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30 Sea-bottom Encounters
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-28 09:10 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-28 09:13 AM
Interesting item, well balanced and I like the fact that the side effects of the ring are easily counteracted by mundane rites and rituals that are no longer known. It gives it a sort of power through the ignorance of those who wear it. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-21 11:58 PM
I'm glad, and thank you for the solid comment Go to Comment
Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2015-08-29 02:01 AM

There are not nearly enough magic beans going around these days. Go to Comment
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-12 10:36 AM
I'm sure you are aware of pink slime and mechanically separated meat, I had the same food horror vibe in mind with the noxious flesh of the kaiju being rendered and chemically treated to render it safe for human consumption. Add in the whole process of the Japanese whaling with with harvesting and processing ship, or the other ships that catch and tin fish while at sea, and it all just came together.

Once properly treated with a bleach wash (which creates its own toxic fumes combining with chemical agents in the kaiju flesh) the meat is then heat sterilized and given a second treatment of gassing to kill any thermophilic bacteria still in the product. Large grinders and chippers then reduce the muscle fibers into smaller pieces where it is treated to a 24 stint in a MRSA fermenter where flesh eating bacteria break down the tough tissue. A blast of radiation to kill the microbes, then another trip through the grinders and it is ready to be tinned and distributed to the food manufacturers who use the lowest grade meat products, ala fast food joints, cafeterias in poor slums, and emergency food rations. Go to Comment
Heraldry of the Underworld
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-06 12:23 AM
One of the ideas that fed into this was the symbolism and whatnot that is used in gang tattoos. Thusly, various gang members have tattoos on their body that demonstrate the sort of things that they have done, from crimes to jail time, and so forth. There was an article on a prison inmate who was actually found guilty of an initially unrelated crime, but was incriminated by his own tattoos because he basically bragged in permanent ink about how he killed another man, on his chest. To the average person, the meanings behind the symbols are unknown, or only the most rudimentary are known. It takes professionals to break down the internal language of symbols used, and the symbols and iconography change from gang to gang, from prison to prison, and from country to country. In contemporary fantasy, thieves guilds are the norm, functioning like the Mafia or the Yakuza, and being large and established, they would have their own sets of symbols and such to use for many purposes.

The fun part could be using the internally consistent symbol set, but not telling the players and letting them map it out. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-06-30 09:49 PM
The evil shark people link is broken, but I like this idea, but I just happen to like the idea of whales as being more powerful and a threat to humanity, rather than it's victim. I can see the black leviathans coexisting in varying states of peace and war with things like Cheka's krakens.

Nicely done. Go to Comment
The connected
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-07-03 08:01 PM
I like this idea, and while most of the information wasn't new (zombies are zombies are zombies) but the notion of them growing as a group mind, gaining skills as they amass greater and greater numbers. The less important members, the mental patients and whatnot are going to gravitate to the outside of the herd, while the more important members are going to be pulled to the center, like an organism protecting it's more valuable organs at the expense of the less valuable.

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Derran Thurswrat
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-06-26 03:58 PM
Solid character, good backstory and explanation for what could otherwise be an easily overlooked character. Instead of a fence, or a plot point, Derran can end up with his own agenda, especially when passing on jobs and information through the tavern.

Nicely done. Go to Comment
500 Word Submission
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-06-20 12:35 AM
Somehow this one slipped under my less than vigilant radar. I like this. Go to Comment
Wastelander Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-01-15 03:19 PM
I ride shiny and chrome!!! Go to Comment
Inns to remember
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-05-23 01:48 PM
Excellent submission, and I like that the inns themselves are presented not as destinations, but as places you pass through going somewhere. It is fairly common that we write up and present inns and taverns as end points, rather than as the cliche presents, starting points, or as they appear in stories and games, points between those two.

I liked reading this, and Eastern Spices made me think of mixing a tea house, a spice shop, and my favorite indian restaurant.

I'll have a chai, and has the dragonblood come in yet? I hate having to use the old dry bark when there is fresh to be had. Go to Comment
30 Fantastic Locations
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2015-01-21 07:34 PM
Freemium CCG for smartphones Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-05-12 01:42 PM
Also a huge secondary market for surplus military hardware, and a market to move obsolete equipment. Why just toss the obsolete skeletron models when you can get a few tens of thousands of credits each, rather than the few hundred credits they might be worth in scrap and recycled parts.

And on the human side, once someone is too old to work in the military, they go into the robo leagues, and start training the kids, the up and comers, and whatnot. Go to Comment
Burly Bill's Beautiful Beverages
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-05-05 12:25 AM
Feels like two submissions welded together here, the first half being Burly Bills, and the second half being the Humanity First AC. The two feel like oil and water, and I have trouble getting them to mix. I can appreciate the two separate halves, and I like the first half, an anachronism sitting in the middle of a shiny metal future, with wood tables. I can see the biggest crimes being committed here being the trade of contraband goods, aka honest to god tobacco products, rather than the serums peddled for the eCigs, and the presence of small batch and hand crafted beers in a setting where you could very easily have 99% of all of one product being produced by a monopoly. We have plenty to choose from, Bud, Bud Lite, Bud Black Crown, Bud Select, Bud Amber Wheat, Bud Special Batch, etc.

The second half I would need to see more developed, more explained, because as it sits, I don't know. I have a hard time reconciling the SCA Green Dragon Inn Burly Bill with a racist/bigot cyber terrorist luddite. Personally I would make a split into two characters, such as with Adolf and Alois Hitler. One was a tyrant and a genocidal maniac, and the other was his half brother who ran a bar/restaurant for the SS. Burly Bill could be the genial anachronism embracing the idealistic view of the past, with hand poured stouts and hand rolled cigars, while Bastard Bill seethes with anti-metahuman hostility and resentment, but the bond between brothers keeps the place going, with Burly overlooking, or covering what Bastard is doing, to keep him out of trouble as long as he can, and partially agreeing with some of the things Bastard believes, especially the luddite anti-modding, anti-cybernetic things. Go to Comment
New Personal Best
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-05-05 12:30 AM
Engaging read, and a solid look at how we are going to be exposed to human modification, through the cutting edge of sports medicine (the military angle is well enough covered in fiction) as well as how we are going to likely react to it.

Well done sir. Go to Comment
Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-24 01:46 PM
Updated: Added Note on Sacrifice, and Assumptions, rewrite of the Messianic Faith section, expansion of the Monotheistic Faith. Will expand on the Eastern Religions and philophies at a latter date. Go to Comment
Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-04-29 09:35 AM
I put it back in the In work folder because I wasn't happy with where the submission ended up going. It wasn't intended to be a treatise on the religion of Earth, but rather an exposition on theology in my fantasy setting, and how rather than being made of absolutes, it is organic, grows, changes, and so forth so that pantheons rise, super-deities fall, and it all keeps rolling.

After languishing in work for over a year, I accepted the fact that I'm not going to give it the time and energy to bring it back to where I want it, so I #CultofDone 'ed it and put it back out. Rather surprised it ended up on the front page again, I've done this before and the submission will generally go back to obscurity. Go to Comment
RL-8 Class Space Station
Locations  (Fortification)   (Space)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-04-26 02:49 AM

Military Station (MS) Five

Codename: Ramiel

MS-5 'Ramiel' is an automated military station in geosynchronous orbit above Kinshasa, Africa. This large type II station houses 150 heavy drone aerospace fighters, and a mercenary contingent of seibertronians (secretly in detention/thrall to the station L/AISC) with aerospace fighter bodies. The L/AISC controller of Ramiel (aka Ramiel) has become sentient and self aware, but is enormously prideful of it's perfect defense strategy for holding the line between Federation Africa and SAUR Africa.

As Ramiel has a 100cm heavy particle projector cannon and the ability to hit things on the surface of the earth within a 7 foot circle of accuracy, it has seen to it that it's defensive lines have never broken.

(re: Neon Genesis Evangelion, the 5th Angel)

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RL-8 Class Space Station
Locations  (Fortification)   (Space)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-04-26 03:00 AM

Federation Scientific 66

Codenamed Leviathan

Leviathan was built as a Class III habitat in the orbit of Saturn. Easily hidden in the radio noise and static of the rings and the moons, Leviathan, and its AISC Lucifer, were given free reign to work on bleeding edge arcanotechnology, dimensional science, and other projects that were considered too risky to work on at the Phobos Research Center. The AISC Alcubierre was involved in questionable research and was contaminated by an unknown biological agent. The station vanished with all hands presumed lost. The gap in Saturn's ring lasted a year and a half before filling back in.

Leviathan has a dimensional gate drive, and the station attempted a dimensional jump, killing most of the crew, and turning those that survived into insane bubbling monsters that were as much the suits they were wearing as they were viscous alien slime. The station is an unholy amalgam of metal turned to flesh, plastic turned to skin, and former human crew members turned to slumping cybernetic zombies.

The station is heavily armed with arcanotech weapons, prototype equipment, and it's defensive components, space mecha and aerospace fighters, have all been corrupted and turned into squadrons of hekatonkheires.

Inspiration: 2/3rds Event Horizon, 1/3rd Leviathan from the Hellraiser Franchise.

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