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7(10) Warlord Abilities for Boss Monsters
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-04 10:36 AM
Good execution for a controller, I like. Go to Comment
7 Crazy Ones of the Stolen(Strolen) World
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-03 07:39 PM
This is fantastic, i love the lost steeds and the steel shadows, and while revolting the last suppers are fascinating.

The hareem cracked me up because I've seen something similar to this in the anime Heaven's Lost property (a flock of magically animated panties flying around the world) Go to Comment
7 Blades of the Ocean
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-03 04:01 PM
Solid theme, and good execution. Well done sir. My personal favorite was the Blade of the Crab. I like the visual and the balance it has. Go to Comment
Smoke Tellers of the Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Trans World)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-03 03:50 PM
I think the Warlord Ability is the neatest part of this, the ability to built the hierarchy of nefarious races.

Very cool.

The rest is good, and I enjoyed reading it
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Seven Blades of the Serpent
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-02 04:44 PM
The only problem I have is the Saber of the Sidewinder, because a sidewinder is a rattlesnake, and not a cobra. Mechanics are fine, just used to live where there were lots of sidewinders.


I very much enjoyed the themed weapon presentation, and it makes me want to make my own cluster of themed weapons. Also, these are very useful for using in a game where the theme is well supported. Cult of Assassins, snekswerd. Snake handling religious cult? snekswerd. Nightmare evil cultists, hissing snekswerd. Go to Comment
30 Hidden Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-02 04:47 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
MOONQUAKE!!!!(A tale of Mysantia)
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-01 08:09 PM
This is certainly gonzo, I am not sure if I should like it, or be a little grossed out by it. I think that is a hallmark of some good gonzo material.

The AI business is a little squick, personally I think I would make it something else, or move it into an abstract, because the thought of a group of PCs hauling around a few buckets of space whale knuckle babies is a tad more than I want to try to run in a game.

It's right there on the line of hilarious and horrible.

I would make sure one of the PCs was basically Mark Wahlburg Go to Comment
Castle, a supervillian
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-02-02 04:55 PM
I'm not sure I understand his switching places, is his mind/spirit/anima body hopping, allowing him to possess people and then do what he wants with their body and his skill set? Are they transferred to his body for the duration, or are they repressed while he skin-rides them? Does his body lay comatose if they don't? What are the limits of this ability, and can other resist it?

What is his villainous motivation? What does he want from the world, did it wrong it, or does he merely disprove of it? Does he have a master plan?

On a more basic level, he is incredibly average, brown hair and blue eyes, WASP, marine, and that's all we know about him. I want to know more, I want some sort of insight into Castle to know who he is and what he wants. We don't know what he cares about, what he looks like, if he has any mannerisms, any calling cards or hallmarks that someone on his trail would be able to recognize.

Lots of potential, but lots of questions too.
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Spellreaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:17 PM
I like! It opens the door to a whole new version of magic. Spellhunters can equip gear like this, that lets them see spells. They hunt rogue spells, or work teamwork style to bring down powerful enchanters and magic creatures.

NICE Go to Comment
7 Types of Rulers
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 06:49 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Living Spells(as Monsters)
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 06:52 AM
This is out there, and didn't know what to make of it honestly. Some of these are just strange but others are fascinating. Do exoect for me to grab one and fledge it out into a full stand alone submissiom. Go to Comment
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-30 07:41 PM
Some of these are very interesting, some could be fleshed out. Otherwise a decent submission. Go to Comment
Intersectionality and Protoculture
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-26 09:17 AM
Instrumentality Go to Comment
30 Lawyers
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:44 PM
It's solid Go to Comment
Greater Adventuring Kharmic Line
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-31 03:32 PM
A very meta concept, I like the notion of there being multiple kharmic lines, and the expression of the PC party to be the 3d expression of a 4d entity. Go to Comment
30 Soldiers
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 11:24 PM
A solid 30. They are usable, but very much by the book. Go to Comment
Blind Spot
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 11:20 PM
Not bad, I enjoyed reading it, but the pace was rushed, when some sections of the story would have benefited from the pace falling to a crawl, showing the mage's waiting game before fighting and killing the demon. Go to Comment
Endings
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 10:59 AM
It is a fantastic homage to my insanity, and Aramax feeding my muse crank and crystal meth.

He left out the part where I was killed by my publisher before I could release my manifesto of despair Go to Comment
30 Chefs
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-28 08:31 AM
A solid 30, and good use of other subs in making this. Like Aramax said, I was expecting this to be played up for comedy, but this is pretty damn good. Go to Comment
30 Bouncers
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-26 03:10 PM
A fantastic 30 Cheka, a few are similar, but you are going to have similarly built and oriented people taking the bouncer job. I particularly liked the Crimp, the hangman, and the smattering of English colloquialisms throughout, gave it a splendid read. Go to Comment
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