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Attack on Titan/Tales of Symphonia Campaign Hybrid
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-23 12:43 AM


It's hard to add to the excellent points Wolf and Moon and already made, but one thing sticks out in my mind here.



I've devised a map with 15 points of interest (label with x's and the corresponding number). Certain x's need to be completed to be able to enter the next part of the dungeon.


If you mention a map in your sub, then include the map for the readers. Nothing is more useless than a reference to a non existing part of the sub, it makes the idea of zero value to the reader and will only serve to frustrate them when they look in vain for the non existent map.



I concur whole heartedly with Moonhunter to put this back in your working folder and give it a complete overhaul, it has potential, but not in its current rough draft format.

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A Summers Freeze
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-07 10:06 PM
Update: Added in some formatting changes as per Muro's suggestion. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-07 10:13 PM
excellent idea, and formatted thusly Now all the read to player text is boxed, should make it easier if someone actually wanted to run this adventure. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-19 08:30 PM
Thanks,

I appreciate you breaking down how you determined the over all rating, it's neat to see the thought process behind it. :) Go to Comment
The Headless Motorcycle Man
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-03 08:01 PM
It'd make for a decent adventure for the Supernatural setting, there was actually a similar episode during the first of second season of the tv show dealing with two ghosts endlessly fighting one another. Go to Comment
Mistflowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-28 09:08 AM
I'm seeing stuff like the following:

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Which in the middle of a sub in multiple places is an unwanted mess, removing it would be most appreciated, and I shall give it a vote and comment after it's been cleaned up. Go to Comment
Queen Nekcrola the 47th (a Tale of Mysantia)
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-05 11:41 PM
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Queen Nekcrola the 47th (a Tale of Mysantia)
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-28 09:36 AM
This certainly would feel at home in a module form the 80's, and captures the same slightly dry yet compelling and informative style that was the norm in those old school modules

A few more plot hooks and perhaps a role playing pointers bit might finish rounding her out, but as she stands she's a classic old school NPC that can figure prominently as either a patron of main antagonist of a campaign, nicely done!

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Legacy, Part III - Delta Company
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-23 03:27 AM
I enjoyed seeing the ending to this fun trilogy, and really loved the extra depth it added to the DF setting as a whole. Go to Comment
Legacy, Part II - Bloody
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-23 03:20 AM
Love part 2 every bit as much as part one, perhaps your finest trilogy of subs yet :) Go to Comment
Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-10 05:35 PM
Fun read so far, I like seeing more of the Delta Factor setting through vignettes like this, keep up the great work :) Go to Comment
H.M.A.A.
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-09 08:24 PM
Fun and effective for Shadowrun, just the kind of thing a basic thug would use to help equal up to a street sam or physical adept in close quarter brawl. Go to Comment
30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-09 07:33 PM
Well worth a 5, these are some great races that fit well in nearly any sci-fi setting! Go to Comment
30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-09-02 11:28 PM
Excellent list, perfect for the parties unexpected foray into the ocean and coast areas, easily adapted in part for more high tech games like Bule Planet as well. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-08-22 10:16 PM
Handy, and describe most Shadowrun or Leverage groups quite well, (and supers teams to a certain extent) and can be a handy article to present to players when writing up characters to give everyone an idea of what role in the team they wish to fulfill and manage expectations. Go to Comment
The Soldier and the Princess
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-07-29 10:00 PM
A touch if tragic tale, works great for a bard to recount at the tavern some eve, nicely done! Go to Comment
The Omen
Plots  (Hired)   (Encounter)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-06-10 10:45 AM
A fun concept, with plenty of directions the Gm can run with it, making it harder for players to easily guess who (or what) is behind the symbols, or even if they are the cause of the incidents and aren't some preventative wards keeping things from escalating to wide spread death. Go to Comment
Courtesan's secret weapon
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-06-06 03:16 PM
A neat dress, and could prove especially handy for a bard or thespian. Go to Comment
The Thing that Sat Alone in the Dark
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-05-29 04:20 PM


Interesting weapon, if grossly over powered for actual use as a PC owned weapon in most campaigns, it would be suitably nasty in the hands of a villain.



As a legendary weapon lost to the ages or the rumored weapon of a newly rising warlord it could serve to add nicely to the legend and myths of the setting, Or perhaps a campaign focused around a group of adventurers seeking to dispose of the axe once and for all, (Ala The One Ring) with numerous would be heroes and tyrants after the weapon for their own ends.



I am curious though if using the weapon in the rain or other wet environment would still invoke the wielder killing effect.



Edit: There is also the small logic fault of the weapon being immersed underwater in the lake bed so technically it should have automatically killed the man who grasped it for retrieval. :P (Yes I'm nitpicking in jest, but I'm sure we all know of at least one player that would be sure to challenge the bard/GMS tale about the weapon when it came to that bit.)

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The Vanishing Diner
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-05-28 08:25 PM
Sounds like the intro to a Supernatural adventure, could use a bit more fleshing out however. :) Go to Comment
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