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Jakthra
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-02 09:48 PM
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Axtrami
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 08:26 AM
More excellent work, SE. Keep 'em comin'! Go to Comment
The Bygnok
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-05-14 02:04 PM


Overall, I think this is an excellent idea. This is an intriguing race, just alien enough to make interacting with them interesting and quirky.



I would also like to see some detail about how the eye color and affinity aspect works. Perhaps some concrete examples?



What sort of advice are you looking for in order to take it out of Advice Requested?


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Ouzquin and Nantuin Xactaki
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-30 10:22 AM
Once again, an awesome Ouzquin Dremorix sub. 5/5 Go to Comment
Axtrami Haiq Ouzala
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-30 10:19 AM
5/5 and have an HoH Go to Comment
The Sending of Axtrami
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-26 10:41 PM
A nice bit of history. I'm liking the Ouzquin Dremorix. Go to Comment
Vaxatra
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-27 07:57 PM
More Ouzquin Dremorix goodness. I love it. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-23 08:50 AM

As Dozus said, this reminds me of Japanese Oni.

I really like these kinds of demons. They fit into the broad category of evil and monstrous, yet they also represent a specific archetype.

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WWMWBI - There were no horses?
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-11 05:29 PM


Interesting and thought provoking.


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Anodyne Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-28 11:44 AM


Definitely an assassin's friend, although I would expect it to be smaller if it was originally used for vivisection. Good backstory.


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Magical Pottery
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-29 05:58 PM


A nice collection of useful ideas.


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Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-04-05 04:34 PM


I can see a few possible uses for this.



First, a player agrees to start out with an insane character, someone who just finished up their time as a goat. It can be tricky, but having a character who is mad can add all sorts of fun and complications to a story.



Second, what do the players do when they discover that their bounty (who must be captured alive) has been turned into a goat? Especially if their employer is not the forgiving type.



I would love to see how players deal with trying to get close enough to examine an artifact that has such a nasty effect based solely on proximity.


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Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-25 09:27 PM

I am always impressed when someone can base a culture around one central thing, such as glass, and have it come out feeling internally consistent and really creative rather than forced. This is well done. I can't wait to read the related Ouzquin Dremorix subs.


There's enough detail here that I can really visualize the culture and their tools.


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The Rotter
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-04-04 11:15 AM


I like it; the powers are focused and balanced while the history gives it depth and fully explains its existence.


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The Flayed One
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-28 06:35 PM


I love mythical feel. The language rather effectively paints a picture not only of the mythology but also of how cultures can meld together.



I suppose that a priest can only perform that ritual once, though.


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The Minotauri
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-30 07:54 PM

Another gem. A horrid, disgusting, assault of evil and madness upon the senses; a fruitful method of tormenting heroes; a vision into the mind of the insane. That kind of gem :)

I must find some way to use this! Such a twisted spout of creativity must not be wasted.

5/5 and an HoH.


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What Makes a Weapon Magic?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
MysticMoon's comment on 2014-08-20 10:28 AM

As has been said, this is short and to the point. I've been exposed to these ideas in numerous other ways, so I was a little disappointed that there wasn't anything new in here for me. Having said that, this article would be perfect for someone who has been blindly picking up +25 Holy Defenders of Dancing Vorpal Snickersnackiness; something this succinct and well stated should be just the thing to get them thinking about all the things they've taken for granted.

One additional example I was immediately reminded of: the notch at the base of a Kukri's blade is said to be representative of Shiva.

Also: these points are perfect jumping off places for new subs.


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Marching Barnacles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-06-01 01:59 PM


BUMP and an HOH


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The Bastion - A Light Tower
Locations  (City)   (Underground)
MysticMoon's comment on 2014-09-22 02:46 PM
I really like this. It's just enough to fire up my imagination. I'm actually kind of happy about the lower level of detail; sometimes it's nicer to be inspired than handed a full platter and this sub fits that bill (follow this partial/mixed metaphor at your own risk :P ). Go to Comment
One Hundered Twenty Three Islands!
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-01-04 04:28 PM


Oh great. Now that I know this is here, I feel compelled to read them all. I will vote when my eyes stop bleeding.


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