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Demonic Hysteria
Plots  (Crisis)   (Mini-Campaign)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 05:52 PM
Hell bent...heh heh Go to Comment
Theory of Elements
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 11:41 AM
An interesting idea and superb presentation. I look forward to what this thread generates! Go to Comment
Trollshaw Staff
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 10:14 AM
Updated: released 2-6-06 from Works Hidden Go to Comment
Trollshaw Staff
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 12:56 PM
The only way I could describe the effect of the staff around humans is that the wielder will be percieved to be nasty, brutish, and boorish. This is a basic reation, not one governed by appearance, or manners, they just radiate an aura that seems 'trollish' to the average person. In game terms it would manifest as a moderate to strong penalty to social interation, or would do something like reduce their charisma trait by 50% Go to Comment
Trollshaw Staff
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-07 10:49 AM
well, the basic inspiration for this item came from the racial items of DnD, such as the Belt of Dwarvenkind, and the Boots, and cloak of elvenkind. What kind of racial item would a troll have? A big stick, of course. Go to Comment
Crystal Goblet of Maddening Storms
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 09:35 AM
Good detail, and I especially liked the ongoing weather commentary throughout the history section of the item. Go to Comment
The S'krae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-06 05:56 PM
I would like to know more about how the amphibean S'krae smelt and forge metal. I would think that the heat and dryness associated with metal working would be anathema to them. Go to Comment
The Society of Nightmares
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-05 08:55 AM
While I am all about political malefesence, there is one thing that really nags at me about the SoN and it is that there is no organization that utilizes their unique services. Are they adjutant to the Crown, kind of like a mystically inclined Gestapo, or are they freelancers? Also, I think it might help if there were some hints on how to use them, and maybe some plot hooks. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-05 09:06 AM
I think Thaxen would be a fine character, there is adequate beckground. Some his his attributes are rather cliche, especially the orphan part, did someone kill his draconic parent, of was he orphaned by abandonment? I think the fact that he is half-drow and half dragon detracts from the post, and to echo Manfred's thought, his description sounds quite fierce and evil looking, i dont imagine he would be found in most lawful, or good aligned communities. Orcs might be more forgiving... Go to Comment
Cardinal Luther
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-05 09:10 AM
A wonderful surprise, the not really there character. Worthy of Mr. Sterling's attention, even if the mechanics of multiple phylactaries as rather confusing. Go to Comment
The Quarsooth
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-03 01:08 PM
How it pains me to do this...
Starscream, Transformers the Movie

The Quarsooth smack too much of Atlantian mythos, and they are too arrogant and too removed from the wet and gritty reality of Tarrod. As Moonhunter said (Though I must admit ignorance of his quoted materials) this smacks too much of another source of inspiration. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:54 PM
They don't believe in fighting fair, but they think archery to be cowardly? To quote an Italian proverb, the Best Armor is to be out of range. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:54 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-22 03:55 PM
A treat a treat! How rare it is for a submission to be edited to answer discrepancies. The rewrite of the Kazi's personal view of missle weapons, as well as backstabbing and assassination work well with their basic concept.

Yr sees you. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-22 03:56 PM
updated vote Go to Comment
Yr, the Flaming Sun
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:51 PM
Not bad, a very Pagan sun-god whose demands echo with the sound of the God of the Old Testament. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:48 PM
solid hunter-gatherer lizard-folk Go to Comment
The Epic of the Howler
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Historical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 03:03 PM
The Hint, Snarl, toothbombers...I adore it in it's abyssal blory. Go to Comment
Bardag Ol
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 02:58 PM
Both vibrant and down-trodden, growing in prosperity while the empire has collapsed. Very much a dynamic location, and one destined to carry the torch f the old power by virtue of it's economic status and its easily defensable location. Plenty of opportunity as the nobility has yet to cement into place, and the old power structures of the Sohar dissolve. Yes, plenty of room for intrigue and adventure. Go to Comment
Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-26 08:13 AM
my old computer was doubly blessed by Mathom... Go to Comment
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Trapped in his tomb, but alive, the God of Pain awaits his uleashing, said to be at the end of the world, he uses his only powers he can and calls to him 2 people, a man and a women to reliquish him from his prison. The man and the women, decieved by them thinking it a person trapped, go after to help the God of Pain unwittily and let him destroy the world

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