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Temple of the Golden King and Silver Queen
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-25 05:47 PM
Only voted, as everything I would say has already been said. 5/5 Go to Comment
Niyott
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
MysticMoon's comment on 2010-12-08 01:51 PM


How wonderfully horrible! I think I will send my players after some bit of hidden lore that has already been gobbled up. See just how many hoops a Niyott can get them to jump through, knowing that a physical confrontation will only destroy what they seek.


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Earthwyrm
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Underground)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-16 09:52 PM


Excellent.


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Boulderkin
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-16 08:39 PM


Excellent. These creatures would be helpful for introducing a healthy amount of chaos into a game at just the right moment.



And I love the "lemming grenades" bit.


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Hill Turtles
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Plains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-16 10:09 PM


Another well-designed earth elemental.


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The Last Zombie
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 07:30 PM
I rather like the mysteriousness of it. The imagery is evocative. Go to Comment
The Zombie Strain
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-02 09:17 AM
This is excellent. I can see why it was a quest winner. The ease of spreading in concert with the slow onset of symptoms makes this especially frightening. Go to Comment
Harakan
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 07:32 PM
There are a lot of useful elements to this and the whole paints an interesting picture. Go to Comment
Twenty Zombie Encounters/Seeds
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 07:14 PM
Some nicely creative ideas here. Go to Comment
Fire Flies
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-11 09:45 AM
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Zutul
Locations  (World)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-04-03 12:17 AM


Well written and useful.


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Battleleaf Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-28 08:16 AM


Considering the time and focus it takes to grow and prepare this armor, I imagine it only goes to the finest and most dedicated of warriors. Knowing this, I'm sure others give a healthy dose of respect to any elf they see wearing it.


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Relentless Kiss of Molten Rage
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-28 03:40 PM


Nice. I do enjoy elemental creatures and powers and this delivers, while also adding in characters that feel rage, loss, pride, and love.



My favorite part is the Fury Invoking Mantle: The wielder is not immune to this blast, and as such it is only ever used once. Then the sword gets a new bearer.



A sword that can vaporize its wielder in a suicide attack has crossed over into a new class of uber. :)


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The Serpent's Teeth
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-01 11:36 PM


This could make for an interesting recurring villain. A knife that continues to find and strengthen a succession of bad guys, with the players not realizing right away that it is the weapon which is the real enemy.


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30 Medical Texts
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-05 08:19 PM


This is quite excellent. 5/5


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General Posting Advice
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-06-27 02:47 PM
I heartily agree that content is king.

As for the rest, I am still trying to find the most effective approach for my own writing. I have sat down and written stuff from beginning to end without any attempt at organization. Some of those were received well and others weren't. I have tried doing bullet points and filling in the details but those never do well for me (I suspect that it creates an intellectual distance between me and my writing that shows through; writing code and writing subs are two very different things.) Lately, I've been doing an initial 400-600 word intro and then iteratively adding more to the end over the course of a few days. Then I go back and look for holes and do some minor tweaking and editing. I've found that if I don't finish something within a week, It'll never happen.

I think the journey to understanding how best to organize writing is an individual one that we all must travel down if we wish to improve. There are no simple formulas or easy steps. However, subs like this are helpful because they provide food for thought on this journey. Go to Comment
Edgar the Ever-Wandering
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-16 05:55 PM


I really like this. There are enough little details about Edgar to highlight his personality and how he has responded to adversity.



Possible plot hook: Edgar is wrongfully imprisoned. He fully expects to be exonerated, but only after his trial, which will be in about six months. How can he prove that keeping him locked up will only spell disaster for the locals?


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Order of the Iron-Shod Boot
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
MysticMoon's comment on 2010-12-10 09:02 AM


Excellent. The important members section adds a nice level of depth. This situation creates the perfect level of tension for a great story or campaign arc.


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Twin Lotus
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-07-22 11:14 PM
I really like the image of lotus hammers. Wish there was a picture to go with it.

The backstory is great and adds the kind of depth that I like. Go to Comment
Wind-catching cape
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2010-12-29 11:07 PM


Cool idea.


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