment. By doing this, you should be able to toss in plot hooks too. What about the dragon's family coming for the dragonskin? Go to Comment
Wow, this list is huge! You've obviously put a lot of work into this. Some of the towns I'm not big on, but I think that works well because you offer a large variety of themes. My favorite is Oceanburg so far and it's already given me some inspiration on something I need. Go to Comment
Very nice! I really like that you have a variety of places, even if of a sensitive nature. You got me thinking about ideas of my own too. I look forward to seeing the finished submission. Go to Comment
The characters are wandering through the bustling crowds of Lasopolis. A street conjuror is performing a simple summoning spell, something for the kiddies. A bit of odious purple powder in the fire, an incantation and out pops a saak-lizard or a muhmentarsh, writhing from the flaming brazier. But the conjuror has only a poor grasp of the arcane magical tongue. A few stuttered syllables could lead to Other Things coming through the brazier and giving the crowd more entertainment than they had paid for...