I can only echo what has already been said. This needs expanding. I do like the basic concept, so please give it the attention and effort it deserves. And dont be shy of the spell check button. Grammatically, this needs some cleaning up.
I would suggest adding info on the general area, the village and its key locations and prominent figures. Perhaps there are more than one type of undead?
In short: Expand, elaborate, refine. Good idea, sloppy presentation.
So. Now I understand your "Elib" post a bit better. I like this John Keel approach.
What would be the cause or requirements for a "breakthrough"? Are we talking multiple variants of Earth or only one? Would these creatures be inherently evil?
Just a few random thoughts. I´ll be back with more:)
It as a certain unfinished feel to it, this sub.. But interesting, and original. Reminds me of "The Hell of Dry Bones". I have a great love of hells and pocket realms...
So, since you will be adding to this sub, I´ll recast my vote when it is finished.