This may need to be a scroll, and it could certainly use an expansion. A change of title may be nice as well, considering Ettercaps aren't that well known, especially since we don't all play D&D. Well that, or you could put them up in the life forms, preferably with a twist. Go to Comment
I love it. Personally I would question the all-pervasive time, but that's merely my own preferences. It could use a little embellishing on the Waking/Staring Dreamers, so 4.8/5, But I'll round it off to 5/5 Go to Comment
It sound too me more like it has a MAJOR enchantment of fascination, which would just make it all the more appealing to a wizard.
I can see one of my party members becoming obsessed with this, he's the sorcerer and de facto leader, it will really hamper them. Go to Comment