Bizarre and fascinating substance! Certainly merits its place alongside the Elixir of Life and the Philosophers Stone on the Grand Enchantments of Alchemy shelf!
I agree with Zylithan though. Its about 1-2 additional paragraphs away from being a sure FIVER! Go to Comment
Warning Reading the sub, then all the comments in succession, may induce a catatonic state of drooling lunacy in the reader.
The comments are hysterical!! :D
My faves being,
Cap's "What the hell are you talking about?"
Eledas' "Your Plot is cool but it needs more detail"
Cap's "Why is it called "Destruction of Strolen" if he hasn't been destroyed yet?" Go to Comment
like I sort of said, it can be lots better. But I like the boiled/boils others part. So thats almost all I need for inspiration to make up the rest myself. Feeling inspired, makes me give decent vote. Go to Comment
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This is how magic should work.
I agree with both points. Its a gem of an idea, and at the same time a little more would have been great, putting this over the top!
4.5 Go to Comment