Quite simply, four sentences does not constitute a post. While I'm at it, why are they feared? What causes them to roam the plains? Furthermore, what type of rune-inscribed/enchanted weapons can they be destroyed with, and again, why? Go to Comment
Beautiful! Well written, imaginative, and full of that special Muruality! I have to say, however, I believe some clams can carry pearls, so the Puchinegs don't have it entirely wrong. Go to Comment
Hooooooo boy! This is a great post, as Moon and Mourn said, a little national-geographic, but I side with the good hunter in saying that's the sort of thing I like. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your posts, Appy! Go to Comment
A long long time ago, in a galaxy not so far away, My brother and I were watching some saturday morning cartoons. Nothing was particularly strange that morning, ntil we happened upon some old reruns of the D&D cartoon. Naturally we wanted to know what the hell this "Dungeons & Dragons" thing was about, and I was delighted to find that my brother had went out and bought the 2nd edition AD&D boxed set with his own money, an epic feat for a ten-year-old!
That very same day I had created, Roack, a second level magic user. Being eight, I had little to no concept of backstory, but Roack would later evolve and change thousands of times, appearing in multiple incarnations, from sorceror, wizard, fighter, rougue, psion, and even a druid at one point. His story has fluctuated like some great ad ever-changing river, but always his name has remained the same.
Of course, beggining my career as a GM did not end Roack's long-standing legacy, and he became used as a play-testing character. This, I still feel, was not enough for my baby, and so in addition to his title appearing on almost everything I have an excuse to use it for, he makes occasional cameos in-game, though only two of my veteran players ever figured out who he was. Go to Comment
I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. Meaning it could be fleshed out a little more, but I still love it! The names, especially, are GREAT! Go to Comment
Dark, creepy Beautiful.However, you have a few spelling/grammar errors, and I'd love it if you delved into more detail about Long Man Death (love the name), The dance of eternity, and the portals, all of which leads to a -.5, so 4.5/5 Go to Comment
The Bosques Society/ Organizations (Ethnic/Cultural)
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Strong post, great name, unique... but short. I'd love it if you either fleshed it out more or posted the numerous references and linked them. Go to Comment
That's how I got the names, and the concept, actually. I use a lot of persian, middle eastern, turkish, and greek names in the Ylfharn setting. Go to Comment
End of the Road: (Inspired by They Might Be Giant's "End of the Tour")
Not three miles off the great rock coast lies an unexplained phenomena. Known as "The end of the road," it has become a site of great interest and fear in recent years. The title is somewhat of a misnomer, as no one can really tell whether the road is beggining or ending, instead being a mysterious, five meter long section of cobbled road, complete with the wear of carrige wheels. Many claim to have seen missing sections of road of about the same size elsewhere, and some even go as far as saying they have seen carriges along the road, then drop off passengers, though all reports remain uncomfirmed. The onlything known is that the road suddenly appeared there overnight, roughly three years ago. The one man known to be walking in the area, and therefore a possible witness of the events, has gone missing, many claim he drives an infernal carrige across the road on the anniversary of it's birth.
(Seeing as how this is a scroll I'm not going to go into "The truth," I'll leave that up to you) Go to Comment
Holy Moley Bjoly! I like it, though the names get easily confusing. One more thing, if the spear is so evil, then why can only Holy beings hold it? Go to Comment
I like it, it's original and useful, though not too easily applied out of its setting, which, I might add, I would love to see filled out fully. Go to Comment
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Water)
AWESOME Go to Comment