Strolen's Citadel: Browsing Priv8eye's Comments

The Palace of Profits
Locations (Establishment) (Any)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-07-06 03:57 AM

I foound this one fascinating. Loads of good solid detail weaving a great tale.

Superb. Go to Comment

Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organization (Combative) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-07-03 09:39 AM

Personally I have thought of these guys as a medievil Foreign Legion. Their men come from all places and walks of life, which matters not once through the gates, and are driven by a harsh code of conduct that makes them fierce fighters to be reckoned with. Go to Comment

Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organization (Combative) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-07-04 02:57 AM

Sorry, not clear there. They don't need to serve the fifteen years to be able to be promoted. If you show promise during your term as a turm (did I really just write that?) then you are put forward for promotion to Templar. This could be a tany time during your time in the lower ranks. Go to Comment

Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organization (Combative) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-07-06 10:02 AM

thanks for the comments.

May get around to doing a post regarding the sundering, perhaps mentioning the religion also. Go to Comment

Slurran
Lifeforms (Unique) (Water)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-07-03 03:50 AM

Really neat and terrifing idea. I was expecting something differant when I read the initial intro, but what followed was really well presented and well thought out.

Would not want to find one them. Go to Comment

What's in a Vote?
Articles (Humor/ Editorial) (Citadel Help)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-06-13 03:18 AM

Really good article, well laid out.

I admit to not always voting or commenting, partly because I have 'real'work to do and I could loose myself within Strolen for the day otherwise but they are good points well made and I will try to do more in future. Go to Comment

Council of Bone
Society/ Organization (Mystical) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-06-13 03:23 AM

I enjoyed this. Nice background and details, good reasons for the stuff happening. Go to Comment

Elric's Silver Hammer
Items (Melee Weapons) (Magical)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-29 03:06 AM

Love this item.

Sensible backstory for the problems it causes. Go to Comment

Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
System (Knowledge/Lore) (Historical)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-26 03:04 AM

I really like this. A nice history for a place which gives it a nice rounded background. Nice points like the mane of the Beggars Gate being misunderstood through time. Go to Comment

Marching Barnacles
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Water)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-26 03:07 AM

Beautifull idea, had me grinning all the way through it! Go to Comment

Cambor
Locations (City) (Plains)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-24 05:57 AM

Excellent idea, nicely put forward and described. Also like the comments after, taking the name and using them to identify other items which makes it all that more 'real'. Go to Comment

Zumba, Lada, and Bugi
NPCs (Minor) (Criminal/Espionage)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-24 06:04 AM

Nice idea, nice characters. Go to Comment

Ibn Al-Fadyn
NPCs (Minor) (Travelers)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-22 09:40 AM

Thanks for comment. Yeah he is based a bit on that character, or rather more from the Michael Chrichton novel Eaters of the Dead on which the film was based. Go to Comment

Aspergoi
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Mountains)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-22 04:05 AM

Nice idea. I also like the way that it was their own beleif that kept them alive as opposed to any divine or other intervention. Go to Comment

The Black Soldier
NPCs (Mythic/ Historical) (Combative)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-22 04:11 AM

Its a wonderful idea with fantastic potential. It could be easliy be manipulated to suit any place or time with minor alterations but would suit Gaslamp Fantasy of some form of modern horror really well. Go to Comment

Strawberry Fields
Locations (City) (Swamp)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-19 03:10 AM

really well laid out and thought out. Great idea. My only concerns have been voiced already regarding the setting and the connection to strawberries and mines.

Otherwise good stuff Go to Comment

Styrics
Society/ Organization (Ethnic/Cultural) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-19 05:15 AM

Thanks for the comments.

I spelled checked most of it but never Grammar checked the blurb - quite right to point that out.

If anyone can tell me how to do the bold (not entirely sure) then I will edit it and clean it up a bit. Go to Comment

Styrics
Society/ Organization (Ethnic/Cultural) (Country/ State)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-22 03:51 AM

Updated: Edited for Grammar and to define headers in bold Go to Comment

Topal (Lake Squid)
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Water)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-22 05:43 AM

Just found this one. Really nice post with lots of good detail that make it come alive.

When is Davis Attenburgh covering it? Go to Comment

Theory of Elements
System (Mystical) (General)

Priv8eye's comment on 2006-02-07 04:03 AM

Really interesting stuff and well presented. Got me thinking a lot, and although I wouldn't use it in a game a tpresent I can see how it could be adapted to use in a more 'modern' game (18th cent as you say) quite well.

It almost makes me want to do one just to work with it. Go to Comment