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The Maul
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Other)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-13 02:59 PM
That box with the Maul locations will (as soon as I can get the illustrator to work) contain an itemized map of the place.... I will get it done..I will!...Promise! :-) /David Go to Comment
The Maul
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Other)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-16 11:25 AM
Over the next few days, Ill make this into a codex and add a few locations in as separate subs. The rouge gallery will be split up between these subs. It´ll be a bit messy for a while, but bear with me. /David Go to Comment
The Maul
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Other)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-17 06:03 PM
OK, Ladies and Bruces, I´ve put some final touches on the Maul by adding a map to the main sub. Hope you will enjoy playing it as much as I did writing it... /David Go to Comment
The Maul
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Other)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-18 04:04 PM
Thanks y´all. Next up is a map of the Witherdowns... Go to Comment
Cauldron of the Cold Camp
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-05 03:43 PM
This is a good one. I especially like the "quirks", that makes it memorable. Its one of those things that can be used both to drive a plot, or just for comic relief. Nice work! Go to Comment
Rage of the Forest
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-05 03:54 PM
Definitely useable, although I have some problems putting this creature in its context. Perhaps this will better come into its own when the Queen of the Dark Woods stub is developed? I´m not sure, but wouldn´t this sub benefit from some of the "mythos" around the creature - you know, rumors of it happening to the fort on the other side of the mountain, that type of thing? Still, a good solid sub. The name is perfect, and the backstory´s sweet. Good job! /David Go to Comment
The Dome of the Seven Captains
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-03 10:40 PM
OK, guys. Here´s my latest installment in the Locastus series - a building that contains the distilled history of the City, and a few hints to the Moon´s love life....:-)

I´m not 100% happy with how this one turned out, so please, if you have suggestions or critique, let me know. Hope you enjoy it! /David Go to Comment
The Dome of the Seven Captains
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-03 11:40 PM
Updated: I´ve made a few last-minute changes, some small details. Now I feel a lot better about this entry, though it may still need some work Go to Comment
The Dome of the Seven Captains
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-04 07:38 AM
That is an excellent idea. It might just be what this sub needs. I´ll think about it, and get back to it tonight, Thanks a lot, Wulf. Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 03:08 PM
OK, this is my take on the whole "flying eyeball" cliché. Enjoy! /David Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 03:28 PM
Orb-Bats...Orbats..Get it? Get it?....:-) Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-13 11:19 AM
Yeah, I know...something with the gallery, I guess...I´ll try to fix it. The pic is drawn by my friend Johanna, who is a really talented artist. Hopefully, I´ll be able to post more of her stuff soon. /David Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (City/ Ruin)
Ouroboros's comment on 2008-04-22 04:34 AM
Wheee...! Nice! Thanks, Strolen! Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-01 09:19 PM
I´m throwing this one out there, not quite, but mostly complete. This is a big one, and partly more story than NPC. If any of you think that does not belong on this site, please let me know and I´ll remove it.

Plot hooks, some links to as yet unfinished stuff and some final tinkering to be done. For now I need to distance myself for a day or so before I can come back to it.

Enjoy!

/David Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 05:32 AM
Updated: OK, added the last bit. I´m not adding plot hooks to this sub, instead I decided on some playtesting anecdotes. I hope you´ll enjoy it!

/David Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 09:07 AM
The Moon was inspired by equal parts The Lady of Pain from Planescape and Empress Laseen from The Malazan Book of the Fallen. I do think that a solid backstory is necessary to understand motivations and so on. Quirks are important, but only when you present the reason for a character having them. I LIKE quirks...:-)

One thing I´ve never learnt to create is weak female characters. Dunno why, but I just cant do it - they all turn out to be tough. My damsels in distress turn around on their own volition and kicks their kidnappers in the nuts. Sometimes I think it would be nice if they asked me first if they could do that...:-)

/David Go to Comment
Crystal Rose
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 09:16 AM
Not bad at all. I have three criteria for a plant in a RPG: Habitat, Reproduction and Use, and this sub adresses each of these in turn. Are you intending to add to this? In that case, I´ll withhold my vote ´til its finished. Great work! /David Go to Comment
30 ZOMBIE FREAKS!
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-10-31 05:10 PM
Haha...awesome, well written and with a nasty touch of humor...me like! `Tis a perfect day for zombies, huh? Reckon I´ll put on "Evil dead" before this night´s through...
/David Go to Comment
Megamothoid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-10-31 03:38 PM
Not a bad idea. Im not a Mecha fanatic, but this can certainly be used. Its always good to have a few of those things up your sleeve if the PC´s are just too lucky or too clever...

*gulp* "We have to fight THAT?"

Hell has no wrath like a DM pissed off at too many lucky throws....

/David Go to Comment
Deaders - a different take on Zombies
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-10-31 09:00 AM
Zombies of a steam-fantasy setting - Obviously inspired by the Remaking the Undead and Undead Economy subs. Plot hooks and some minor detail still to be added. Enjoy! /David Go to Comment
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