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Bishop Saul O'hara
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 12:53 PM
Hey Ted, just realized you may want to throw in some dates, or at least 1 date :) Just remembered this is from your 1640's campaign. Might help the readers having an idea of time/place/genre. Go to Comment
The Ruins of Oldport
Locations  (Ruins)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 02:50 PM
Love it. Big fan of submissions that take you on a tour of a place. Some shops, some natives, a few watering holes. Very nice atmosphere created here. Gives that warm feeling of wanting to visit.

suggestions for god names:

Sea: Odovithast
Greed: Marmo Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 05:33 PM
No plot hooks? Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 06:19 PM
Should have left it as an idea seed. Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 06:50 PM
insufferable drivel. Go to Comment
Mien Endsieg
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 11:28 AM
There's a decent idea here, hiding within the manic presentation. A madman's post-mortem ramblings captured in a tome by his deranged followers via the dark arts. Paraguay and Mossad are nice touches that give this some verisimilitude.

Some bits are sloppy though, and the "101 white males" feels contrived and rushed.

Anyhoo, this would make for a interesting little modern-day (or post WWII-era) rp. Go to Comment
30 Dragon Flavours
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 11:43 AM
Excellent reading. Fun and flavorful. I'm stealing a few of these scrumptious dragons.

I feel I must note that while the tagline promises no Tandoori dragons, the main sub delivers one anyway :) (1 year of cooking??!!)

Favorites: Funnel Web, Sorrow, Pen, Berserker, Prehistoric... Go to Comment
Castle
NPCs  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 08:45 PM
The power ability strikes me as a rather original one. Nicely done! Go to Comment
It's A Gone World
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 11:10 AM
Why would crimes like "rape and prostitution" be mostly eliminated? That sounds silly to me. Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 11:30 AM
Nice classic Marvel Dossier type of write-up. I like him! I smell shades of colossus, juggernaut, and magneto.

He seems to cry out for a buddy too. Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-17 03:05 PM
I'm ocd'ing on "Kolya Winters"...Kolya is a guys name! :P

Otherwise, can't wait to read about the rest of Force Aussie!!! Especially the Dreamtime guy(gal?) Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-17 08:58 PM
bwahaha, so you don't mind if I take a crack at an all-Australian Supers Team? :D Go to Comment
Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-10 11:52 AM
Really good read! Great job. Go to Comment
30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-06 03:35 PM
The sheer volume of data alone is...impressive. Will come back to read it all soon. Go to Comment
30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-07 11:31 AM
Took a while to read through, but highly worth the time. This can basically serve as its own gm binder. Amazing collection of life forms. Well done!! Go to Comment
The Heads of Zaid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 11:35 AM
Like val, I like anything that reeks of past ages and things ancient-beyond-ancient. The image of half-buried simian sphinxes is a nice touch. I guess I'd add some stuff info about interacting with PCs and such, but otherwise, good stuff! Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 03:05 PM
Can I say, I feel bad for her? Which is a good thing. A somewhat tragic powerful presence, messed up in head, and a damn interesting character for a novel. I imagine you can go many ways with her...good, bad, other. The 27 pounds of brain and suspended viscera is a jolting image.

I'm going to have to look up what the heck an Ender Wiggin is now. Go to Comment
The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-29 08:21 PM


Red-rimmed eyes, red-rimmed mouth...Join the song!



I enjoyed this. Creepy and nicely written!

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PrimaryAssociateProfiles.tex
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 05:22 PM
The formatting here is awesome, aside from the tantalizing world info presented via these npc capsules. Terrific! More! Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-11 01:00 PM


Sublime! Has a strong feel of the pre-historic and primal. I can visualize these people, as I read about the ring. Nice details everywhere, such as the crystal pool-reflection of the moon, burying it beneath the moon's surface, and the fact that the surface has changed since the ring's creation.



This almost, not quite but almost, has lovecraftian overtones. I am looking forward to the lunar worship sub.



Plus exactly what MCoorlim said!!!! I see no disparities, only verisimilitude.

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