Hi, Brutus. Welcome to the citadel.

You've got a nice submission here. I like how you added in the part about a lack of prophecies. It keeps it nice and open-ended, which can be nice. Like Dozus has already said, though, it might be better with some sort of more specific plot, so players have something to build on.

I'd recommend splitting up the submission into paragraphs that all dwell on the same subject, like MoonHunter said. It makes submissions easier to read.

Also, I think the name "Azerath" might be very similar to one used in a video game (Warcraft III, or something). While it is perfectly exceptable to make derivative names out of place names in video games, it's sort of disliked here. It's not very creative, and it can get confusing and annoying if enough people do it. Personally, I suggest you make up a more unique name. Go to Comment

Just saying, having her have that needle that's automatically unfindable is a pretty bad idea. It's like playing favorites with imaginary characters. If you're running a game with other people and they find out that the needle is just always wherever they happened not to search, they won't be impressed. I think that you'd be better off saying that it's just very well hidden in her clothes, or just taking another step and making it a magical needle. Go to Comment

wont let me vote btw. Go to Comment

This has potential I think. Just hope it caches on quicker. Go to Comment

How come this has not taken off? if I were more skilled in ideas I would put more up. good job to the guys who thought this Go to Comment

What they said.

("smaller chunks" with lots and lots of Maggotesque details in each!)


Interesting aside: I initially wanted to loathe the name "The Brave People", but it grew on me as I read the piece and I now find it perfect! Go to Comment

WOW! I think Anne would make a good roleplaying character. Can I write about her? Go to Comment

This is Grey on a remote terminal.
Just wanted to say that I quite like this, and although I may not be able to get QUITE as much cooperation out of my players, this definetly inspires me to try more. Go to Comment

"Is it only not illegal amongst these people to murder strangers?"

Dude that question broke my brain. Go to Comment

Two of Pinker's research assistants are working on ways to make the effect switch off after three days of continuous use or project a warning to others that the ring bearer may be infectious. Go to Comment

Local low class prostitutes have taken to advertising services that will 'Blow your socks off'. Go to Comment

very good really thanks Go to Comment

While I do understand where you are coming from and I can appreciate your points, I must say that my DnD group is keeping the dream alive. Yes, we do have 1.5 players who think nothing of their characterization, but the other 3.5 of us nearly sacrifice making balanced characters in favor of making them more interesting and quirky (generally settling for underpowered). Anyway, I hope that other people see this and think more about concepts and think more about making a slightly retarded half-orc cleric dedicated to Pelor than a tricked out rogue made up purely of stats and skill points. Go to Comment

The first plot in here I actually feel like running for my group. Very good work. Go to Comment

I was looking for information on Sweden. Go to Comment

suggested titles, slightly sexier than "the second encounter"

1. Second Time Around
2. Brothels and Betrayals
3. Second Chances
4. Brothel Blues

-Muro :) Go to Comment

Ummm forgive me if I'm wrong but if the attempted kidnapping were a prank, isn't there a very realistic chance it could turn fatal, as the PCs proceed to kill the thugs with the intention of rescuing the girl? Isn't there a ridiculously high likely hood of that in fact? It seems like that sort of situation would be instantly suspicious, because given the propensity for Adventurers on the road to use "Crossbow Diplomacy" no one would pull such a high risk low reward prank. Go to Comment

BACON POWER!!

http://www.boingboing.net/2009/04/15/bb-video-the-flaming.html Go to Comment

Would a human be able to walk on the silt? Go to Comment

I sense a distinct lack of use among naval types... Go to Comment