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The Jester's Loot
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-10 01:55 AM


A fun idea and can make for an amusing curio at the local alchemy shop. One small nitpick, is the misspelling of "balloons" as "Ballons."


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When a Lord Goes Mad
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-21 05:18 AM


An interesting mini campaign for those who want to focus in a small area and add in a touch of political intrigue. 


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Celsia Frostblossom
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-14 03:14 PM
Lovely sub, and a unique npc. Go to Comment
Jade
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-04-29 08:10 PM
Nice npc, she would make a great guide for any group traveling through a jungle or wooded area, or an even better side kick/partner for a druid or ranger.

In a higher tech setting such as Shadowrun or Rifts she could also be used as a cat shaman or beast master with ease. Go to Comment
Jade
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-04-30 11:58 PM
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The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-20 09:48 PM
Fun and twisted. Combined with a pc that has the curiosity flaw (or better yet a player with it) you have every excuse to send the pc running across the world in search of know-it-all sages, magic keys, and anything else they think may open it. (Of course once they *do* manage to get a deity to open it or find out there's nothing inside they may well try and fit the gm in any conveniently nearby box, depending on their sense of humor.)

Oh and Pieh, do me a little favor and put your idea up as a sub linking back to this one so I can give it a proper vote and comment (+1 is too little for the idea). It's good enough it it's own right to stand alone.

5/5

Edit: One little question, Why isn't this a golden submission yet? It certainly deserves to be one. Go to Comment
The Land of the Living
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Silveressa's comment on 2010-12-22 04:28 PM


Excellent sub and full of great ideas. Any interesting question arises however, does the society allow/encourage inbreeding/incest? Or do they send out raiding parties for new people every so many years?



If they do send out raiding parties to acquire the best and brightest for their lands population it makes for a great springboard for adventures such as:



To rescue a Living Treasure



The heroes find themselves on a hired to rescue a world renowned artisan who was suddenly abducted by strange white clothed warriors who sailed off to the north. 



Rite of passage



As part of the passage from child to adult, young adults of the mist valley must join a "gathering party" and leave their land to return with several people of worth to join their culture and keep it strong. For these young warriors who have never known debilitating injury or sickness the outside world can be a daunting place, but tradition demands they return successful, or not at all...



Sanctuary, Refuge Denied



Fleeing a war, plague or continental catastrophe a ship full of refugees seeks sanctuary in the magical northern lands, rumored to be safe from all the mortal worlds horrors. Unfortunately while following a returning group of gatherers they manage to wreck their ship upon the coastal rocks, and  are forced to either negotiate with these secluded winter warriors, or find a way to breach their defenses and  carve a piece of the mist land for themselves.

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The Land of the Living
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Silveressa's comment on 2010-12-22 04:28 PM


(forgot to vote)


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Urisk the Lonely
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-12 05:34 AM


With sub has good potential, and with an update to expand upon it, would be another unique sub for the fey collection. Like Scrasamax  said, what happened to make the fey such a coward? Is he a coward just to other creatures besides fey, or fey as well? (And if yes to both is there a different reason behind each?)


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War Cleaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-20 10:40 AM


Simple and brutal, a fun variation on the more traditional ax so many Dwarven characters equip themselves with.



A Regiment of soldiers trained in these would make for an interesting subdivision of a otherwise famous mercenary company as well.  "Calrissa's Cleavers" or the like.

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Mytrian, The Wise
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Silveressa's comment on 2010-12-21 04:48 PM


As others said, it could use some more fleshing out and reworded in places, perhaps reading the post out loud to yourself will help you catch the grammar errors such as "You know the true behind all the conspiracies,"



In general I've found characters are more appealing and memorable when they don't act "just like" any popular character from a novel or movie. Rather then suggest role playing the character like an already established one (in this case Gandalf) try to provide enough depth and  detail in your presentation they will be able to act like the character they just read about instead of imitating a different one.


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The City of Asylum
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-26 10:54 PM


A unique city and problem for characters to encounter. It can be a great place for a party to be tasked with infiltrating for the purpose of either retrieving a lost artifact or rescuing someone accidentally sent here. (assuming they aren't already infected by the insanity.)



Another interest possibility is that it's not the people that are insane but more an artifact or curse upon the area that's making them act insane. Trying to smuggle someone out to verify this could prove quite challenging, especially if the persons insanities are disruptive or extremely dangerous.


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Pouch of many (un) usefull things
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-24 03:47 PM


Another fun low powered magic item that may seem at first to be oh so much more. It promises to be a fun addition to my upcoming fantasy game, thanks for this!


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Muzzled Mouse
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 08:07 PM
Nasty and useful, perfect for planescape (where it would fit right in without any notice) or any post apocalypse setting.

Three additional uses:

-A nasty melee weapon.

Unmuzzled and possibly with the front legs freed, this could make for a nasty weapon to thrust at someone's face, or try to cram down their pants in a grappling situation.

-A surprisingly effective interrogation device.

Seriously, how many people are going to withhold information with one of these things threatening their private bits?

-A poor mans evening meal.

After the poor thing died from whatever causes, it could be then cooked and eaten in any number of ways by a starving and desperate thief. (though most probably a stew since it would provide the best nutritional value given it's withered body)


As far as the rats feces becoming a problem, as long as it's only fed (and watered) occasionally the creature wouldn't produce must waste at all. Provided one places a strategic hole at the rear end of the wrapping it wouldn't be a problem. Go to Comment
Muzzled Mouse
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-13 01:55 AM
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Niandra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-12-24 10:40 PM
An interesting creature, and definitely useful as the hired muscle or enforcer for a main villain.

I'm not so sure about her height of 6 feet though, since this would preclude her from wearing the skins of most people, especially women. (The average female human is around 5' 4.")

Still a nice solid sub, although a few plot hooks and a bit more development of her personality would help make the sub even better. 3/5 Go to Comment
Arwin Lightfoot
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-22 12:22 AM


Another NPC with potential, a pity it never was fully developed.



It'd be nice if any sub with a rating below 2.5 and over a year or so old was "up for grabs" by any who wanted to give it an overhaul.


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Charlie's Lucky Marble
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-13 11:56 PM


I nice fun artifact to have the party's squire or apprentice get their hands on, much liked. 


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The Ring Of Life
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-04-26 05:22 AM


This could wreck untold amounts of havoc on desert communities and those not used to a lush and verdant wilderness. A fun artifact to add if you wish to shake up your world a bit and change around the topography unexpectedly,


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Steam Gun
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-12-25 02:42 AM
An interesting and simple addition to any steampunk/high magic campaign, but fraught with enough weaknesses to prevent it from becoming too over powered.

Also Ria, umm... Not sure how to put this, but imagine the object being used in a similar manner to a belaying pin, or candle stick for the purpose of satisfying a womans desires for male company. Now imagine such a device being hollow and able to be filled with water then heated up to the approximate temperature of a living person rather then icy cold metal. Go to Comment
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