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The Battle of Sahhur
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2009-01-06 02:26 AM
Ive had this on my "favourites" list forever, and I think its time it is seen.

My writing´s in a war-phase right now, so gems like this is great inspiration.

I would really, really love to see some more from this setting.

/David Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-03 11:52 PM
Another one of my favourites, and a great source of inspiration. Dystopic, dysphoric, dystonic and other things beginning with dys...I love it! Perfect in presentation, content, symbolism and atmosphere. What else is there to say? 5/5, and it damn well deserves it. Good job! /David Go to Comment
The Black Soldier
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-30 05:18 PM
I really, really like this... please finish it so we can vote on it... short as it is, this is one of the main inspirations for my Locastus setting... /David Go to Comment
Dirziet Model-6
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-21 05:15 PM
Oh yes, look at this goodie I dug outa the closet. I´m always looking forward to the Cap´ns subs, and this is a good one!

/David Go to Comment
Buck-Ogre Rum
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-22 02:31 PM
Wise and witty. I always liked this one. /David Go to Comment
Attack of the Golems!
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-04 06:59 AM
Another one of my favourites. Dark and dystopic? Terminator in fantasy style? Yes please!!
Love this idea. Deserves every inch of a 5/5. Good job! /David Go to Comment
The Old World
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-03 09:03 AM
Ive been going back to my favourite posts on the site lately, just to show appreciation to the people who have inspired me the most. This is one of them. I like a good solid backstory for both PC´s, NPC´s and the entire setting. This is a good example of that, a well explored history that includes the chaotic touch so common in our own world´s history. Great job!

/David Go to Comment
E'Scatonia's Little Chest
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-16 03:51 PM
This is genius-level stuff, Muro. Rife with detail and a perfect back-story. You find yourself liking this girl, demon-loving though she is. This is going on my Favourite list, and up on HoH tomorrow. Brilliant job! /David Go to Comment
Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-13 07:05 AM
Love this one. An institution in its own right. They should teach the doctrine of Mathom instead of that Intelligent Design crap. Here´s a deity with some LOGIC to ´im. Go to Comment
Egoyo
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-10-05 05:50 AM
Missed this one.. interesting new race Go to Comment
Runecasting - Dwarven Magics
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-24 07:51 AM
I like this - a lot! It deserves being seen! /David Go to Comment
The Closed Fist and Open Palm Tavern
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-10-05 04:27 AM
It could be more detailed, but paints a nice intriguing picture... I like it! /David Go to Comment
Walker
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-04 01:38 PM
Man, do I love urban fantasy... Go to Comment
The Omen Plague
Systems  (Ecological)   (Specific)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-10-20 06:22 AM
Nice idea. Im working on a disease sub right now, and this is excellent inspiration.. Go to Comment
Grey District
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-15 07:55 AM
This is interesting, in that it has explored some cultural aspects of two races clashing. Go to Comment
WWMWBI - Invaders on The Shore
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-10-05 04:51 AM
Interesting cultural analylsis.. I like things like this - a great tool for building a more believable campaign Go to Comment
The Hell of Dry Bones
Locations  (Desert)   (Other)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-09 09:46 AM
A definite favourite of mine... Deserves to be seen! Go to Comment
golden golem soul coin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-04-03 09:51 AM
I´ll give this 1,5/5, purely because it is an idea with a lot of potential.
This post is also a good example that an idea needs exploration in-depth and creative development before it is presented to anyone.
Me, I think it´s sad that this really interesting idea never recieved that attention and, therefore, became stillborn. It could have been so much more....

I would have put this in the hall of dishonour, if we had one.... Not because it´s a bad idea in itself, but because a post needs work.

/David Go to Comment
Lost Artifact
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-04 04:19 AM
This post is interesting. Not in itself, but in the comments and assistance the author was given. It is a good example of the need to brainstorm with others to expand a rough idea. I have a feeling this plot could be made into a nice rpg adventure or even a book - there are lots of so-called *recognized* fantasy authors that make do with a lot less... *cough* Eddings *cough, cough* Go to Comment
Bloody Smile
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Ouroboros's comment on 2011-04-26 06:24 PM


Wow, now, this is truly sick and twisted. I like it, especially the chewy names and original scenery. But, captain, I´m worried about what your bedtime stories were when you were a kid..:)



//David


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