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Apocalyptic Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-18 11:07 PM
What madness this? :P Go to Comment
Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2012-03-10 07:20 PM


In the old forest that Kaukenn was originally built under, such a pattern acted as simple camouflage among the sun-dappled shadows thrown by towering trees. Each marble block holds an enchantment subtly enhancing that effect, causing the veins to undulate slowly in a breeze or the colors to darken or lighten to match the ambient light.



A deceptively simple yet evocative detail!


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The Elder Crow of the Tarlathii
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:15 PM
Yay an AG return!

Moody and atmospheric. The "where" part was my favorite. Elder shadows biding their time beneath the rust-colored leaves of certain trees. Conjures nice visuals!

I also think the merchant is the most interesting of the three.

Great addition to the Coldforged mythos. Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:02 PM
Creepy good!! It reeks of the "real" because this guy is scarier than ten fancy, flowery assassins put together.

I picture his mind ravaged over time. Maybe he slowly turns from assassin to wanton murderer. He shares a train with some other destitute hobo, and just kills him, because he can. And enjoys himself. Dumps the body from the train. Never makes the police reports. No one cares about a dead hobo on the side of the tracks. Mark moves on to the next town.

Well done, Myst! Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:06 PM


Hmm one more thought. This guy is scarier without the "fey" angle to me. Why can't he just be a true human monster, like hh holmes or gacy or someone like that. Maybe he was just a curse-less hobo.



Great character.

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Freya, Assassin
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-02 12:19 PM
Can't think of what to add. Nice characterization here. Well done! Go to Comment
Artan Keybreaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-04 04:42 PM
I second that Viednavak is a fun concept here!! Interesting dwarven "thing". Go to Comment
Buluc, death priest of Rope Woman
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-09 11:21 AM


The title alone is already evocative! And wow, what a great 500 word condensation of rich material! Love this cult. Like a twisted version of Thuggees with shades of Kevorkian.



Rope Woman!!!

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30 body parts for do-it-yourself Chimera
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-28 09:35 PM
Ok, i'll say it, this is potentially awesome fun, rolling up the random monstrosities! I'd maybe collate the choices into separate body and head tables, and of course, add MORE of them! :) Go to Comment
30 body parts for do-it-yourself Chimera
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-29 10:35 AM
Don't abandon this one just yet :)

Tables! We want tables!! And more head/body options! Want help? Go to Comment
30 body parts for do-it-yourself Chimera
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-29 11:45 AM
see above. Go to Comment
MMWWW Goddess of Milk
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-28 01:48 PM
iiiiinteresting, as they say.

My first takeaway was the hilarious visual of the cow Demi-god visiting a clueless farmer to recruit him into the cult.

I'm a big fan of this type of twisted "divinity". And playing a Paladin of the Moo would be fun. Go to Comment
Skyhawk Faunareconnaissance Implant
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-28 12:07 PM
Recruited as scouts sounds so innocent for this deplorable practice against nature. Poor critters, brain hemorrhaging on command. :P

I like it.

So primate compatible ones are out there somwhere? Waiting to be found by intrepid pcs? Go to Comment
New Here? Learn from my mistakes!
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-27 12:14 PM


Stuff like this (stream of consciousness blog) is better off in the forums, Aramax. What's a Strolonite? Please take an extra 5 minutes when you write. There is no running stopwatch or gun to your head. You seem to think that any thought you get is a "sub". It's not, we have a whole giant forum for casual conversation and opinions on everything.

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Xord godling of The Seven Armie's Battle
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-26 11:24 PM
I've always loved the idea of a one-worshipper god. Makes me giggle every time. Go to Comment
When The Hail Came
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-21 09:04 PM
Very nicely done. Nice hints and heartstring tugs throughout. Very economical wording. Not a revolutionary approach, but good, fun read regardless. Go to Comment
When The Hail Came
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-22 12:46 AM
Wow. You know ax, I didn't realize that I agree until I read your comment. It's true, the voice *doesn't* quite mature, does it? Still, I love this Spartan journal approach. Go to Comment
The Last Mind Flayer
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-23 10:19 PM
Yeah, I love this sub so much! I have to echo Scras in that my immediate first thought was, this reads so retro! I love Rodchenko! This is just a fantastic pair brought to life! Everything really, the story, their personalities, the image of Rodchenko (I won't lie), even the format, is perfect. Is Illah supposed to be Ilya? If so, I'm hurt. I usually don't antagonize. :P

Rodchenko is the greatest natural swordsman in the world (somebody has to be). Go to Comment
7 Trains
Items  (Transports)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-16 10:53 PM


Interesting set. #4 immediately instills thoughts of the Great Train Robbery and a session based on it. #5 screams Runaway Train with Voight and Roberts. #3 and #1 are nice and self explanatory. #6 nice touch. I don't think #7 is needed. Just filler words. We know what a train is for :)



#8? A rare collectible toy train (Lionel?) worth a small fortune!

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Hobbit Chair and Eat Racing
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-15 03:28 PM
Cute. Can see these competitions happening in the shire. Go to Comment
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