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30 Items Found Within a Coffin
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-22 01:23 PM
I'm with Mageek. Way too random and repetitive (you already added your Urn beast and other entries to Stephie's scroll :) ). So yeah, what Mageek said. Go to Comment
7 Hidden Blades
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-22 09:18 AM
Nicely done. Succinct, practical, and useful! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-14 09:47 AM
I liked the "black rubber doll" bit. Creepy. So these changelings are akin to the ones of legend? Doppelganger-esque? Would like to hear more on their society, culture, goals, etc... Go to Comment
Twin Eye Spectacles
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-09 09:10 AM
Simple and clever. I can see an adventurers band's patron donning one pair, and giving one of the pcs the other. This way he can keep tabs on the pcs mission/quest/job progress (perhaps much to the pcs annoyance). Go to Comment
Life in this So Called Cosmic Era
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-03 02:03 PM
This is great! I remember many years ago, when we were discussing CE, I mentioned wanting to understand the human existence in this sea of future-tech and the rest of the world dynamics you created. And this is it!. Fascinating! Couldn't stop reading! So many concepts to ponder here. really well done! Go to Comment
30 Annoying Or Dangerous Flaws in Suits of Armour
Items  (Armor)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-03 02:06 PM
Good idea for a scroll here. Quite a few are quirky and clever flaws/drawbacks! Go to Comment
Secret Wizard Bases with Your Peace of Mind in Mind
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2016-06-03 02:14 PM
Love the irreverent, sardonic tone of this piece!!! A few made me laugh out loud. Well done. Nice old-school vibe. Reminds me of Dragon Magazine articles from way back. Go to Comment
Ring of Beast Shapes
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2016-05-24 09:53 AM
Solid. Concise. Useful. Love the variables involved! Can lead to all sorts of hijinks. Welcome aboard!! Go to Comment
Caught in the Vortex
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2016-05-19 03:54 PM
Good read! Great example of insanity's internal dialogue. Madness, thy name is this guy.

Mu Reaction!! Go to Comment
Ildas's Guildmasters
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2016-05-04 06:27 PM
I echo axle in loving the voice and underpinnings. I'm also thick-headed apparently. I'm trying to understand what the voice's agenda is exactly...he's "applying" to an uber-criminal organization? Go to Comment
Cloak of the Thieving Hands
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-12 07:39 PM
I actually really like this one. Quirky cloak, and can lead to all kinds of plot twists, unwanted surprises and comedy-of-errors type scenarios. Go to Comment
Cloak of the Thieving Hands
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-15 02:46 PM

"What other magical vestments might we pair this with?"

1. Hat of Sudden Items

Whenever the wearer tips the hat in greeting or salute, out pops whichever last item the cloak's thieving hands stole and "pocketed", usually leading to embarrassment or worse, for the wearer.

2. Boots of the Getaway

two additional shadowy boots emerge from this footwear, whenever the cloak's hands steal something. These phantom boots kick the shins of the cloak's latest victim, as hard as possible.

Sorry, I'm just having fun with this :D

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The Peristeronic Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-11 04:23 PM
Other uses...

1. Ever wanted to pass for a statue? Stand perfectly still and have some pigeons roost on you. Don't flinch if they poop on you.

2. Since it could be *any* species of pigeon, how about giant pigeons? Like the ones from Korgoth of Barbaria :P
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Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-07 11:19 AM
He's instantly likable. Go to Comment
Atarkhul, Lord of Passions
Society/ Organizations  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-08 02:39 PM
I HATE this! Get it? :p

The name looked familiar, then I remembered Brin!

A truly primal deity with a very visceral vibe. Could be difficult to pull off for a PC, but fun to try. It does need something else as you mention, but I can't come up with anything off the top of my head. Good work. Go to Comment
The Valley of Shifting Shadow
Locations  (Other)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-06 06:35 PM
cosmically horrifying location and great prose! The type of place an old jaded individual would voluntarily seek out toward the end of his life, because you know, he's done everything else. Now to just stare out into the void and contemplate...and die. Go to Comment
Ring of Subtle Injury
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-04 12:56 PM
Welcome aboard!

I like it. The ring's powers are creepy and disturbing. Good additions based on suggestions. I really like the detail that the wounds and bruises can be attributed to falls and bumping into objects, by those who don't realize what is actually happening.

Finally, can you picture someone that has worn the ring a LONG time? Colored bruises,festering cuts, pus-dripping wounds, unhealed scars...head to toe. Tragic visual! Go to Comment
Pribnow Dummy
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2016-03-28 08:34 PM
Robots for luddites! I approve. Also can't help but think that they fill the mongrelman role in the CE. Lame sauce, sure, but someday they will rise up! Go to Comment
Sanctum of Water
Dungeons  (Water)   (Puzzles)
Murometz's comment on 2016-03-28 10:00 AM
Mageek, just want to say, you make me want to leave work, grab paper, pencils, and dice and GAME the day away!! Really enjoyable old-school feel. The map is awesome!! My first instinct is to actually adapt this to Tekumel! Love the detail of the walls healing over time and being immune to transmutation spells. Go to Comment
Brass Man
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2016-03-21 02:13 PM
I like the brain, eye, and ear detail. Gives them a touch of the tragic. Go to Comment
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Trapped in his tomb, but alive, the God of Pain awaits his uleashing, said to be at the end of the world, he uses his only powers he can and calls to him 2 people, a man and a women to reliquish him from his prison. The man and the women, decieved by them thinking it a person trapped, go after to help the God of Pain unwittily and let him destroy the world

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