Are you a bad enough dude to rescue the president?
I enjoyed this one. I was fun and fast paced, an easy read, and I feel inspired by it. Even if that is only inspired to try blowing something up in the near future.
I'm so confused by the changing terms though. From Big Sword, to Black Sword, to Broad Sword... is that purposely misleading, or was it just a really rushed jumble of ideas? I like them all, certainly not your best piece, but it is a good deal better than bad.
Excellent work, Muro and Pariah. There is not much to be said, other than I dont understand one paragraph.
"During its epileptic seizures, while spouting prophecies, Jul-Ghose cannot be harmed by non-magical weapons or any spells! Such is the power of Mokkus seed! However this immunity is non-existent when Jul-Ghose is conscious, which is almost all of the time. It is unknown what Jul-Ghose lifespan could be. It has existed for eight thousand years, according to the P’Cheela’s reckoning. When Jul-Ghose goes epileptic, this can last several minutes or an hour or more. During these times the P’Cheela, if aware, guard the Prophet with demonic fervor, from any that would attempt to take advantage of the chittering, helpless hulk."
Did you mean is is only harmed while in a epileptic state? I don't see why they would need to guard it while briefly immortal.
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Other than that, simply brilliant.