A nice easy to use palce to drop into any fantasy setting, (or higher tech colony worlds with a little work)
This place is likely to make an appearance in my Serenity campaign after some minor modifications.
Very thought provoking and makes the typhical "holy pool" a lot more interesting. The tech option for sci-fi worlds is a ncie touch and gives it broader usage, excellent sub!
Beautiful, and inspirational all at once. This will make a fine bedtime story for the next door neighbors kids next time I babysit them. Definitely worthy of a 5/5 , it's a pity I missed this one during it's initial release!
A handy low beduget weapon that I can readily see employed by rebels fighting with minimal supplies. It would also fit well in the warzone/mutant chronicles sci-fi rpg setting due to the low tech level of the majority of weaponry there.
One thing to bear in mind however is a traditional modern space shuttle is essentially a flying brick upon atmosphere reentry and doesn't so much "glide" as "fall out fo the sky under minimal pilot control" so keeping one in the air for hours would prove rather difficult without altering the main design a fair bit. (To be more reminiscent of the WWII style glider, i.e something with a large wing span and surface area) Additionally one could also attach solar panels and a cheap electric driven prop to the rear (that can be remotely detached if desired) to give it added flight time and distance.
Fun and unique, he should work out well my next sci-fi campaign. Perhaps adding in a few plot hooks to the sub would help it really stand out?
It seem GC ate my previous commentary, so let me try this again:
An exhaustive amount of information and very in depth plot that is quite memorable; I particularly like the link backs in the intro to other subs, it makes for a convenient reference for the reader.
However I do find the amount of depth here to be a little rigid and difficult to easily work into an already established campaign setting without it feeling like it was shoehorned in somewhat.
Adding in an additional section with plot hooks and adventure concepts, as well as some suggestions on how to include this faith/legend into an existing fantasy world would complete the piece for me, and give it that last bit of "ready to use" feeling it seems to lack for me.
Excellent city, and can work just as well as a low tech frontier city for a space faring game. A little extra detail of prominant NPC's and notable businesses would make this even more useful.
An interesting piece for the 1st half, toss in some line breaks on the second half and I'll gladly finish with some useful feedback and a vote :)
Wonderfully ghouslish addition to the necromancer spell listings, and finding the wreckage of this nasty ship could make for a stomach churning encounter on some remote island (especially if the creator is still lurking near by.
An impressive entry, very complete and a useful addition to fantasy worlds history (especially for oriental games)
It's hard to say anything that hasn't already been echoed by others, except that this is one of my favorite subs, and I really wish I'd found it earlier :)
A fun sub, and creative challenge. One could adapt this to a high tech setting as well with little difficulty. (any setting with holo-deck style technology or nano machine fabricators could replicate the magical effect easily enough.
On a side note the second image link isn't working either. Perhaps try http://photobucket.com
I'd enjoy seeing this campaign detailed as a sub of its own someday.
NPCs (Scenario Based) (Political)
A nice way to enhance an otherwise nondescript part of the cities and make for a refreshign change. Plot hooks #2 & 3 would fit perfectly into a WFrp campaign, and #1 can make for a nice (temporary?) animal companion for a rogue or other street dweller.
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