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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-01-13 11:55 PM
A Moonhunter advice page is always relevant. HoH'd for fresh eyes! Now, come back to us, Moon! Go to Comment
Dead Pepper
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-10-29 12:12 PM
Wow, nice :D Just make sure your character doesnt find these in the middle of a forest and try to cook and eat one.

" granting greatly reduced reaction times"

Is this supposed to be increased reaction times?

Otherwise, an interesting item.

4/5 Go to Comment
Longbows
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-10-24 08:05 PM
Back the the glass thing: Glass can be prominent in Mojena, as there is plenty of sand to melt at the coastlines, whereas metals are extremely rare. As a result, the Mojenians could, using their herbal skills, create acids and drugs (not poisons, if they are hunting ) in hollowed glass tubes, which would penetrate, then shatter. Would also be nasty in skirmishes between each other. Go to Comment
Pure Scent
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-10-12 09:52 PM
Aaah, there it is! Relatively simple, but a nice effect. Go to Comment
Gem of Xzar
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2007-01-22 07:49 PM
I agree with Moonhunter's assessment - I believe it would be a little to powerful for use in a conventional roleplay, but perhaps a mention in a myth could spur all sorts of side quests. If anything, i'd say it's a campaign starter. Go to Comment
Heart of the Black Worm
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-08-09 10:28 PM
EEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww! 4/5 Go to Comment
Aspect Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-08-10 09:45 AM
No, no and no, Mourngrymn :P

The enchantment lasts for millenia - it will not fade over time, and one that has been lost for thousands of years and found again can be used. it doesn't get 'used up' after someone has been changed and can be used again on another person in future as many times as wished.

If you want the 'technical' stuff behind it, it doesn't inject the wearer with the creature as such - it actually alters the DNA of the wearer to gain the beast-like attributes (Think spiderman, if you must. =/ ) so it doesn't use up anything, just alters things :P If you get what I mean. Go to Comment
Aspect Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-08-11 10:38 AM
In answer to Moons question of why people would make them, I'll steal Scrasamax's view and also expand on it :P

- Aspect stones were around almost from the beginning of written history, and as such this form of magic was the first of its kind.

- The permanency of the Aspect stones makes them valuable: They can lie around for millenia and still be as potent as when they were first created. Additionally, Non-magic users can wear them for the same effect.

- Now, shapeshifting as I understand it (This is just my view, mind you.), involves magically altering ones form to gain the abilities of something which isn't naturally a part of them. The aspect stones, on the other hand, ingrain the very bieng of another creature into them, essentially MAKING those abilities a permanent part of them... if you understand my meaning. The result is basically the traits and the knowledge on how to use those traits. Instinct.

And the over-excessiveness on the crafting process is as you said, moon - to make the item a rare thing. Amongst other things, a mage capable of creating a stone is a symbol of power and dedication. These are powerful pieces of arcanery, and are meant to be rare and forboding to those who know what they are.

But enough of my rambling! Appreciate the comments. Go to Comment
Emhyr's Puzzle
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-08-09 10:53 AM
Shadoweagle likes the cruel potential this has.

This is not a great magical item with an intricate background simply because it does not NEED to be a great magical item with an intricate background. A simple story which is complete in itself, and a nice item to boot. 5/5 Go to Comment
Tae Nijong, the Grasping Claw
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-07-31 07:15 PM
Simplicity itself! Give me a good ol' severed hand over a magical artefact with all those new-fangled lights and special effects, anyday!

*Cue Adams Family Soundtrack*

4/5 Go to Comment
The Tale of Taewoo Kin
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-07-31 07:26 PM
Contrary to Monuments post, I find this great - not as a roleplay in itself, but merely as a side-track in a roleplay - A scene. If your adventurers are just travelling through to get to some other destination, they have the choice of staying to investigate this murder, or just spending the night and moving on (Adventurers aren't obligated to solve EVERYTHING, after all!). Advantages of finishing this "Quest", if you will, is that they may come into posession of their own Grasping hand, which could serve them well in future.

If they choose not to solve this mystery? Well, if they come back after their adventures, they may find half the town murdered by the "Kin Strangler".
4/5 For an adaptable plot. Go to Comment
The Dark Lantern
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-13 09:53 AM
Ye gads! You stole my idea! Good work scras ;) Go to Comment
Judgment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-31 12:49 AM
First of all, i'd like to say Congrats on yer first post, and welcome to the citadel, Knight. Now! On to the item.

In terms of spelling and grammar, not too bad - perhaps you should read over some of the things you write to make sure it fits, but all in all, it's not bad.

I agree completely with Moonhunters no.2 point - I enjoyed reading of the battle between the two great powers, and seeing Corus's own sword turn against him. This is a great historical item with a mythological background - I could see drunken 'heros' talking about it in taverns. But this is never the weapon that could ever be wielded by a player, or their enemies. The sword should always be there, but there should never be a chosen one. It's nice as a physical aid to a religion, perhaps.

Now, there IS an interesting 'curse' to the weapon that you could play on: Judgement doesn't care who is wielding it - it judges both sides of the party. If in the first two instances a 'hero' uses that sword and is found on the 'innocent' side, he might start getting a bit cocky. If he then is so arrogant as to think that he could mow through a third enemy when he could easily spare that creatures life and go around it without it knowing, the judgement might find the hero as a sinner. And since it is so powerful, there is no 'second chances' in this. You make the wrong choice, you die. The end.

So anyway, definitely too powerful, but it shows some promise, nonetheless.

2/5 Go to Comment
Clef Cramoisi
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-16 10:37 PM
See, this is the type of evil I dwell around! Not evil for evils sake, but beyond the grasps of good and evil, for KNOWLEDGE's sake!

5/5 Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-14 01:40 AM
Okey then. Like the backstory, like the power, and the thought of the humiliation such emotions might give. Like the fact that the demons can still choose to be cruel and evil. What don't I like about this item?
not too much. :)

One question I have though - how long will they think like a human? I mean, a simple 3-tap and BAM! They have emotions for eternity seems a bit too powerful to me. Perhaps the feelings wear off after a few days? weeks? months? years?

One thing I will bring up - mainly because others will if I don't - is that you should run your posts through a spellchecker before you submit it. The fact that you can spell Precarious and Lecherous, yet mispell plague and impossible suggests your posting was a bit rushed.

Anywho - nicely done all-round. I'm tossed between a 4 and a 5, but in the end, I give it
4/5. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-14 03:16 AM
Aah, nice. It means there is limitations, but a whole new character can be made from a repentant demon, since they will remain emotive forever. Go to Comment
Dead Silk
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-10 01:45 AM
Inspired partly, by reading about "Necrotising Arachnidism". This thread contains information about it: http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=2235 Go to Comment
Dead Silk
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-14 10:55 PM
The answer to that, Dragon lord, is in the first sentence:
"Splayed across the table in the center of the mourning room, lay the corpse of Alarimis - the great mage of Mulgar's tower."

This plague was exhumed from the corpse of a mage, and as such, it only effects magi.

Thanks for the comments, all :) Go to Comment
Dead Silk
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-16 11:37 PM
Or contimaninate food or a glass of wine with a single thread ;) They don't even have to swallow it, just get it in their mouth and swill it around. Go to Comment
The Subtle Knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-08 05:01 PM
Ok, I like the dull and lifeless form of the non-wielded knife. I like that quite a bit, actually. As though the knife has the latent ability, but requires the lifeforce of a certain human to activate it. It would also be good for smuggling it by those who could detect magic. I may even use that thought, someday.

Apart from that, I don't really like it at all.

Edged weapons which can cut through anything are overdone and overpowerful.
Daggers to cut through dimensions are also done a bit, though not quite as often.

Where did the dagger come from? Why is it magical? How does the knife-bearer lose his finger and thumb when he becomes it?

Anywho. I'd give this a 2.5, but I don't think its quite worth a 3, so I voted a 2/5. Go to Comment
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