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AgroGnomes of Beta Arconis
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-30 08:24 AM
Said much more eloquently than I.

The info about how long it takes livestock to mature is interesting and maybe something I can incorporate if I ever revisit this sub. Go to Comment
AgroGnomes of Beta Arconis
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-31 10:28 PM
Update: Added more details and some fluff text to give a better sense of Gnomish society. Go to Comment
AgroGnomes of Beta Arconis
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-31 10:42 PM

Plot Hooks:







  • The PCs track a known criminal with a bounty on her head to Beta Arconis. She is hiding out in one of the numerous fishing villages. Good luck getting help from the insular Gnomes or the persecuted fishermen.

  • Now that Beta Arconis is no longer the inhospitable rock it once was, numerous other races are pushing to create their own settlements. The Gnomes are doing their best to block these attempts. The PCs may be hired by outsiders to help expedite the process or they may side with the Gnomes and help them defend their world.

  • Someone from offworld has been sabotaging operations on Beta Arconis: poisoning crops, setting fire to grain silos, blowing up machinery. Is it a rival provider of food commodities seeking to break the Gnomish hold on trade? A hate group? A lone maniac?


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Fields of Flesh
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-24 09:25 PM

My first thought while reading this: Damn, I wish I had the video game. My second: If I keep reading I will already know what happens and I can never be the player who gets to explore this place. My third: Screw it, I need to know what's happening.


I was not disappointed.


I wish I had more to add to the discussion but the other comments have all said what I wanted to and more. I too would love to see a bestiary; when is this happening? ;)


Your descriptions are great and the concepts excellent. Your mind must be a twisted place!


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The Maritime Bank of Martinesse
Systems  (Mercantile)   (Historical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-20 08:49 AM
A case could be made that the difference between our banking system and the Maritime Bank is that the pirates are more honest about their intentions ;)

I think that would make an excellent plot hook. Perhaps an enterprising individual believes himself far too clever to get caught and tries to rope the PCs into his scheme. Go to Comment
The Maritime Bank of Martinesse
Systems  (Mercantile)   (Historical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-20 08:14 AM
This is a really excellent first sub. Congrats! I agree with what the others said. This is entertaining and creative.

My only quibble here is that these are pirates... people who make a life out of taking from others despite the risk of execution if caught. I'd expect to see numerous attempts at gaming the system. Go to Comment
The Djavarga
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Area)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-13 03:33 PM
Scras, your 100 word subs remind me of an interesting piece of art where some action is caught midmotion and the mind can't help but start filling in the details. Go to Comment
The Strange People of Khor Kal'ah
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-13 02:09 PM
I am impressed that you can say so much with so little, although it seems to me that this is more of a stub. Go to Comment
The Strange People of Khor Kal'ah
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-13 03:23 PM
Maybe I should revise my statement to say that I have no idea how to vote on this. Go to Comment
Lifegiver; holy sword of Linn.
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-12 11:28 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Alzim
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-14 10:07 PM
This adds some nice depth to the Weilders sub. Go to Comment
The Way of Divine Wealth
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-10 05:02 PM
Cool idea, described well enough that it would be easy to extrapolate any necessary details. Go to Comment
Ghorion, the Weaponmaster
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Mountains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-10 05:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Awakened
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-09 02:17 AM
Creepy.

I like the tone. And there are so many possibilities here.

5/5 Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-07 03:40 PM
Update: Forgot to add a few details. Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-08 11:40 PM
Every word came from Murometz in chat, except for corpse (mine) and romance (freetext friday.) He reminded me in his oh-so-subtle way that it'd been awhile since I'd submitted anything. I asked him for some words to get me started, so he started lobbing away. Then he vanished into the ether. I believe I heard cackling. Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-13 03:21 PM
Challenge accepted. Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-28 09:57 PM
Emote Cube
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-08 07:58 AM
Cool idea. I like the creative use of a completely mundane object.

This is the most extreme addiction I can think of: no need to buy more than one and works perfectly every time. I can imagine just how devastating this device would be.

I can see some therapeutic uses of this under very tightly controlled circumstances. Go to Comment
Ariel Lorette
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-12-14 08:07 PM
That's helpful, although I still think NECRO comes across as a bit oafish.

The idea of Ariel being given powers by some kind of primal force for revenge is intriguing. I think there's more potential there. Go to Comment
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