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Horse Brass
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-24 07:38 AM
Chameleon's Charm
This tumb sized piece of tourmaline set in copper wise is braided into the horse's forlock so that it lays against the center of their head. This potent charm causes that horse's coat to change color to match the predominant color in the area. In a forest, the horse would turn a dark green, sandy brown in the desert, or all white on a snowy tundra. Rumors abound of a more advanced version of this charm that allow for multiple colors to be emulated.

Appaloosa's Charm
Much like the chameleon charm, this string of three pieces of quartz string together with braided horsehair causes the horse who wears it tied to their mane to match the color pattern of the horse that provided the hair in the charm. If a black horse provided the hair, the the horse wearing it becomes black. Patterns for appaloosas and paints are not copied exactly, but are fairly close.

Milkmaid's Charm
Not every rider can handle a warhorse or a spirited stallion, but putting this small pewter and ivory charm on the mane has the effect of calming even the most virile and enthusiastic of horses enough that even a milkmaid could ride him. Go to Comment
Horse Brass
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-25 04:11 PM
One on the mane, one in the tail. You can only wear one magic ring on each hand, so this is the logic I used. Go to Comment
Carried on the back of a dove
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-06-11 12:58 AM
A beautiful woman with powerful magics inscribed in her flawless skin, and she can sponataneously turn into a bird. Very interesting, I could see it done in an anime style, or heck, even as an anime. I'm looking forward to dropping Columbia into a game. Go to Comment
Boots Too Fine for the Earth
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-28 10:14 AM
I think that the story is superb, the stuff that makes for good in game myths, this young girl could later go on to great things, etc etc and I could pronounce all of the names in the post. In that, it would be easy to change the names to something else to integrate this tale, and the attached boots into almost any game setting. Go to Comment
Winter in the Lost Lands
Plots  (Travel)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-24 12:11 PM
This would be a fine post without Mes, the dangers of winter travel, moving a caravan through deep snow, and dealing with the predators that haunt the white wastes. Mes himself seems completely 1 dimensional, and I thik actually detracts from the piece as a whole. Go to Comment
Lancid
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-09-12 10:52 PM
Lancid is. Lancid does. Lancid cares not. Lancid is boring.

2/5 Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 02:49 AM
Updated: Updated: fixed special characters and replaced presumed quotation marks with italics. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 02:50 AM
I love the name and the concept is novel. Go to Comment
Cloak of Wailing Misery
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-08-23 03:08 AM
The first comment that comes to mind is what would happen if the cloak was put on a dead body? Would that be enough to instigate the magic, or would it just be a magic cloak on a cadaver? Short and sweet too. Go to Comment
Lady Joya
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-12 09:59 AM
Not your typical brooding malevolent hateful because its cool type of ancient vampire. Nicely done. Go to Comment
Tourniquet Tunic
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-01 09:47 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Meridan
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:24 PM
protect the village from the greedy wizard... even Callista flockhart has more meat on her bones than this. Go to Comment
Glacier Mail
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:11 PM
As I commented on the Frost Thorn, this item seems as much artistic as it does a functional magical item. Go to Comment
Frost Thorn
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:08 PM
While the wording (bracer vs. bracelet) can be a little nit-picky, I think this is a good item since it definately has an artistic value to it, rather than meandering over into rune etched, glowing sigils sort of thing. I would imagine that the Frost Thorn would be quite the eye-turner even when it wasnt a frozen weapon. Go to Comment
Celsia Frostblossom
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:14 PM
Great character, motivation, backstory, the whole works. I like how she didnt start out looking for vengeance, or to increase her magical power, but simlpy went looking for the fairies on the glacier. I think she could also function as an anachronism since the glacial pace of her life has made her witness to many things that others wouldnt have noticed. I also like her name (Celsia, celsius) Go to Comment
Phoenix Talon
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-08-04 10:39 AM
I like the bit about the undead getting a second shot at what was taken from them Go to Comment
The Swords of Kanalith
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-10 03:06 PM
For the items themselves, I'd give this a generic 3, but the presentation was well done, and I really like both the backstory, and the names of the matched swords. Go to Comment
Tarquin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-10 11:19 PM
Voted most likely to become a liche by his graduating class, before he soul-devoured each of them. sometimes a sympathetic villian with understandable, human motives cannot compare with something that has become so divorced from human morality that it really no longer constitutes a human being. Go to Comment
Mask Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-24 11:40 PM
Ah, another original submission from the Old Citadel. My how our standards have changed since 2003.

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Circlet of Temporal Transmutation
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-16 08:01 PM
Alright, the twinning factor is certainly interesting but there has to be some sort of limiting factor to prevent the ubiquitous assault by millions upon millions of temporally manipulated berzerker warriors.

The whole area should be handlted judiciously and misuse should invoke the legendary Wrath of the DM! Go to Comment
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