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Dimensional Tap Reactor
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
MysticMoon's comment on 2014-08-25 05:23 PM
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The Most Serene and Devoted Temple of the Moon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-08 06:44 PM

This is simple, straightforward, and elegantly done. It makes me wonder what other sorts of wonders exist in such a world.

If I ever had cause to send the players out on a scavenger hunt, I would include a shard of the sun and/or the moon and then make them work to discover this place. And, perhaps, by having them go to both places they might learn something by what each says about the other. (Not that they'd want them to stop their rivalry! That would be apocalyptic :P )

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The Scavengers
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2014-08-25 07:22 PM
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Dwarven Calendar
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-08 06:25 PM

A lot of nice touches with this one:

Using the runes as a way of marking time shows the importance of the runes to the Dwarven mindset. Breaking the assumption that folk living underground would have the same way of measuring time that we do. Using the length of days as a way to illustrate the Dwarven culture.

Creative and thought-provoking.


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All Quiet on the West Third Street Front
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-27 11:37 AM
An entertaining read. Go to Comment
Stout Lagerale
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-07 09:52 AM

While this does fit somewhat into the usual ideal of a Dwarf, it doesn't feel stereotypical to me. The stories told to keep good little Dwarves in line is a nice touch, especially since it has real life analogues. The tankard-axe is pure awesomeness. And even though this is more "real" Dwarf than some of your most recent subs, it still sticks its metaphorical tongue at Dwarven society; despite the stories and the failures of others, Stout has managed to cross the line and live the life he wants.

Even before the end, I had a feeling this was a character you had played. The offhand references to past events had that nostalgic scent to me. Sounds like fun times.

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The Hedge Maze
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Plains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-27 11:44 AM
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Hell Knight: The Tragedy of Celsia Rimeheart.
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-23 08:44 AM
An interesting direction for Celsia to take. I think it helped for me to read the original sub before starting on this one. This is an enjoyable read. I like where you're going with Lazarus and his crew. Go to Comment
Seven Forms Ascendant Hunter 1.0
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-21 08:46 PM
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Not So Secret Identity
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-21 03:32 PM
A fun read. A good window into a supers setting. Go to Comment
What Is A Dwarf
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-07 08:02 AM

I like that it's focused and pretty straightforward. A section rebutting alternative interpretations could have added a little depth to it, but it is fine as-is. Showing Dwarves through the lens of a scholar gives it a nice, readable tone.

I find myself wanting to know more about the author of the poem. Was it common for one of the lower caste to be able to read and write? Or to be able to write poetry? Was this an individual not representative of the Dwarva caste? Was this someone who felt trapped by their role in Dwarven society but wished for more? These are questions that the sub raises but can't answer because Matteus Carter doesn't know them. I like it when a sub gets me pondering like this.


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Stears-Cusick Cyborg
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-08 06:33 PM

How has this not been voted on yet?

I guessed at the origins, which, since it wasn't outright stated until the end, made me enjoy this a little more. Despite adapting from an outside source, this still feels like full-fledged Cosmic Era to me. Good work.

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The Needwain
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Local)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 07:34 PM
It's a good idea and one that can be adapted easily to fit the campaign at hand. I would love to see some additional, thought-provoking ideas added. That would bump this up a few notches for me. Go to Comment
Congeria
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-03 07:15 AM
This is really creative with an unexpected twist. I love it. Go to Comment
She Who Dreams
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 08:32 PM
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She Who Dreams
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 02:00 PM
Welcome! This is a good first sub. I like that there are multiple points along her history where she could be brought into a game: early on as a villain (perhaps even one who causes grief to the PCs or those they care about; would they be willing to forgive her?), as the protector of the forest, during the war (many possibilities there), and during her later rule. Go to Comment
OSF-05 - Wasp's Nest
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-03 05:45 PM
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Rebirth of the Fleet
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-09 08:43 AM
I most heartily agree. Go to Comment
Rebirth of the Fleet
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-06 10:10 PM
I think this is absolutely fantastic. I love the concept of flying ships. The details are amazing and well thought out. It took me a few days to work my way through it, but it was worth the effort. Go to Comment
Cosmic Era: Doom Bestiary
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-02 09:56 PM
As someone who has never played Doom, this is awesome. I love the Cosmic Era twists. Definitely some critters to avoid :) Go to Comment
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