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30 Agents
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-15 12:09 AM
34-Virtual Agent

This agent exists only as a collection of electrons of electrons within the network, a literal Ghost in the machine. Either the creation of advanced artificial intelligence or an attempt at transferred intelligence gone wrong, this intelligent program can infiltrate all but the most well guarded networks, scanning and downloading top secret information in the blink of an eye. Go to Comment
30 Lovers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 05:55 PM
This entire submission is brimming with dozens of potential plot hooks and adventures either involving the character personally, or friends/relatives of theirs.

I would really love to see a quest surrounding this sub with people picking one (or more) of the lovers and posting adventure plots/ideas involving them. Go to Comment
30 Lovers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 05:59 PM
32 -Love Has Made Me Whole

This lover is a statue carved by a lonely person longing for love, and has recently been brought to life by either divine intervention, a accidental magic spell, or deliberate mischief. Now alive, this sculpture feels the affection the crafter invested within and seeks out their dear lover to make their dreams come true.. Go to Comment
30 Lovers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-15 12:01 AM
34-Gone Wild

This pair of lovers usually draws many confused and sometimes appalled stares given one of them looks like an animal although speaks in the same tongue as a their mate. Either the victim of a polymorph spell gone wrong, or a reincarnation scroll, one of these lovers no longer inhabits their original form, forced to dwell in the shape of an animal for the rest of their days, or until a cure can be found. Go to Comment
30 Lovers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 05:52 PM
31- In The Family Tree

This pair of lovers are unknown siblings separated at birth. Only months after becoming lovers and consummating their marriage did they discover the shocking truth. Even after this realization they are still torn by their choices. Should this secret be left dead and buried while they stay together? Or should they go their separate ways despite the unpleasant rumors their sudden parting would cause?

This decision further complicated by the public knowledge of the couples first child being on the way. Go to Comment
Observer Beetles
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 04:40 PM
Very interesting, However I'm not sure about the "millions" of them part since they would imbalance the local ecology by sheer weight of numbers and food supply requirements.

A little detail behind it's creation would be nice, (by chance evolution, alchemical experimentation, or divine intervention)

Also how do they breed? Or do they just magically multiply?

(On a side note touch up the spelling/punctuation/ formatting a little bit and bold the Adventure Hooks word and it'll look a lot better.) Go to Comment
Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 01:25 PM
Not bad for a first sub, perhaps going into a little bit more detail as to the evolution and mating habits of the creature, as well as any possible use an entrepreneurial adventurer might have for a young creature or the eggs. (I would imagine if they could be tamed and trained to act immediately upon an intruders presence these birds would make splendid guard animals.) Go to Comment
Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 05:37 PM
I like the changes a lot, it fleshes out the creature nicely and makes it more useful. (Still a few spelling errors though but they're pretty minor. (Much better than it;s first draft hence my vote is being recast higher.) Go to Comment
Chasers
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 08:20 PM
I've actually spawned this into a rather dark and grim short story taking place both before, and after the diary entry. I'll give this a touch up later on this week; about the same time I give Dr. Taidani his make over. Go to Comment
Chasers
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-05 06:50 PM
That;s for the useful feedback everyone, I'll keep it in mind when I give this piece an overhaul later on. :) Go to Comment
Creeping Wax
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-03 09:04 PM
Nasty stuff, reminds me a lot of a burning wax artifact from vampire the masquerade. I like the additional details you put in the back ground history and plot ideas. Go to Comment
The Grey Skull
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-02 03:23 PM
Without a doubt one of the best npc's I've came across in a long time. Like Misanpilgrim said, he would work well in a fantasy setting with a little adjustment and be every bit as unique and interesting. (if not more so.) Go to Comment
Bridgeton Asylum
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-03 10:31 PM
Updated: Fixed the text formatting errors. Go to Comment
Bridgeton Asylum
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-04-29 09:14 PM
Updated: Added in a extra half page of content. Go to Comment
Bridgeton Asylum
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-02 03:29 PM
The thing is I pasted that in from notepad so I;m not sure why it;s doing that. Perhaps because I;'m using firefox instead of internet explorer? Any feedback on how to prevent that in the future would be much appreciated. Go to Comment
Candle Beetles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-04-30 11:48 PM
Aye, quite magical, but they've got no particular origin I've thought of yet, although that could make for an interesting adventure for a scholar pc or npc ;) (If one could determine it's origin one could perhaps find a more adaptable species to use for alchemical purposes.) Go to Comment
Candle Beetles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-02 03:36 PM
Aye as light, or more as a improvised fire bomb attack.. A canny adventurer could find a relatively easy way to trap a few of them in a bag without too much trouble. Go to Comment
Candle Beetles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-02 03:43 PM
Updated: Updated with details on how these beetles can be used offensively by a savvy (or desperate) adventurer. Go to Comment
Scalies
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-04 02:41 PM
Like I said in my previous post, they are a mutation caused by whatever biological/nuclear (or magical) weapons were used to make your favorite post apocalypse setting. So while they were not naturally created by the process of evolution, they have mutated and adapted to their environment and now are capable of successfully breeding. Go to Comment
Scalies
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-04-29 08:32 PM
Updated: Clarified a few small details. Go to Comment
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