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30 Hidden Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-02 04:47 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
MOONQUAKE!!!!(A tale of Mysantia)
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-01 08:09 PM
This is certainly gonzo, I am not sure if I should like it, or be a little grossed out by it. I think that is a hallmark of some good gonzo material.

The AI business is a little squick, personally I think I would make it something else, or move it into an abstract, because the thought of a group of PCs hauling around a few buckets of space whale knuckle babies is a tad more than I want to try to run in a game.

It's right there on the line of hilarious and horrible.

I would make sure one of the PCs was basically Mark Wahlburg Go to Comment
Castle, a supervillian
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-02 04:55 PM
I'm not sure I understand his switching places, is his mind/spirit/anima body hopping, allowing him to possess people and then do what he wants with their body and his skill set? Are they transferred to his body for the duration, or are they repressed while he skin-rides them? Does his body lay comatose if they don't? What are the limits of this ability, and can other resist it?

What is his villainous motivation? What does he want from the world, did it wrong it, or does he merely disprove of it? Does he have a master plan?

On a more basic level, he is incredibly average, brown hair and blue eyes, WASP, marine, and that's all we know about him. I want to know more, I want some sort of insight into Castle to know who he is and what he wants. We don't know what he cares about, what he looks like, if he has any mannerisms, any calling cards or hallmarks that someone on his trail would be able to recognize.

Lots of potential, but lots of questions too.
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Spellreaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:17 PM
I like! It opens the door to a whole new version of magic. Spellhunters can equip gear like this, that lets them see spells. They hunt rogue spells, or work teamwork style to bring down powerful enchanters and magic creatures.

NICE Go to Comment
7 Types of Rulers
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 06:49 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Living Spells(as Monsters)
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 06:52 AM
This is out there, and didn't know what to make of it honestly. Some of these are just strange but others are fascinating. Do exoect for me to grab one and fledge it out into a full stand alone submissiom. Go to Comment
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-30 07:41 PM
Some of these are very interesting, some could be fleshed out. Otherwise a decent submission. Go to Comment
Intersectionality and Protoculture
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-26 09:17 AM
Instrumentality Go to Comment
30 Lawyers
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:44 PM
It's solid Go to Comment
Greater Adventuring Kharmic Line
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:32 PM
A very meta concept, I like the notion of there being multiple kharmic lines, and the expression of the PC party to be the 3d expression of a 4d entity. Go to Comment
30 Soldiers
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 11:24 PM
A solid 30. They are usable, but very much by the book. Go to Comment
Blind Spot
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 11:20 PM
Not bad, I enjoyed reading it, but the pace was rushed, when some sections of the story would have benefited from the pace falling to a crawl, showing the mage's waiting game before fighting and killing the demon. Go to Comment
Endings
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 10:59 AM
It is a fantastic homage to my insanity, and Aramax feeding my muse crank and crystal meth.

He left out the part where I was killed by my publisher before I could release my manifesto of despair Go to Comment
30 Chefs
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-28 08:31 AM
A solid 30, and good use of other subs in making this. Like Aramax said, I was expecting this to be played up for comedy, but this is pretty damn good. Go to Comment
30 Bouncers
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-26 03:10 PM
A fantastic 30 Cheka, a few are similar, but you are going to have similarly built and oriented people taking the bouncer job. I particularly liked the Crimp, the hangman, and the smattering of English colloquialisms throughout, gave it a splendid read. Go to Comment
Sister Karnage
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 05:59 PM
That's pretty gonzo Go to Comment
30 Problems With Swords
Articles  (Scenario)   (Citadel Help)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-22 05:13 PM
Excellent submission, helps give some character to swords, which can honestly get lost in a sea of Longsword +1 and a gabbleygook jumble of letters for a name.

Thank you Cheka Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 09:05 AM
Val is correct, I intended to make a fast and dirty 30 Lovecraftian fellows sub, the Bastians got too long and demanded its own sub. Need to trim the 30 references out. Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 09:06 AM
Also went with the slightly more awkward Bastians instead of the easier Bastet because I want to keep the two separate. Bastians are lovecraftian aliens, bastet are werecats Go to Comment
30 reasons why Magic is mainly used for evil
Articles  (Scenario)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-16 03:18 PM
Really nice list Cheka. I particularly like the Disney aspect, can't run a proper kingdom with daughters impregnated by kisses, the royal guards breaking out into song and dance routines, and everything from the rats to the cupboards suddenly having voices and faces Go to Comment
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