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Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-05-18 11:56 PM


This is a problem, but we can't truly pursue it.



 



Some people are simply literally "Comment-less", and as of such don't know what to post. This can be caused by a amazing article, a horrible article, or a article that is just... Normal, and doesn't seem special. Also, this site is based in America, and there are no laws making it obligatory to comment.



 



But it is a problem, I think there should be some sort of reward for commenting. And as more people comment the reward decreases, and as less people comment the reward increases.


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30 Street Crimes and Cons
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-05-22 08:37 AM


This is very useful, I plan to use this against Players ( PCs ) in the future. When the chance arises I will look at this list, and see what I can do. 


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The Tower Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-02-21 10:01 PM


I like it, but sadly I see no drawbacks. I do not mind such, there probably are drawbacks. Like putting the shield upside down would make the tower upside down, or no? Anyways, good idea!


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Sonorous Aquaticus: The Beasts of Thunder Reef
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-02-21 09:52 PM


Nice idea, I'm editing the Thunderstones again soon, but they'll still fit into this series you have here.


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Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 03:15 PM
Update: Finished, well, mostly, will make a submission for the character of Trueno and give the hunter a name and a submission for GMs who want PCs to experience the event...

I'll also make the animal that laughed for a better effect. Along with the wife so the PCs can aid or stop her... Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 04:02 PM


I intentionally left it, kind of vague for some flexibility for GMs if they want to use it, I realized I made it too flexible...



The animal was originally a wolf / coyote / fox so you were right on the dot there...



Trueno, was originally a ex - adventurer / bard, I saw that I forgot that crucial fact, but the stones he attempted to make were a fail anyways...



I personally love the idea of the small magical animals too, so much possibility...



The animal won't be described deeply here, it'll be made as a separate submission, I was going to do that with Trueno and the Hunter, who still has no name -_-, but I decided to keep them in this submission and make the animal separate.



Thank you for the comment


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Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 04:12 PM
Update: Edited, more fleshed out, re - rate if you want, and give me advice if you wish Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 08:41 PM
Update: Updated the spelling, and what - not, I'll add how the stone formed in the creature's stomach, and will make the creature after this is finished... The punctuation shall also be re - done soon Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 08:51 PM
Update: The creature has a name now, it is a Lis, Polish for Fox, also changed the names of some characters

May give the wife and son a name soon.....

Also, this should be it unless there's a suggestion... Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 08:56 PM
Update: Edited, gave the wife a name, proof read...

Will give Grzmot's and Cichy's son a name, and maybe the alchemist, and may give the alchemist a more important roles... Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-02-21 09:57 PM
Update: Added a somewhat defect, don't know if it's good. I gotten used to Star Wars RPGs, so may not be good :|

I hope to update it again once I get into medieval stuff again. I also noticed that this really is actually in D&D, dunno if I got it from that though, I've seen this before somewhere else. Go to Comment
Thunderstones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-05-18 10:59 PM
Update: Mostly a spell and grammar update. I have increased in activity after a disappearance and hope to soon expand upon this, making NPCs and Creatures relating to this story. Go to Comment
Crossbow Door Trap
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 04:23 PM


This shall be expanded soon, I'm adding more submissions for linking, and I'lll described this better...



plus I'm getting more experienced and what - not


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Crossbow Door Trap
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-18 09:19 PM


Exploding seemed cliched to me, I see explosions in everything, but warped I didn't think about, I've never seen poison used before unless it's a one time thing in a spy movies, I know you aren't bashing, I hate it when you criticize something, and be accused of bashing...


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Thunderstone Door Trap
Dungeons  (Any)   (Doors)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-08-20 04:20 PM
Update: Accidentally messed up a little, Go to Comment
Thunderstone Door Trap
Dungeons  (Any)   (Doors)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-11-17 02:02 PM


Thank you,



I like the idea of tears or laughter of a divine being, that was a plan, but I don't know how it didn't go through, I had a name and stuff for the divine being but didn't go through :/



I may add the item Thunderstones soon to explain what they are in a separate topic so this can stay on topic to the trap...


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30 Army Officers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-08-20 02:49 PM
A very good submission, very useful, and adds some diversity. Go to Comment
Armour of the Pure
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-08-20 10:58 PM
This is unique Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2011-05-19 11:39 AM


Great idea, I like it.



 



I will definitely use this for my RPs, since it's a Forum Based RP I will link back here to give you credit.


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Barkeeper Brelan
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Nuchiha101's comment on 2010-08-20 08:20 PM
A nice NPC, if I had more votes I would've voted for at least 4.5 Go to Comment
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