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Urisk the Lonely
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-04-25 07:59 AM
Reading this again I am left with a question, why is Urisk such a coward? The Fae, being more manifestations of emotions and such, rather than biological entities, is Urisk the fear of sexual rejection? Or something of that nature? Bah! I need more coffee Go to Comment
Goup of Bandits
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 12:59 PM
Look what surfaced! I think this could be a good idea in a long term campaign as it turns a static setting into a dynamic one. The actions of the PC party should have consequences, ranging from being remembered as cheapskates at the armorers, to that kid at the brothel who looks alot like the PC mage... Go to Comment
The Nomads
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 10:00 AM
Why are they persecuted and so popularly hated? The hooks are okay, but this entire sub could use some beefing up on anabolic steroidal detailage. I like the last plot hook the best. Go to Comment
The Harp of The Unicorn
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 10:26 AM
nothing really unicorn-y here but not a bad idea. Could use some polish. Go to Comment
Drizzt
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-14 04:51 PM
AAAAHHHHHHHH!

It feels no pain, it can't be reasoned with, and it will never, ever stop! Go to Comment
Melvin
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-02 08:14 AM
There are some submissions that are just strange enough that thye refuse to let go of the imagination. I love the ambiguity of which is the magic user, and which is the familiar. Go to Comment
The Green Rose
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:14 PM
An interesting item that could be used in the average campaign. I would say it could use more detail, but I doubt that Siren365 ventures into the Citadel any longer. Go to Comment
Furious Tiger Talon
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 10:24 AM
A weapon that has gained a negative resonance from it's owner. A nice alternative to the weapon that gains uber-powers from being the weapon of a great and mighty hero. It could be a weapon that is sought to defeat say an new army of war spirits, but in doing so the hero who takes up the sword is in essence sacrificing himself...or herself. Go to Comment
War Fan of the Resplendent Burning Phoenix
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-04-30 09:16 AM
I like the rich description of this item, and can easily imagine it. Now, I dont particularly care for the power, wafting about miniature fireballs and such. If I might add my idea, such as it is...

Once the fan is activated, one needs only to fan the Fan, as it were, and...ithe edge of the fan is illuminated in a wreath of celestial flame. This flame causes no damage to the weilder of the fan, but deals devastating wounds to the corporeal undead, as well as driving away spirits of illness, the dark, and evil. Such spirits and persons of exceptionally evil character must overcome the radiance of the fan to attempt to attack the bearer.

If folded, the fan can be invoked, and will wreath itself in phoenixflame, but instead of causing injury, the folded fan can be used as an aid in attempts to heal the sick or injured. The great Hero Youhei touched a man burning with fever, and spoke the seven words of the whole body, and tapped him in the seven chakras with the folded fan. The man was alieved of his fever and sprang to the Hero's said completely cured of his illness./i

i pray that I have not taken to many liberties, Cap'n. Go to Comment
Lin the Nightingale
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:44 PM
A fairly solid assassin, generic enough that she can be used in another game just by changing the names around a bit. I like the fact that she took the road of musician over the courtesan's path. Go to Comment
The Isle of Crustaciano
Locations  (Water)   (City)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-08-07 06:37 AM
This is certainly an interesting setting. I would have given it a higher rating, but I would like to know more about Crustaciano as a character other than being a large crab-like entity.

I do also have a few questions for you to consider. Since the island is mud and silt, what keeps it from being eroded away by the action of the ocean. This might also be what makes the island have a viable port, since a viable port will need to offer respite and protection from storms and rough seas.

I imagined the palaces and shops having an organic look to them, as if they grew out of the mud made of gleaming gold and jewels. I could also see two foot long shrimp like creatures that saw to the daily maintainence and cleaning of the island. The more I think about it, the more I put the animals associated with a reef into the island, a half-moray sherrif, loyal to Crustaciano of course. An octopod creature as a rival, since octopus eat crabs and such.

Just my two cents
3/5 Go to Comment
Mytrian, The Wise
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-01 09:52 AM
Just be like Gandalf. Go to Comment
Abdelfettah's Escape
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 09:58 AM
This is a very well written plot, and I like the genuine and honest motive of the merchant as compared to the much more common fraud, greed, or trickery that is all too common among merchants these gaming days. When in doubt, follow the camels they know where water is. Go to Comment
Rangerwood
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Country/ State)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-04 10:32 AM
Several unique locations, a solid amount of history, some enigmas and an evil copse of trees. How often has the all ranger/druid game been played? Not enough If you ask me. I also like the protection of the trees as the rangers think any of them might be a surviving scion as opposed to being hug the trees love the trees trees are out friends sorts. Go to Comment
The Desert Temple...
Locations  (Desert)   (Ruins)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-02 08:05 AM
This is certainly an eerie location, one that could set alot of characters and players on edge. Surely something terrible and evil happened hear, a demon, a horror from beyond, the entire place could be infested with ghosts, it wouldnt matter. They wouldnt stay long, they wouldnt wait for me to spring the trap on them. But in this case there would be no trap, the place is simply empty now, but it's magic and enchantments remain. Go to Comment
Keep Silence
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-02 08:01 AM
I echo Zylithian's comment, I love the way this post comes across as a rumor in a back tavern, and without so much as a single bit of description I can imagine Keep Silence in all of it's crumbling splendor. Nicely done, though I would put some spaces between the various speakers lines to make it easier to read. Go to Comment
Tarsir Celebalda
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-11-08 02:43 AM
How in the world did this submission garner such a high score being derived from Tolkien's work without being utterly ripped on for using so much of Tolkien's work? Go to Comment
Akibara
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 09:54 AM
I like the prophet, the cursed sword and the Madness of the king. This could come around again, with the PCs seeing the second coming of the mystic bearing peace and a sword. Can they react in time to keep their homeland from being blasted? I wonder about the mystic himself, and would like to see more about him and his apocalypic gifts. Go to Comment
Umbral Clot
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-14 12:54 AM
It is the very lubricant that allows the shadow realm its ease of movement, slipping and sliding between all of those other dimensions and planes. Devilish stuff! Go to Comment
Sasha the Fox
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-02 08:11 AM
An old sub from the v1.0 citadel, I love the idea of the Pirate's daughter. I can see the lustful and energetic PC and associated player's look of surprise when they discovered that the bonny lass they were giving a good roll to was the daughter of the infamous Pirate Lord Captain Phillen d'Blanc. Go to Comment
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