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Shivenhusk the Unliving Refuse
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-24 11:29 PM
Sniff sniff, I smell awesome. Great visuals, but there is something missing. He is a half god, a wretched creature of half life and half death. He feels like a fantastic monster boss, but not really divine, or half divine. If it would not offend, I would like to try my hand at creating a half dead demigod. Go to Comment
Treatise on Necromancy
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-24 11:34 PM
I like the approach, but (and I do prostrate myself before you in apology) there are several typos and this sub needs to be spell checked. Go to Comment
Bacon the Dog
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-23 11:14 AM
You sir, have made my day! Go to Comment
Riddlerock
Articles  (Area)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-22 05:19 PM
Rabbit head instead of a human head? That's messed up. The riddle worms are freaky too. Go to Comment
Moonology Manuscript
Plots  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-22 10:29 AM
Rather than celestial constellations, there are sigils and glyphs that the five moons form, each moon forming a point or specific position within the symbol. Go to Comment
30 Wacky Wedding Customs
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-22 10:36 AM
An excellent 30 sir Go to Comment
Generating Fear: Darkness
Articles  (At Table)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-22 10:23 AM
I've never verified this, but I would be interested if someone was willing to try: If you blindfold a person and close their nose where they cannot smell, you cannot tell the difference between biting into an apple and biting into an onion. There is/was a gameshow on SyFy that was based on this entire premise, Blackout. Contestants were escorted into completely blacked out room and had to identify things using only certain other senses, such as touch only, or scent only.

it seems you've been eviscerated and eaten by a grue. Go to Comment
A Guide to Metals and Their Properties
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-21 12:07 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Yethamerands Stonecloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-20 11:15 AM
I like the notion of having to rescue the princess when she is a stone statue, and the metaphysics of the sub are interesting Go to Comment
Adam Smith
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-22 07:06 PM
Well there's that isn't there. I'm going to go watch some Ponies now. Go to Comment
Rune Lore
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-07 10:21 PM
Whats the difference between spurting and shooting?
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Military Hover Bike
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-19 09:27 AM
The flight ceiling of the hover bike is 2-3 feet, and no, the lift generated by the unit is not going to overcome the momentum of a significant fall.

You ask some very good questions and make some points. So I want to lay down a challenge to you: retread the hover bike, write your own submission on how it really should be.
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Takamoto's Dogs
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-16 02:18 PM
It was a random idea, and I thought of delving into Lassie or Rin Tin Tin but the only inspiration for this was Astro and Scooby. Plus this was written in one sitting, after waking up with an upset gut from too much Taco Bell. If you would like to add to it, there is an Add an Idea button, and I would like to see what you could do with the idea. Go to Comment
The Archandroid
NPCs  (Major)   (Technical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-19 09:13 AM
The difference between surrogacy and remote control is the difference between 'I walk forward' and 'I tell the unit to walk forward'.

Android heads are the same size as human heads. Most are fitted with Exo-Cranial cyberdecks to cover the hardware requirements. If I was an L/AISC and wanted my archandroid to have more computing power, I would have it customized to carry more electronics hardware in the torso, rather than carry it's brain in a purse.

L/AISC consciousness is similar to how you describe but not quite. There is a central intellect, but given it's size and ability to multi-task it basically has multiple personas and such. As for the archandroid, to use the organ metaphor, the android itself is no more self aware than one of our fingers. Go to Comment
Avian Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-06-26 07:21 AM
I would like this item better if it were a regular blow, and not a crossbow. The arrows are interesting, though a few leave me cold. I dont care very much for the owl arrows or the hummingbird arrows. Still, all in all, a good submission. As for helping you with a bird religion, you might want to put that in the Sagely Advice area of the forum Go to Comment
Yothats
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-11 01:03 PM
Well, from a compositional perspective this is not a bad submission. There is plenty of detail, and the majority of the bases have been covered. The subject matter is going to be provocative, but that is probably the intent. If the intent was to be provocative, I think it needs to go further into the matter. Why do they milk humans? Wouldn't it make more sense for them to milk cattle or some other herbivore ruminant? The amount of milk produced is decidedly greater that what a human can produce. What do they do with the gathered milk? Drink it like whiskey, make tiny cheeses out of it? Do they eat humans, use human vellum to make their scrolls and books?

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Yothats
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-11 11:57 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
How to Kill Painfully: A Compendium of Ancient Executions
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-09 04:14 PM
le link to existing torture thread

http://strolen.com/viewing/Torture_Devices_and_Techniques

1. Sometimes they got bored and would crucify people on wooden Xs instead, or they would be crucified upside down.

2. Vlad's main victims were the Muslims who raised him (leaders traded sons in a peace deal) and he was a known defender of Christianity.

3. Bamboo isn't horribly mysterious, it grows all sorts of places, but most famously in China and Japan. Technically a grass, it can grow up to a foot a day in favorable conditions.

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Seibertronians
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-11 09:00 PM
And filthy organics have a whole lexicon of anti seibertronian slurs, like toaster, tin skin, shiny, etc.

Screw off you damned dirty toaster.

Don't mess with Susan, she's a shiny lover Go to Comment
Ko Girls
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (Area)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-09-07 10:28 AM
Thats an excellent visual, but instead of being isolated to one Tokyo? district, there are major Ko girl gangs in most major cities of the Pacific Rim Coalition, especially Nippon and Republic of California. The overall flavor and color palletes change, but a London Ko girl is fundamentally the same as a Beijing, New York, or Mexico City Ko girl
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