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30 Gods of Tirexia
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-04-13 06:39 PM
Good catch on the double fox thing. Bad editing on my part.

Foxes are actually very good hunters; they are a very determined and clever animal. With Moravar I was going more for showing him as a clever hunter rather than being part of a pack mentality, as wolves do. Moravar looks favorably upon the lone hunter who can prove his intelligence rather than brute force when taking down prey. Go to Comment
Deck the . . . Dungeon?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-28 11:37 AM


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Gideon's Mercy
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-28 11:33 AM


A most excellent creation, with a nice backstory and interesting powers/drawbacks. Truly an item for only the bravest kind of hero!


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Red Armor Mk. VII
Items  (Armor)   (Non-Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-27 06:50 PM
Interesting piece of equipment. The history and drawbacks give it a real world feel.

I've had a fascination with powered armor since reading Heinlein's Starship Troopers, so I definitely enjoyed reading this. Go to Comment
The Twelve Days of Christmas-Strolen.com Style
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-28 11:57 AM


What fun! I'll have to go through and read some of those.


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Dirge Mace
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-23 01:44 PM


Excellent. When it comes to this genre I think technical descriptions are a must. What is the point of such different technology/physics without them?


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Woodwise
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-26 06:31 AM


Excellent. I agree with valadaar on all points.


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Woodwise
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-26 06:35 AM
You can always edit the sub to include more detail or add them as idea scrolls at the end. I think the ideas you listed are intriguing and would be wonderful additions once fleshed out. Go to Comment
The Ship of Seven Shores
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-27 08:19 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Blitzhammer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-23 01:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Spinneret Stylus
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-24 08:49 AM


A good combination of benefit and drawback with an intriguing history behind it.


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The Bow of Seven Swans
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-28 12:01 PM


A nice item on its own, but I especially like how the various subs are being tied together. I look forward to more.


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The Kingdom of Seven Princes
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-23 01:31 PM


Intriguing.



More?


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Gateshatter
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-07 01:53 PM
I read this as a sort of take on Alexander's solution to the Gordian Knot.

"Kindly stop with the bureaucratic runaround before I use this hammer to remove it permanently." Go to Comment
Gateshatter
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-07 02:01 PM


I love the benefit/drawback balance. I think it works very well. The only thing missing is the backstory.


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The Shimmering Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-23 01:29 PM


So many possibilities for sowing chaos and destruction with this :)


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Winter's Fang
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-19 02:42 PM
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Moradin's Piece
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Sentient)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-12-02 04:41 PM
I really like this. For some reason it makes me think of Roland from Stephen King's Gunslinger books. Go to Comment
Talari Eggs
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-11-24 08:20 AM


A subtle foe that is difficult to detect and defeat.



I think their use as torture device and food is what makes it unique and intriguing, while also saying much about the Shalari.


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Demon Spectacles
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-08-26 04:57 PM


Nice one, Cheka. Good backstory and a nicely flawed item that provides good fodder for ideas.


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