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Ballad of the Malconvoker
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-24 04:26 PM
This is a good alternate take on the picture with some nice gaming applications. Love the poem format for the 100 words. Go to Comment
World of Bronze
Locations  (World)   (Any)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-26 11:19 AM
I think it's easy to dismiss the Bronze Age, especially when bronze weapons and armor get penalized mechanically by many systems, but there are so many interesting sources of inspiration from that period of history. Go to Comment
Dwarfs of Damor
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-09 02:37 PM
This is complete enough and an interesting core idea. Go to Comment
Pilgrim
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-09 09:26 AM
There's just so much lovely here, I'm not even sure where to begin. Go to Comment
Pilgrim
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-12 11:49 AM
I have no idea, either. It's a fairly quick and enjoyable read, and right up my alley. I love interdimensional spaces and you have done this one justice. Go to Comment
The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. III
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-12 11:46 AM
I like how this is unfolding. Go to Comment
Machinama, a cult in Refuge Beneath the Waves
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-12 10:40 AM
Excellent work! Go to Comment
Infestation
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-12 09:56 AM
Nothing to add that others haven't already covered. 5/5 Go to Comment
Slang and Jargon Beneath the Waves: The Big Under
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-11 02:39 PM
Love it! Go to Comment
The Light and His Lady
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-10 08:49 AM
I enjoy a good creation story. Go to Comment
Xue Ren (Snow/Blood Blade Edge)
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-09 04:17 PM
Creative, succinct, and usable. I like it. Go to Comment
The First of Cities
Locations  (City)   (Other)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-09 04:25 PM
Really enjoying watching this setting unfold. I finished reading a book on Etruscan history not very long ago and your work puts me in mind of its later days, along with the growing power of Rome. Go to Comment
The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. II
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-04 11:56 AM
Aside from being an enjoyable story, this has lots of little details one could pick out and use if they were so inclined. Looking forward to more of this, and also anything more on the setting in general! Go to Comment
A Grave Problem
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-03 05:33 PM

This idea has a good hook but I think some of the options could use work.

For example, in the first option all the PCs do is open a door and then the encounter is finished. Give them a quest, give them the name of whoever trapped the ghost in the tomb, have the thing send them on a quest that will fully release it; just opening the door shouldn't be enough, or maybe they need to go on a quest to obtain the macguffin that opens the door.

Option two is good, but also a little abrupt. Any PC worth their salt will be expecting that kind of betrayal. Have the thing lead them on a little, either making them believe it is benign until they lower their guard or have it try to blame some innocent that the PCs might end up going after.

Option three is really a whole lot of suboptions that could maybe use a little fleshing out as well.

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The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. I
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-02 11:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. I
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-03 10:36 AM

Muro took all the good comments already :P I, too, look forward to seeing more of this.

Even though I don't always have a good comment, I try to at least vote on what I read. As an author I appreciate knowing that stuff I've written has at least been read, and I assume others feel the same.

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Apocalyptic Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-02 05:34 PM
Update: I know there's a lot more I could do with this sub, especially on the flavor text side, but it's been sitting around for a few years and I think it's time to kick it loose. The core idea has been set down. Any readers so inclined, please feel free to add ideas. Go to Comment
Apocalyptic Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-12 10:34 AM
Yeah, I should probably take that out. The original idea was to have a more fleshed-out plot hook of the Earth resistance and the sword was going to play a major role in it. Go to Comment
Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-31 10:39 AM
I've been mulling your comment over and perhaps this would be better split out into different subs (Haukagaron, Abyssal Realms, and Kaukenn.) This was supposed to be about the castle but I got lost in the peripheral details. Time to put it "in work."

Thanks for the thought-provoking feedback. Go to Comment
Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
MysticMoon's comment on 2015-02-02 05:26 PM
Update: Ok, this has been sitting unmodified in my in-work for nearly 3 years. As much as I'd like to turn it into what it *could* be, I think I need to let it go and get to work on other things. Go to Comment
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