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Thaxen
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-05 09:06 AM
I think Thaxen would be a fine character, there is adequate beckground. Some his his attributes are rather cliche, especially the orphan part, did someone kill his draconic parent, of was he orphaned by abandonment? I think the fact that he is half-drow and half dragon detracts from the post, and to echo Manfred's thought, his description sounds quite fierce and evil looking, i dont imagine he would be found in most lawful, or good aligned communities. Orcs might be more forgiving... Go to Comment
Cardinal Luther
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-05 09:10 AM
A wonderful surprise, the not really there character. Worthy of Mr. Sterling's attention, even if the mechanics of multiple phylactaries as rather confusing. Go to Comment
The Quarsooth
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-03 01:08 PM
How it pains me to do this...
Starscream, Transformers the Movie

The Quarsooth smack too much of Atlantian mythos, and they are too arrogant and too removed from the wet and gritty reality of Tarrod. As Moonhunter said (Though I must admit ignorance of his quoted materials) this smacks too much of another source of inspiration. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:54 PM
They don't believe in fighting fair, but they think archery to be cowardly? To quote an Italian proverb, the Best Armor is to be out of range. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:54 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-22 03:55 PM
A treat a treat! How rare it is for a submission to be edited to answer discrepancies. The rewrite of the Kazi's personal view of missle weapons, as well as backstabbing and assassination work well with their basic concept.

Yr sees you. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-22 03:56 PM
updated vote Go to Comment
Yr, the Flaming Sun
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:51 PM
Not bad, a very Pagan sun-god whose demands echo with the sound of the God of the Old Testament. Go to Comment
Kazi
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 10:48 PM
solid hunter-gatherer lizard-folk Go to Comment
The Epic of the Howler
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Historical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 03:03 PM
The Hint, Snarl, toothbombers...I adore it in it's abyssal blory. Go to Comment
Bardag Ol
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 02:58 PM
Both vibrant and down-trodden, growing in prosperity while the empire has collapsed. Very much a dynamic location, and one destined to carry the torch f the old power by virtue of it's economic status and its easily defensable location. Plenty of opportunity as the nobility has yet to cement into place, and the old power structures of the Sohar dissolve. Yes, plenty of room for intrigue and adventure. Go to Comment
Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-26 08:13 AM
my old computer was doubly blessed by Mathom... Go to Comment
The Royle Quartermasters
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-29 11:12 AM
An interesting organization, but I tend to think that any vampire worth his fangs isn't going to delegate control of his blood supply to another vampire. Among the undead, blood is power, and giving that power to another would roughly be selecting who you want to betray you. Go to Comment
The Leering Skulls
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-29 11:08 AM
add another reason for the non-humans to hate humanity, taking up their exiles and rejects and arming them, feeding them, and turning them against their own people. Wicked and efficient Go to Comment
House of the Duck
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 08:01 PM
Updated: I'm kicking this one out, tired of looking at it in the In Works section. Go to Comment
House of the Duck
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-08-05 08:08 PM
Updated: 100% complete rewrite. Core idea is the same, but expanded from two paragraphs and a few left-over lines. Go to Comment
Chain Spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-28 05:12 PM
Explained well with a suitable background. I can see enterprising players trying to figure out how to recall the spear, and the effects that it can be put to when they do succede. An all round solid item that isn't a blazing sword of slaying. Go to Comment
Calgrind
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-02-03 01:11 PM
I'm Spartacus!

No! I'm Spartacus! Go to Comment
Ivory armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-27 08:12 PM
I don't like the 'you can't use this without permission or nasty people will come and beat you up' aspect of the armor. AS for the Kyters, I coudl see there being kind of a goldrush on their natural supply of ivory, millionares spending a thousand gold pieces for a dozen eggs sort of rush. Go to Comment
Moonpool Vault
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-27 09:46 AM
It is short, and it is just a bit of decoration. A little odd, nothing magical and no lurking monsters. No there is 1 submission in the Dungeon - rooms/halls section. Go to Comment
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