The set up with the other rings hinted at some other form of undead, but this was a nice twist. Maybe a little more indepth description on how it attacks the person's insecurities would be nice. Nice way to complete the set, now how about a submission on Railus and Mordum?

For some reason I can't vote, but I will once it allows me to. Go to Comment

Interesting idea, I have read something like this before. Doesn't really scream Steampunk to me, but is a solid submission. Go to Comment

Decent item, adaptable even without a Steampunk setting. Solid. Go to Comment

Good fit for the quest. Terrifying possibilities. I didn't get to see it before the updates, but I am impressed with this one. A solid submission. Go to Comment

Nice theme and I see you have posted Agony, I will go check that out next. Go to Comment

Anything I could say has already been said. Some comments seem harsh and elitest, but I guess that is what happens when you ask people for their opinions. I think I will hold off on submitting anything for now, but I like your stuff I have read so far. Go to Comment