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The Iron Ghost
NPCs  (Major)   (Mercantile)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-20 06:57 AM
His largest foe is the UAC, the largest of the Atlantic Federation megacorps and the most influential inside the Federation Corporate Party. Red Sun would eventually be on his list of enemies, but he would have to gain more power in the AtFed first, and then have to deal with the fact that most of the western US willingly joined the PRC and were in some places, violently opposed, against joining the AtFed Go to Comment
The Soul-Sucker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-14 08:30 AM
I like the combination of the vampiric weapon with the growing sentient weapon. Well done. Go to Comment
Dr. Adele Stirling
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-13 10:39 PM
I googled that and all I found was reference to a Dr. Who episode Go to Comment
Dr. Adele Stirling
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-14 12:55 AM
Looks like a fascinating show, and I'll have to follow up on it. But if you want to know the real inspiration for this character, you're going to be disappointed. The real inspiration is Doctor Adele Burkhart of GI Joe: Real American Hero.

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Kyle DiGlado
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-12 08:40 AM
Consider Kyle stolen, I need a hard nosed emotionally toxic beat cop for my vampire game. I like him, he has depth and you've managed to convey a great deal of information in a few sentences. Doing some swapping around on my end, Amy was knifed by a perp, but one that was secretly associated with vampires, not that he knows that, but he knows that there is something going on, a reason the brass lets some stuff slide and other stuff gets nailed to the wall for everyone to see.

Great char Ted. Go to Comment
Soul Craft
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-08 12:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Amerikka Command
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-09 11:31 AM
I do rather loathe the name I've given this organization and I'm overall not that pleased with the final result. It needs more work, but the main idea I had (which I feel failed to present) was of comparing the Cosmic Era southwest United States as being similar to modern Afghanistan. Rebels and dissidents living in a hinterland, supported by the local population that really doesn't care so much for distant governments. Go to Comment
Peripheral Beasts
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-05 09:02 AM
Moon pretty much covered it. I want the Dungeon Master side of this submission that has answers to the questions posed by the Peripheral Beasts Go to Comment
The Hellephant
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-31 08:56 AM
Freaking Awesome Go to Comment
Chimera Prototype Mk-XXIII
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-30 01:20 PM
Grim, has multiple layers of background material, and the monster has a symbolic value, just as Godzilla was a symbol of the atom bomb. I approve. Go to Comment
The House of the King
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-28 09:53 PM
I like the concept of the Kings House Go to Comment
7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-27 11:31 AM
Magic being divine is a common theme in Tolkien's work. The division of arcane and divine magics is a matter of metagaming IMHO and it is just one of 7 possible explanations. Go to Comment
7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-01 01:13 PM
Well, how often in the genre is the villain a wayward magic user? Its a pretty good example of the point you make. Go to Comment
Magic: How it destroys conventional (medieval) seige
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-26 10:58 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Setam, the Goddess of Nerves
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-23 10:45 PM
I actually really like this one Go to Comment
Setam, the Goddess of Nerves
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-31 08:54 AM
No room for purple prose, fancy presentation, or beating around the bush.I love it Go to Comment
The Cockatrice
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-21 10:12 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hematófago
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Country/ State)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-15 06:41 PM
That would be acceptable. While the slaughter of the meal Americans was in large part done via disease and many never saw the Europeans who caused their deaths, the Aztec vamps were as all undead, immune to disease and they were all killed by the fangs, claws and weapons of said vampires. Go to Comment
30 More Bottles of Wine
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-15 06:43 PM
I'm not going to finish it, it's been rotting in work too long and the thread of inspiration is gone
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A Less Friendly World
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-07-15 06:27 AM
Update: It's cleaning day! Get out! Go to Comment
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