No worries, Gossamer - I have a nasty habit of not re-reading my subs for grammar/spelling.
I meant Lashing, though Latching can be substituted too. Lashing can mean to beat or strike something, but it can also mean to bind, fasten or tie (Such as lashing ropes together). I am trying to use some creative license to suggest the tendrils are lashing around and onto the other shadow, thus holding him in place.
And yes, due to my haste I misused apostrophes in those particular instances. The lecture was not necessary as I am aware of the particular use of such things, in spite of my error, but I shall take it in stride.
I will mention though, that being too meticulous about pointing out and correcting every single error you see may end up rubbing people the wrong way and tarnishing your own reputation, no matter how noble your intentions.
By all means, point out glaring mistakes, but if someone makes one or two minor errors in an otherwise solid writeup, it's usually a good idea to just let it slide.
Though I am not offended personally, others may be - pride is a dangerous thing :p Go to Comment
As Cheka's comment goes - Robin hood, and the Yellow Tails be his merry men!
Nevertheless, Valus and the Yellow Tails can be useful; They could be introduced to the PC's as simple thieves; and even start of robbing the PC's. However as the game progresses, perhaps the PC's will end up understanding Valus's motives, and may even end up helping him out for a raid! Valus could become an invaluable ally for down the track. Go to Comment
It's a place to stay - and seems like little else. Even though I know it's a 100 word sub it seems to be very much lacking in uniqueness - It can be used by GM's, sure, but it's nothing they couldn't conjure up on the fly in a half a minute anyway. Sorry Kassy, this one doesn't do it for me :( Go to Comment
i already have a few thoughts about expanding this, Moon :) Perhaps in the coming week or two i'll beef it up.
I just wanted to get something out because I feel like I haven't managed to put anything up in too long! the 100-challenge is a good way to do that! Go to Comment
Nice! This scroll will be useful if a GM has some basic information to give to PC's and wants various townsfolk to have different versions (with variable truth) of the tale. The PC's will have to work out the truth from the exaggeration. Go to Comment
"There've been more wolves than usual along the old path lately; you should probably only travel along there in the daytime! It's like there's something out there in the woods driving them mad."
Rumour 1: "Aye, travel not the old path m'lad! There be a crazed ranger out there, driven mad by the woods. They say he runs wit' a pack of giant wolves and preys on travellers at night for their supplies! Jimmey done seen 'em just th' other week an' he says the man's eyes glowed red an' he wore the hide of humans to pay them back for skinnin' the wolves!"
Rumour 2: "Out on the old path? Yeah, I heard that when the night is bright with the full moon, a fey beast; half wolf, half man stalks the road. They say there's an ancient keep somewhere in the woods near that path, and a great king of ages past hunted down hundreds of wolves for sport. It is said a dryad cursed the king, turning him into a wolf - his own men hunted him down and killed him. Now, when the moon is full his spirit returns and stalks travellers." Go to Comment
Okay, this doesn't have to be used in a game-destroying way if you're clever about it. So the parchment has to be vanished before the wish is granted. This could take hours, days, months - it's not specified.
And if the parchment disappears (perhaps only returns in a century meaning one wish per lifetime of the PC's) this could create an interesting guarding/protective plotline somewhat reminiscent of Dragonball: Imagine putting in the following rules -
- It can only be used once before it's exhausted for this lifetime and everyone wants it.
- The box needs to be worn for one week.
- various interested 'parties' are interested in the box
You could create a scenario out of this where the PC's (or an NPC with the PC's if you want to guarantee the right wish is made) need to make a desperate, life-saving or critical wish, but they need to wear the box for a week, out in the open. They need to defend the wearer against evil or selfish beings for as long as it takes for the wish to come true. Mob bosses would want it, doomsday cults have been waiting for decades for the parchment to re-appear, Desperate kings on the brink of war come to beg the players to use the box to save their kingdom and so on!
And perhaps after a few days the box is lost, destroyed or stolen, or the wish squandered. There is only two chances left; two more boxes exist, but now the PC's need to travel to X location and do Y adventurous deeds to collect it.
A cave system of vegetation is really cool; it paints a vivid image in the mind.
I was going to comment that hermits would try and live forever inside it, and then halfway through the sub you mentioned that! :D
I have an interesting question for you, Elbin: If the PC's were being chased by undead horrors and they took refuge in the Everlive Dungeon, what would happen to the zombies which followed? Would they remain undead, turn Back to the living, or be crushed into nothing by the positive energies of the seed? Maybe if the undead was 'fresh' enough (turned to undeath recently) it could bring them back to life. Perhaps we have found a cure for undeath in the everlife seed!
Possible plotlings which come to mind:
- An alchemist/scholar/mage would like to study to everlife seed to see if there is any way the powers can be tapped into (to create potions to extend life or cure diseases etc.) and they require an escort to the centre of the dungeon. Whether or not it CAN be tapped into is at the discretion of the GM, of course.
- A PC has been turned into a ravenous zombie! The other adventurers have 48 hours to bring him to an everlife dungeon that he may be returned to life! But transporting a zombie is no easy task! Not only is the zombie going to try and kill the PC's, but any superstitious villages that they pass through would likely want to burn him as well! Go to Comment
It would be cooler if the mosquitoes effects were the same as the flower itself, as it would make for an interesting plotline:
After a particularly rainy season, the residents of the swampy town have suddenly been cursed! For no apparent reason, people of the town come down with crazed fear; sometimes a few dozen people in a single day! They either lock themselves away in fear,barricading the doors or flee into the swamp, screaming about imagined horrors Nobody seems to be safe from the curse and it is causing widespread panic!
The pcs have come to investigate, but even they are not immune it seems, especially when they go into the soggy wilderness around the town!
The solution, once they figure out the mosquitos are the problem, is one of three things: find a way to kill the mozzies, raze the entire area of the flower ( so the mosquitoes can't carry it anymore) or find a vaccination by studying the flowers themselves. Go to Comment
Good stuff Val - My favourite is definitely the ink! It's the odd one out in a series of 'wearable' or 'wieldable' objects. Probably an excellent, material to use to create some kind of demonic summoning circle out of, too, since it seems to draw demons to it. Go to Comment
How do other dwarves regard the sappers? These people are dishonorable tricksters AND they shave their traditional beards off - I think they would be seen as scum to the general populace. Perhaps some sappers turn to this life because they are already hated by their peoples, while others lose their earned respect in society by becoming one.
Perhaps some criminals are approached by the military in prison and are offered a 'second chance' at freedom by becoming a sapper for them; shaving their beards and changing their appearance gives them a new identity in their home.
This is a fun item, and with plenty of use! If a PC was willing to smash his teeth out he could keep these in their place. Next time he was put behind bars, he could eat his way out! They could be used to get through walls if you're patient enough (and can open your jaws wide enough to get some good starter bites!) Also good to get rid of incriminating things; Eat the dagger you just used to assassinate that councilman!
In fact, there are so many uses to this item!
- chew through chains
- 'beaver' down some trees for construction
- Eat bone or wood for survival when no other food sources are around
- It it molds things as though they were wax consistency, they could be used to flatten iron for specific uses by chewing on it.
The list goes on!
Also, it seems to have all the necessary information for a 100 word sub. Nice one, Val. Go to Comment
Ngama Ngama is a forgotten devil of an ancient Aztecian origin. She stands for deceit and agony. The only traces of information that can be found of her lie on dusty tomb walls which, using cryptic pictographs, suggest that the method of summoning her is to kidnap a virgin and take her to a specific tomb within the heart of a sweltering forest. In a ritual room deep within this tomb, one must tie brambled vines to the virgin's wrists, and tie those vines to elevated hooks on a particular bloodied wall. The ritual then demands that the virgin's wrists and ankles be nailed to the wall using spikes of iron. Once the still-living woman is bound properly, she must be sealed, undisturbed within the tomb for at least one full moon cycle. If the ritual room is unsealed early, the hopeful summoner will only find the woman, dead upon the wall. If the tomb is opened after the alloted time, they will find that the woman still appears to be alive. But once light is brought over to the wall, it will become evident that it is not the woman there at all - instead, it is Ngama Ngama.
Ngama Ngama appears as an animated, dessicated female corpse. She retains some basic features of the virgin who was restrained previously. In accordance to the ritual, she will be suspended on a wall within the tomb, brambled vines and iron spikes holding her in place. In addition, a plethora of iron spikes of various size and shape will also somehow have found themselves through her body and limbs. A black, viscous tar will seem to be sweating out of Ngama Ngama's pores, as well as bleeding generously out of her mouth, nostrils, ears and eyes, and her breath comes and goes in rasping, ragged gulps. Her voice is even more broken and akin to a dying old crone, sly and full of contempt.
Ngama Ngama is a wretched devil, even as devils go. If someone enters the ritual room, she will use all the guile and trickery she can to get anyone to cut her free. "You want my power, manling? But of course - just free my hand that I may lay it on you..." "Manling... I will grant you my blessing if you but cut free these brambles - they pain me so...!" "Pull me free, manling! I can lead you to a hidden reliquary of wealth in this tomb if you but let me out!"
Setting her free will be sheer folly - as soon as any of her bindings are cut or spikes removed, she will be able to pull the rest of her body free and attack anyone relentlessly, biting and scratching with unholy strength and fervor.
A wiser individual will see through her ruse, and refuse to free her. She will try everything from begging, to bribing, to threatening someone to unleash her, but once she sees that they remain steadfast, she will give in. Ngama Ngama will then offer the clever person her boon. "I see you are above the others, manling. Very well, would you like my gift?" "I concede defeat, manling. You may but say the word and my boon is yours to own."
But 'ware, for it is folly also to accept this. Ngama Ngama's boon is in fact a horrific curse! She is a beast of both agony and deceit, and her curse is two-fold. Firstly, at the end of each cycle of the moon, when it is new and dark in the sky, the victim feels the pain of a thousand iron nails stabbing through his or her skin. About once a month they become enfevered and irrational, and blood and black tar bleed from their pores. This is not fatal but it is debilitating. In addition, Ngama Ngama also bestows them the curse of deceit; but not in a beneficial way. Anyone interacting with the cursed person will naturally be less inclined to trust them - thinking they are lying or twisting their words, even when they are being genuine.
The cleverest individual will become aware after listening to her trickery that Ngama Ngama is not a devil to be bargained with. They must refuse all of her offers and ignore all threats.
Ngama Ngama is not without use, however. She is knowledgeable on all deviltry, and knows many tricks, techniques and importantly; weaknesses, of other devils which may be summoned. She is best use as a font of information for OTHER devil callings.
Once the tomb is open and unsealed, Ngama Ngama will survive for one lunar cycle until she dies. If the tomb is not opened once summoning her, she will remain locked in there indefinitely. Even if she is freed, she will only survive one lunar cycle, but for that cycle she will wreak havoc on any civilisation nearby. Running a blade through her tar-filled heart will send her back to her own plane of existence, and kill the virgin.
rolepalying Note: Players do not necessarily have to SUMMON Ngama Ngama. Why not have her tied up to a room in one of your typical dungeon runs - summoned centuries ago but not returned to. You don't even have to give the players a heads-up or backstory. Just toss it in there to flavour up a dungeon and see how they handle it! She may try and trick them into being a torture victim to get them to set her free, or offer them some power...