This agent has infiltrated close to a prominent member of the the enemies government, right down to full wedding and joint house mortgage. Unfortunately for her, genuine feeling of affection and the desire to enjoy a life of relative luxury have curbed her loyalty to her former employers; to say nothing of the child she will be giving birth to any week now. Go to Comment
This agent was discovered by their enemies a long time ago. which decided to use her as a pipeline for false information and other useless bits of propaganda they wish to feed to their enemies without them being suspect to it's credibility. So far the agent hasn't questioned her good fortunates and continues to faithfully route everything she discovers back to her people believing it to be utterly reliable. When the truth comes out she will likely find herself on the run, or accused of being a double agent. Go to Comment
A natural for this line of work, she has undergone all the necessary training and discipline to put her mind reading talents to good use for her homeland by scanning the thoughts of their rivals, giving them the power to ready a counter to their plans before they are even implemented. Unfortunately such power works both ways, and she is all too aware the distrust her own employers have of her; and their reluctance to ever welcome her among them after her mission is complete. Go to Comment
This agent exists only as a collection of electrons of electrons within the network, a literal Ghost in the machine. Either the creation of advanced artificial intelligence or an attempt at transferred intelligence gone wrong, this intelligent program can infiltrate all but the most well guarded networks, scanning and downloading top secret information in the blink of an eye. Go to Comment
This pair of lovers usually draws many confused and sometimes appalled stares given one of them looks like an animal although speaks in the same tongue as a their mate. Either the victim of a polymorph spell gone wrong, or a reincarnation scroll, one of these lovers no longer inhabits their original form, forced to dwell in the shape of an animal for the rest of their days, or until a cure can be found. Go to Comment
This pair of lovers are unknown siblings separated at birth. Only months after becoming lovers and consummating their marriage did they discover the shocking truth. Even after this realization they are still torn by their choices. Should this secret be left dead and buried while they stay together? Or should they go their separate ways despite the unpleasant rumors their sudden parting would cause?
This decision further complicated by the public knowledge of the couples first child being on the way. Go to Comment
This lover is a statue carved by a lonely person longing for love, and has recently been brought to life by either divine intervention, a accidental magic spell, or deliberate mischief. Now alive, this sculpture feels the affection the crafter invested within and seeks out their dear lover to make their dreams come true.. Go to Comment
Not bad for a first sub, perhaps going into a little bit more detail as to the evolution and mating habits of the creature, as well as any possible use an entrepreneurial adventurer might have for a young creature or the eggs. (I would imagine if they could be tamed and trained to act immediately upon an intruders presence these birds would make splendid guard animals.) Go to Comment
I like the changes a lot, it fleshes out the creature nicely and makes it more useful. (Still a few spelling errors though but they're pretty minor. (Much better than it;s first draft hence my vote is being recast higher.) Go to Comment
I've actually spawned this into a rather dark and grim short story taking place both before, and after the diary entry. I'll give this a touch up later on this week; about the same time I give Dr. Taidani his make over. Go to Comment
Without a doubt one of the best npc's I've came across in a long time. Like Misanpilgrim said, he would work well in a fantasy setting with a little adjustment and be every bit as unique and interesting. (if not more so.) Go to Comment
The thing is I pasted that in from notepad so I;m not sure why it;s doing that. Perhaps because I;'m using firefox instead of internet explorer? Any feedback on how to prevent that in the future would be much appreciated. Go to Comment
Aye, quite magical, but they've got no particular origin I've thought of yet, although that could make for an interesting adventure for a scholar pc or npc ;) (If one could determine it's origin one could perhaps find a more adaptable species to use for alchemical purposes.) Go to Comment
Swordbiters are parasites. They are long, thin and silver, and digest metal, somewhat like rust monsters, but smaller and more insidious. They resemble stick insects, but when they cling to metal they are very well camouflaged, and one can be biting your sword for a week before you notice it. They cannot be removed by hand, as they are very strong, but if the blade is inserted into fire they will leap off to escape the flames. Sometimes, old treasure hoards are infested with them, and the first glimpse you get of the "glittering" weapons is a pile of rusted swords encrusted with these thin silvery insects.