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The Town of Inexplicable Babies
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-11 08:48 PM
Where ya been, axle? It's all about the idea. Go to Comment
National Corporatism
Systems  (Mercantile)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-09 11:47 AM
Milton Friedman would approve. Go to Comment
The Blackwings
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-06 06:01 PM
Good race. I like how you explore their "crow-ness" in both physical and societal ways. They seem like proper bird-people; cruel, domineering, utilitarian, slavers, etc...

The Dark Crystal inspiration shines through.

I would just add that the text is slightly choppy in places and there are a few peculiar phrasings. Other than that good stuff!

This section ends on a comma...was there more?

"Their deities reflect the desires of their race, with gods of Dominance, The Eggstealer, " Go to Comment
The Blackwings
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-07 10:35 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Trash Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-05 02:45 PM
iiiinteresting, I shall revisit this after work with some thoughts. (And delete this comment for another) Go to Comment
Trash Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-05 07:49 PM
Dozus ask good questions (I had a few of the same ilk), and val is right, this is ready for consumption!

I love all unorthodox and bizarre golems, so this works. The twist being the particular items that make up the golem. That sounds like the fun part to dream up.

I also feel the urge to mention that trash and garbage seem to be two different things. When I saw the title i imagined "garbage", you know, of the icky, organic variety, and immediately imagined the Valley of Hinnom and giant stinking masses of rotting, burning refuse, but this seems to be actual "trash" or clutter/junk even. I find that interesting. Go to Comment
15/30 Bards
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2008-02-05 10:07 PM
'Fado' style bard

'Griot' style bard Go to Comment
Serum 87
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-05 10:31 AM
Solid gruesome stuff! And the 'References' section makes for great reading! Some really cool info. Go to Comment
Jampiri
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-05 07:38 PM


I think it succeeds in mirroring a voodoo society, in that cultural mish-mash way, with shrines, different types of magic, and the societal melding of gods, spirits and rituals.



I also like how the origin resonates. The Kanaarites want to be left alone in their swamps, but alas, they're "exotic", so must be infiltrated :)



Decathros continues to be enriched!

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Organic NPCs (and PCs)
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-09 11:50 AM
Terrific! An NPC capsule revolution! I second Strolen's organic npc quest idea. Go to Comment
Organic NPCs (and PCs)
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-06 06:01 PM
We really should get a Longspeak inspired "Organic NPC" Quest going!! Go to Comment
Strolens Generator Quickstart
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-01 01:19 PM
Perfect. Thank you for this!! Go to Comment
The Eye of Seenu
Items  (Jewelry)   (Sentient)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-28 10:45 AM


I love items that get the historical treatment as they switch hands from era to era.



And besides that....a gem that searches out other gems, or rather a gem-like race of ancient beyond ancient beings, unbeknownst to the owner. That's awesome! Some great detail and story-smithing here.

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Old Vardipor, the City of Pigs
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-06 05:37 PM
Nice and slovenly. The image of pig-masked knife-in-hand "gourmands" chowing down is a powerful one.

Can smell the swine as I read, but the pigs and the other aspects of the city seem slightly disconnected somehow.

Anyway, reminds me of a movie (in a good way), the cook, the thief, his wife and her lover.

Good location to explore swine themes metaphorically...greed, sloth, gluttony. Go to Comment
Old Vardipor, the City of Pigs
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-07 10:36 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bird Brains
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-27 02:36 PM


It's weird but in a good way. I'll echo Strolen re: birds gauging the imperfections. Also, don't most birds have great vision? Hmm, now I'm not sure, and need to know.



I like the Author's Note! :)

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Alexandra Stacja
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-23 09:49 PM
I want to know what Wlastem Njar is :) Go to Comment
The Guild Game
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-24 09:10 AM
24 PCs? Wow! This campaign sounds pretty unique. Go to Comment
Fleabirds
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-22 08:55 AM


Finally some Luddites for the Cosmic Era. You need those for realism! Not everyone will be on the cutting edge in a futuristic society, just like in real life (one of my biggest sci-fi genre gripes). Nicely done.



Get on the bus!

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30 Generals
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-21 08:03 PM


I agree with val, but at the same time, there is nothing to be disappointed about, Cheka!



It's a great idea, because you get a historical slant on 30 larger than life personalities, and thus an rpg slant as well, for any GM with a general's "personality" to consider.



And I won't lie, I learned some things I didn't know, about a few of these guys.



I'd say that one could certainly start a (fiery!!!!!!!!!) debate as to some of your interpretations of these folks, but still, this is good info, something to learn from, and it's fun going through them, just to see who is next on the list!



Speaking of which...Hannibal??? Belisarius?? Where they at? :)

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