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The Arcade District
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 06:12 PM
All that is missing are some old men playing dominoes and shouting at local urchins. I like the adaptation of civil works gone bad. Go to Comment
Paha
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 04:18 PM
Solid material for an aquatic based game, useful tools for a non-metal working society. Go to Comment
The Broken Ground
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Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 06:07 PM
In the modern era it is not uncommon for even massive buildings to be constructed in a short term of months to a few years. Yet back in the dark ages, the construction of a great cathedral could take 20 years or more of labor. A fortress, being more about function that appearance could take about half as long. Well done. Go to Comment
The Broken Ground
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-23 10:44 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cruaunte Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 06:01 PM
Kid leather is soft or supple leather taken from goats rather than from cattle. Go to Comment
Antiago spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:59 PM
Stunning work. I absolutely love it! 5/5 when I have votes to give again. Go to Comment
Khartand
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:58 PM
Not bad, short but I get a nice vibe from the weapon. It does take the basic layout of a katar or punching dagger but moves it up into the size of a thrusting sword. I like. Go to Comment
The Helm of Shump Thokk
Items  (Armor)   (Sentient)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:55 PM
I laughed... Go to Comment
The Pit
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:53 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Stones District
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Merhood
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:46 PM
Mixes pragmaticism with blind beauracracy, creating an ultimately believable setting that is simply more than a riverside area yet still within the bounds of being usable. Curses on the local nobles for never being able to get around to building any sort of dam to fix that pesky water problem. Go to Comment
The Foolish Mage and Drunked Wizard Tavern
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:43 PM
I love the concept of the Half-Mage, both in terms of magical ability and in terms of training. The tavern itself is very well described and quite inviting. wouldn't mind tossing back a few there myself. Go to Comment
Dogpick
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:40 PM
This is a good idea, but could have been executed better. Go to Comment
Ghollish Wide-axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 04:53 PM
MaCaferi SkyDock
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:36 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Silver Star Campus
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-14 02:08 AM
Solid idea, good description of the grounds and some tantalizing bits that invite attention. It could, however, use a human touch to give it more depth, perhaps there are societies within the Campus, healers versus potion makers perhaps, or there is a regular series of olympic style events held on the grounds. Go to Comment
Dame Ellenius's Park
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Circus Neighborhood
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 04:57 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Shields District
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:28 PM
The one thing missing was the settled orcen using their discarded warshields as signs. I could see a local dive of a tavern sporting a battered shield with a slap-dash paintjob as a sign, with some sort of crude or tongue in cheek name. Go to Comment
Fog of Mills Park
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-26 05:25 PM
In a way, I feel Like i've been there. It seems like a mix of the sleepy bayou of the French quarter mixed with the chaos of Atlanta, GA. There are 41 streets in Atlanta named Peachtree. Good luck there. I can only imagine getting lost in a place and frustrated by the slow sprawling growth of the place, surely as intimidating as a band of ogres or facing a noble swordsman in a duel. Go to Comment
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