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What Is A Dwarf
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-07 08:02 AM

I like that it's focused and pretty straightforward. A section rebutting alternative interpretations could have added a little depth to it, but it is fine as-is. Showing Dwarves through the lens of a scholar gives it a nice, readable tone.

I find myself wanting to know more about the author of the poem. Was it common for one of the lower caste to be able to read and write? Or to be able to write poetry? Was this an individual not representative of the Dwarva caste? Was this someone who felt trapped by their role in Dwarven society but wished for more? These are questions that the sub raises but can't answer because Matteus Carter doesn't know them. I like it when a sub gets me pondering like this.


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Stears-Cusick Cyborg
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-08 06:33 PM

How has this not been voted on yet?

I guessed at the origins, which, since it wasn't outright stated until the end, made me enjoy this a little more. Despite adapting from an outside source, this still feels like full-fledged Cosmic Era to me. Good work.

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The Needwain
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Local)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 07:34 PM
It's a good idea and one that can be adapted easily to fit the campaign at hand. I would love to see some additional, thought-provoking ideas added. That would bump this up a few notches for me. Go to Comment
Congeria
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-03 07:15 AM
This is really creative with an unexpected twist. I love it. Go to Comment
She Who Dreams
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 08:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
She Who Dreams
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 02:00 PM
Welcome! This is a good first sub. I like that there are multiple points along her history where she could be brought into a game: early on as a villain (perhaps even one who causes grief to the PCs or those they care about; would they be willing to forgive her?), as the protector of the forest, during the war (many possibilities there), and during her later rule. Go to Comment
OSF-05 - Wasp's Nest
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-03 05:45 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Rebirth of the Fleet
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-09 08:43 AM
I most heartily agree. Go to Comment
Rebirth of the Fleet
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-06 10:10 PM
I think this is absolutely fantastic. I love the concept of flying ships. The details are amazing and well thought out. It took me a few days to work my way through it, but it was worth the effort. Go to Comment
Cosmic Era: Doom Bestiary
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-02 09:56 PM
As someone who has never played Doom, this is awesome. I love the Cosmic Era twists. Definitely some critters to avoid :) Go to Comment
OSF-03 - Spinner
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-30 09:43 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
OSF-03 - Spinner
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 08:48 AM
Think of a rotating bubble on the top (dorsal) and bottom (ventral) surfaces of the cough drop that lets the pilot and gunner face any direction. "Top" and "bottom" can be ambiguous terms in certain contexts (like space or biology) and so dorsal (think dorsal fin, as in the fin on a shark's back) and ventral are used to be more specific. Go to Comment
The Timeless Pocket Watch
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-29 08:30 PM
Creative and a good first submission. Welcome! Go to Comment
Lover's Downfall
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-29 12:31 PM
You misspelled Bean Sidhe. Go to Comment
Lover's Downfall
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-30 09:39 PM
The intro is great and it's certainly useful as-is. It's also true that I wish there was more backstory and general flavor. Go to Comment
Oscv 02 Baleful Eye
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-29 08:28 PM
It's nice to see some good sci-fi here. Go to Comment
Progressive Stiletto
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-28 07:14 PM
The Flight of Retribution
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-25 07:33 PM

I know I'm risking my geek cred here, but I've never actually played Doom. I can kind of guess that the demons look like demons, but beyond that the names mean very little to me. A little more detail on that front would have been beneficial for me.


While I like the factions idea, there's too much danger of the players getting bored before the action takes place. It feels like there could be a whole nother dimension (har har) to this. Not saying I know what that could be, just that I think there should :P


(Having said all that, I wish I'd been able to see this movie instead of the ghastly failure that was Event Horizon.)


There are some really cool pieces in this, such as the lightning charging the device.


I love the idea of taking the pirate attack up a notch by throwing in the demons. If done right, you could make the pirates just this side of too tough for the PCs. And once they think they can get a hand on the situation, Bam! Throw some nasty demons their way and make them really sweat it out.


The various scenarios are good, although as Mourn pointed out you can only second guess your players so much. Players can sometimes be really good at coming up with something completely random that borks up your plans.

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Key, Quill, and Seal
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-22 03:42 PM
My apologies about the confusion; I was having difficulty picking the category. As far as I could tell, there really isn't anything for items that matched religious relic.

Because of its size the quill can't use regular ink. It would need something more viscous that wouldn't simply pour out. Also, because it is unwieldy while requiring precise control it would be very difficult to use. Imagine a huge iron pen that will dump all of its ink if it does more than barely touch the paper. Go to Comment
Key, Quill, and Seal
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-22 03:43 PM
I will add an idea at the end explaining the Seal in more detail. Go to Comment
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