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The Knights of Mercy and Grace
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-09 10:45 PM
That's how I got the names, and the concept, actually. I use a lot of persian, middle eastern, turkish, and greek names in the Ylfharn setting. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Roack's comment on 2006-05-06 12:07 AM
Thanks for all your comments guys, and as horribly cliche as it is, I couldn't have done it without all of you. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-24 07:59 PM
End of the Road: (Inspired by They Might Be Giant's "End of the Tour")

Not three miles off the great rock coast lies an unexplained phenomena. Known as "The end of the road," it has become a site of great interest and fear in recent years. The title is somewhat of a misnomer, as no one can really tell whether the road is beggining or ending, instead being a mysterious, five meter long section of cobbled road, complete with the wear of carrige wheels. Many claim to have seen missing sections of road of about the same size elsewhere, and some even go as far as saying they have seen carriges along the road, then drop off passengers, though all reports remain uncomfirmed. The onlything known is that the road suddenly appeared there overnight, roughly three years ago. The one man known to be walking in the area, and therefore a possible witness of the events, has gone missing, many claim he drives an infernal carrige across the road on the anniversary of it's birth.

(Seeing as how this is a scroll I'm not going to go into "The truth," I'll leave that up to you) Go to Comment
Coivn
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-25 11:33 PM
Holy Moley Bjoly! I like it, though the names get easily confusing. One more thing, if the spear is so evil, then why can only Holy beings hold it? Go to Comment
Spectral Tablets
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-29 11:45 PM
I like it, it's original and useful, though not too easily applied out of its setting, which, I might add, I would love to see filled out fully. Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-19 02:31 AM
The most beautiful idea for a city I have EVER set eyes on. Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Roack's comment on 2006-07-21 05:04 AM
Those were cuckoos. Go to Comment
Thick As Thieves
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-14 09:20 PM
If I had the ability to HoH this, I would (Oh wait, I DO!). Also, Muroscras is good. Please come out with more collaborations soon, they make me cry pure joy... Go to Comment
Awanggis
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-08 10:32 PM
I'm a big fan of Insanity in general, especially when related to water. And frogs. And cool noises. And apparently fragmented sentences. Great post, and has that typical Murometz quality to it, which I herebey dub "Muruality." Go to Comment
Topal (Lake Squid)
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-12 07:22 PM
Oh the mollusks! Why is it your posts always turn out so beautiful? Go to Comment
The Maidenhead Wasp
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-27 11:27 PM
This is a nice bug! But you could certainly go into more detail regarding how and why the hosts are treated like Kings. Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 09:09 PM
I've always been fascinated by the use of censers/thuribles as weapons, so this fits well for my settings. I love the history as well, and the fact that though magic and created by a powerful being, it is cannot support munchikinism. Go to Comment
Cloak of Horripilation
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-27 11:25 PM
Once again it my be my bias to well named background names, but I love it. It has great writing too. Go to Comment
Sir Edmund Verney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-15 09:19 PM
It's good, you' never suspect such an innocent-looking man of crime connections, it's a nice twist, it just doesn't have much of an exotic flare to it. Go to Comment
Vephelot's Milk
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-14 12:42 AM
I like it, though the overcomplication does irritate me a bit. I think you should write up Vephelot though, he (she?) sounds interesting. Go to Comment
Vephelot's Milk
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-15 10:07 PM
The overcomplication of obtaining the milk and assasinating an unborn ruler with it, why not just use normal poison on the queen, taking both her and her child out in one fell swoop? Go to Comment
Qacha's Neck
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-15 12:23 AM
I like it, It's a queer little town that I wouldn't mind using. It only has two flaws that I can see, the lack of description on the religion (which can be remedied by another article if you want to type it up) and the sheer size of the thing, otherwise I'm glad such a great poster has joind us. Go to Comment
Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Roack's comment on 2016-11-16 05:52 PM
Names in constructed languages: Check
Things made out of animal parts: Check
References to a wider universe: Check
Detailed cultural integration: Check

This pushes a lot of really good buttons for me. Other than a few grammatical errors which don't seriously effect readability, it's all around solid. I would love to see more weapons, personally, but these two and their uses are quite detailed. Go to Comment
Stebanos Paint
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-03-19 03:11 AM
I like it, very original, though I'd love it if the water of Syalkkothes was explored in greater detail. Go to Comment
The Sword of Fire
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 08:29 AM
"definitely not a candidate." Well I wish I'd thought of it. The one problem I have is with the burning system, though thats because it ever so slightly reminds me of stats. It is of course, easily adjusted, removed, or interpreted differently, so it's not a real problem. 5/5! Go to Comment
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