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Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Roack's comment on 2016-11-16 05:52 PM
Names in constructed languages: Check
Things made out of animal parts: Check
References to a wider universe: Check
Detailed cultural integration: Check

This pushes a lot of really good buttons for me. Other than a few grammatical errors which don't seriously effect readability, it's all around solid. I would love to see more weapons, personally, but these two and their uses are quite detailed. Go to Comment
Stebanos Paint
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-19 03:11 AM
I like it, very original, though I'd love it if the water of Syalkkothes was explored in greater detail. Go to Comment
The Sword of Fire
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 08:29 AM
"definitely not a candidate." Well I wish I'd thought of it. The one problem I have is with the burning system, though thats because it ever so slightly reminds me of stats. It is of course, easily adjusted, removed, or interpreted differently, so it's not a real problem. 5/5! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-14 12:30 AM
When seperated from the flock and certain nerves are pinched a Bahara'hara'raha will become nearly comatose. Also, as mentioned, they don't think to look up, and considering Ylfharn hunters attack from above.... Go to Comment
Order of the Vigilant
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 08:07 AM
I have a good reason for you Strolen: Fear. People hate and fear what they don't understand, and chances are they understand little, if anything, about the Dreamers.

Solid post, good writing, great Idea. No score possible but a 5/5. Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-13 07:21 PM
Wow, I like it, It's a little creepy now, too. Still feels like it's missing a bit of something, but I like it. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 12:09 PM
Perhaps, though I'll leave it in there as a portmanteau. Thank you, Captain. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:13 PM
yeesh, I'm working on it. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:14 PM
I think I'm going to create a scroll called "How many things involving Arebek can Muro think of?" Go to Comment
Gods of the Wider realm
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 11:28 AM
I'm a little late in asking this, but I'd really like to know those reasons. I think I bastardized the name from Hittite mythology. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
Roack's comment on 2007-03-31 05:16 PM
Perhaps, I've never been a big fan of gnomes myself. The Egoyo began as replacement dwarves, actually, but I suppose they have moved in a more gnommish direction. Go to Comment
Ur-Kanesh Rhyme of the Shievren
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Roack's comment on 2005-12-20 07:04 PM
I feel almost like it's missing something, but as usual with Coldforged items, It's sheer beuaty. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2005-12-07 07:14 PM
I love it, enough said. The name is brilliant, the idea even more so. Regardless of the grammatical errors, 5/5! Go to Comment
Roack's comment on 2005-12-04 06:16 AM
sparK!, I have not seen you around the citadel before, but if you keep turning up such rich, high-quality posts as this, I have no doubt you will be welcomed with open arms. This is a perfect background and campaign defining article. You may want to convert it to a scroll, I had trouble with that my self at first. Go to Comment
The Iothun: A New Look at Giants
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-12 11:59 PM
I really don't know what to say about this, I'm literally speechless. You've delivered an in-depth and insanely beautiful work. To call the Iothun Giants would be an understatement... Go to Comment
Godkiss Butterfly
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Roack's comment on 2005-12-07 08:38 PM
Updated: Clarification on host's survival added Go to Comment
Godkiss Butterfly
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Roack's comment on 2007-04-05 10:36 PM
Hmm, maybe I should start doing some expansion around here. Go to Comment
Roack's comment on 2005-12-03 02:07 AM

Conchyliated Rat, Rattus Ostrea The Conchyliated Rat, or Clam-head Rat, stands 10 cm at the shoulder. Its body is a meter long, with a tail three times that. Unlike their black, furry bodies, Their heads are covered with something akin to mollusk-like shells, excepting the eyes, and terminating in a cruelly hooked beak. This shell, often barbarically and incorrectly referred to as the rat's skull, can be cracked open to reveal lustrous, iridescent nacre. In far off lands, the rats have begun to be de-beaked, and farmed to feed the ever growing hunger for clam-headed jewelery.

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Roack's comment on 2005-12-07 06:49 PM

Thrivval (THRIV-val): Uncannily resembling a cross between a duck and a pinecone, the Thrivval lairs in misty swamps and wetlands. Their eggtooth never atrophies, eventually devoloping into a diminutive horn. The Thrivval's feathers have adapted into the hard, bony ridges that protect it from predators. Thrivvals burrow in the mudbanks near streams, using their shovel-like wings. They then stick their highly sensitive eggtooth out of the mud, and should any animal pass within a few feet, the Thrivval bursts out, rushing in to bite it. This often leads them to bite the feet of travellers with their sharp beaks, earning them the nickname "Toe eaters," among colonists. Because of their abundance in and around humans, many Thrivval-related proucts have been devoloped. Thrivval-plate boots are now high fashion, and their wings make perfect gardening tools. The Thrivval has also become a popular subject in children's stories, often portraying the "grumpy old man" character.

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Jorlek the Undying
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Roack's comment on 2005-12-01 09:20 PM
Perhaps it is because I do not know this setting well, but it is somewhat confusing to me. I wish you'd elaborate more on the mage he was "chosen" by. Other than that, flexible, creative, and enchanting 5/5! Go to Comment
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