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Office of the High Councillor Corvin
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-12-19 12:23 PM
Fixed the bolding for you, as this version came out all bolded.

That aside, I think this is better!! Now you're drilling down a bit more into the "atmospheric detail" of the room I guess, adding a tad more flavor. Go to Comment
Office of the High Councillor
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-12-18 12:12 PM
I kind of actually like the peculiar concept behind this piece. A location descriptor that is meant to conjure up a particular atmosphere for PCs is a nice thought. I do wish there was something more either going on here as Goss said, or some more on this Corvin fellow and/or some more stuff about the room itself. Go to Comment
Cessna and Piper Aldean
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2013-12-03 11:04 AM
Facilitator NPCs with some panache. I approve!! And I like your comment explanation. Go to Comment
Excerpt from Lockwhistle’s Adventurer’s Companion for Beginners
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-28 01:33 AM
Not enough for a sub...sigh. Go to Comment
Excerpt from Lockwhistle’s Adventurer’s Companion for Beginners
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-28 11:06 AM


sorry to disappoint lol

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Excerpt from Lockwhistle’s Adventurer’s Companion for Beginners
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-28 11:58 AM
re-opened it as collab! Go, Moonlake, go! :) Go to Comment
Excerpt from Lockwhistle’s Adventurer’s Companion for Beginners
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-23 02:10 PM


Thanks lol This just started as a joke...a dumb barbarian/new pc kept confusing lizard-bulls with bull-lizards. One is huge and nasty, one is tiny and harmless :P Lockwhistle offers a tongue-in-cheek primer for the braincells-challenged.



Another one was going to be a short primer on: How can you tell if the "book" you're holding is an evil magic item, as opposed to a regular book. And so on...

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A Dwindling Fortune
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-25 09:24 PM
Oh oh, private drafts showing up on 'recent citadel activity'. Is that supposed to happen? Go to Comment
The Azul Deck of Shadows
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-19 11:00 AM
I echo val's first two sentences, and will add that this deck would be a helluva lot of fun to use in a game! The options on what could happen on any given "cast", are many and delicious! Go to Comment
The Azul Deck of Shadows
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-20 10:23 AM


Re-reading over the effects, side-effects, boons, and penalties, and the many possible outcomes, I can safely say that I can't wait to see what rolls lead to what mayhem when these are used in a game setting! Also re-voting with a .5 bump. This deck's awesomeness is growing on me! :D

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The Azul Deck of Shadows
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-20 10:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fort Hard
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-19 11:02 AM


The name sounds like a military-themed porn movie from the 80's, but the idea is a cool one! I'd expand a bit on the "contents" and "inhabitants" of the fort, if I used this in a game, to make it a little mini-dungeon.



Nice one.

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Tauria
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2013-12-03 11:13 AM
Good solid location rife with interesting tid-bits to branch off from... Go to Comment
The Swamp Wraith
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-13 11:03 AM


The image is splendid, as is the write-up! Imagine seeing this horror from across your campfire, deep in the bog, while standing guard!



I thought that maybe the lead-in tale was just a tad long, but it does convey the horror well. Love everything about this creature otherwise, including its insidious mental assault! To me it feels like this thing has always existed in the deepest swamps, since time immemorial, but finally we have an eye-witness account and learn something of its nature.



Terrific.

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Bahamoot
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-11 09:08 AM
Like SE, I particularly like the nascent take on a new sea god! Also a nice touch is that Bahamoot doesn't "devour" everything it surveys randomly, but rather feeds on energy while simply breathing.

just a note, because i can't help myself... final fantasy didn't turn Bahamut into a dragon, that was Gary Gygax. The lawful-good, platinum dragon foil for Tiamat. :) Go to Comment
Shrinkstools
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-07 08:49 PM


Nice. These just appeared in my world, but rather than as 'stools' they will become...'shrinking violets'!! I like the monsters attracted part, reminiscent of 'shriekers'. I'd also make a secondary die-roll (with a secondary table) to determine the size one shrinks to.

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Altar of Vazzaz
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-09 11:04 AM
It's a scenario with a nice twist. Blood is not what she wants! These type of scenarios usually stick with players long after they end. "Remember that time we doused and slathered that mosquito-queen altar with blood? Oh boy!" Go to Comment
Psychomanteum
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-10-31 09:59 AM
Nice! This brought to mind the old MoonHunter series of articles on Mage "tools" of the trade like the Solomontic Rugs and Shadow Shrines. The thought that seers and mystics have such hidden chambers secreted away in large cities is also an inspiring thought...

The library wall-shelf pivots and opens up into an eerie chamber of mirrored walls, floors, and ceilings. "Yes", says the Baron, "This was my great-aunt's secret room. We still do not know what she did inside, or what the room was used for..."

The imagery of a mage in a mirrored room, communicating with reflections of spirits and gods know what else, is a great one. And of course an obvious plothook, but i have to mention it, because I immediately pictured it...PCs get trapped somehow in the mirror-maze of dimensions (even though it is a communicating chamber I know). the mage has to help them get out, while they encounter countless spirits and obstacles in this multi-dimensional world. Go to Comment
Civitas Caeli
Locations  (City)   (Space)
Murometz's comment on 2013-10-29 01:26 PM
As Holmes might say, "there are several points of interest to this case, Watson."

Quite an interesting take on the "Eternal City" trope. Great visual, with some unique perspectives. Scras and Renlim ask good questions. As for me though, I would say that less is more, and I don't necessarily need every mystery of this city spelled out. The vagueness adds that certain je nais se quois.

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The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2013-10-31 10:03 AM
Ah, an Oekaki. well, I guess in that case, i can't say, "This needs more!" (But it does).

Nice setting though for adventure. I always wondered if we'd ever get that Bibliorynth sub after Dozus coined the term. :)

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