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Spring and Autumn Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-14 01:30 AM
For such a cool name, I was expecting more from this submission. From a historical perspective it has merit and perhaps there could be a mundane Oriental scroll/codex generated for this weapon and the others. Go to Comment
Bat Blades
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-05-03 07:33 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Generic Magical Items
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-04-23 02:42 PM
It is really a shame that this Master Codex has not received much in the way of love. Thumbs up and a great idea. Go to Comment
Luxury items
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-21 01:58 PM
Now I am mortified and ashamed that this scroll has escaped my attention for so long. Perhaps I can make amends somehow... Go to Comment
Luxury items
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-21 10:51 AM
I would vote on this sub again if I could, since I cant...


BUMP Go to Comment
The Shievren
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:39 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Garg's Gladiators
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Rune-Slivers
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-31 11:07 AM
I like, inspires all sorts of nifty ideas, as well as spawning a list of basic runes. Good job. Go to Comment
Corina Archerous
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ugg The Mentally Challanged
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:36 PM
This is a bit too cliche for my tastes. Aside from being stupid and having a penchant for hitting things with his stick, there isnt too much about Ugg to seperate him from the typical ogre/half ogre bashy type opponent. There could be some sort of foil, or counterpoint to his simple and brutal nature. Perhaps he is a collector of things, children's toys, pressed flowers, something very non-threatening. Perhaps he is greatly concerned about a particular person, or class of people's wellbeing? The first bit of inspiration I got from Ugg was Forrest Gump. Maybe that might help a bit. Go to Comment
Chae Il Seung
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:30 PM
Many questions...

What is a Bushi-Killian Warrior?

What is the Quad-Cut style?

What race is he to have been one of three viable hatchlings?

Why does he have a Korean name?

Why is he a relentless, dedicated slayer of men? Go to Comment
Sharry
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:27 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Crunk
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:26 PM
The biggest concern that comes to mind is that Crunk is half ogre, and half orck. Now mind you I have no problem with this combination as I imagine it would produce one heck of a monster. Combining the general intelligence of the typical orck with the size and strength of the substancially less intelligent ogre. Unfortunately, the fact that Crunk is a runt, and a perpetual omega wolf. He makes me think more of a goblin that anything else. Go to Comment
Fredius D'Amar
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-11-16 03:21 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Pyre, Guardian of the Flame
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 11:10 AM
interesting idea, nice tie into the religion of Kyren and the link to the sword draw magic is good. Reminds me of a more flashy version of the Ronin Warriors, who also had elemental aspecteda armors. Go to Comment
Records of the Grand Historian
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 11:15 AM
While upon first glance, this may seem to be little more than some background scenery, I can certainly see uses for it. Perhaps one of the Stellar or true faces has since become some sort of undead, and the only record of their weakness can be found in the original text penned by Dougas himself. Alternately, perhaps some of the chapters are replaced with forgeries, that tell a more politically spin version of a person or event. Go to Comment
North Ward
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:38 PM
This should be called the Quiet Ward. Go to Comment
Quiet Ward
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:32 PM
Well, there isnt that much quiet about the quiet ward, there are uncommon wandering magic elementals, a technological revolution, and a major acting troupe, maybe calling it the Quiet Ward is like calling the 6'5" biker with the barb wire tattoos Tiny. Go to Comment
Temple Ward
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:22 PM
The first two paragraphs were pretty good, i like the organized city, the idea od GodSmiths (rather than judeo-christian priests) and the mix of pragmaticism (living area for common folk) and extravance (shaming those mages)

Then the puns started and I started cringing. Ge-Em? The gods Deth and Chro-No? Also, I referenced kretch, and found no entries for the term. I am going out on a limb here and guessing you meant Crèche. Go to Comment
Dock Ward
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 11:11 PM
I like the clans interaction with the city, but there is something rather jarring, the dimensions of the wall.

Surrounding the City is a massive wall, 10 Imperial Strides (1 meter) tall, four wide at the base, and two wide at the top

So the wall is about 3 feet tall (those imperial strides must be mighty small, less than 4 inches each) 6 feet wide at the top, and 12 feet wide at the bottom. That is a seriously fat K-rail. Go to Comment
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