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Boots Too Fine for the Earth
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-28 11:14 AM
I think that the story is superb, the stuff that makes for good in game myths, this young girl could later go on to great things, etc etc and I could pronounce all of the names in the post. In that, it would be easy to change the names to something else to integrate this tale, and the attached boots into almost any game setting. Go to Comment
Winter in the Lost Lands
Plots  (Travel)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-24 01:11 PM
This would be a fine post without Mes, the dangers of winter travel, moving a caravan through deep snow, and dealing with the predators that haunt the white wastes. Mes himself seems completely 1 dimensional, and I thik actually detracts from the piece as a whole. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-09-12 11:52 PM
Lancid is. Lancid does. Lancid cares not. Lancid is boring.

2/5 Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 03:49 AM
Updated: Updated: fixed special characters and replaced presumed quotation marks with italics. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 03:50 AM
I love the name and the concept is novel. Go to Comment
Cloak of Wailing Misery
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-08-23 04:08 AM
The first comment that comes to mind is what would happen if the cloak was put on a dead body? Would that be enough to instigate the magic, or would it just be a magic cloak on a cadaver? Short and sweet too. Go to Comment
Lady Joya
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-12 10:59 AM
Not your typical brooding malevolent hateful because its cool type of ancient vampire. Nicely done. Go to Comment
Tourniquet Tunic
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-01 10:47 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 02:24 PM
protect the village from the greedy wizard... even Callista flockhart has more meat on her bones than this. Go to Comment
Glacier Mail
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 02:11 PM
As I commented on the Frost Thorn, this item seems as much artistic as it does a functional magical item. Go to Comment
Frost Thorn
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 02:08 PM
While the wording (bracer vs. bracelet) can be a little nit-picky, I think this is a good item since it definately has an artistic value to it, rather than meandering over into rune etched, glowing sigils sort of thing. I would imagine that the Frost Thorn would be quite the eye-turner even when it wasnt a frozen weapon. Go to Comment
Celsia Frostblossom
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 02:14 PM
Great character, motivation, backstory, the whole works. I like how she didnt start out looking for vengeance, or to increase her magical power, but simlpy went looking for the fairies on the glacier. I think she could also function as an anachronism since the glacial pace of her life has made her witness to many things that others wouldnt have noticed. I also like her name (Celsia, celsius) Go to Comment
Phoenix Talon
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-08-04 11:39 AM
I like the bit about the undead getting a second shot at what was taken from them Go to Comment
The Swords of Kanalith
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-10 04:06 PM
For the items themselves, I'd give this a generic 3, but the presentation was well done, and I really like both the backstory, and the names of the matched swords. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-11 12:19 AM
Voted most likely to become a liche by his graduating class, before he soul-devoured each of them. sometimes a sympathetic villian with understandable, human motives cannot compare with something that has become so divorced from human morality that it really no longer constitutes a human being. Go to Comment
Mask Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-25 12:40 AM
Ah, another original submission from the Old Citadel. My how our standards have changed since 2003.

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Circlet of Temporal Transmutation
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-16 09:01 PM
Alright, the twinning factor is certainly interesting but there has to be some sort of limiting factor to prevent the ubiquitous assault by millions upon millions of temporally manipulated berzerker warriors.

The whole area should be handlted judiciously and misuse should invoke the legendary Wrath of the DM! Go to Comment
The Assassin's Scroll
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-08-04 11:42 AM
Reminds me of Death Note, in the concept of writing a persons name causing them to die. It does need some sort of backstory to go with it, a sort of where it came from an why it exists sort of thing.

How precise does the name have to be, is the full name required, or birth name, or can it work with just a first name and specific intent? Could a wizard or noble avoid this spell by having a secret true name and the public name they go by? Go to Comment
Boots of The Fowl
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-06-21 09:12 AM
hahahahahahaha! Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 02:05 PM
The idea is solid, and the story of Rhian is not bad, though his name is repeated too many times. I like the basic premise of the idea, though the powers are too game specific. They won't work very well in a setting that doesnt use weapon speed or other factors. Go to Comment
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