What they all said. This is right up my alley. A unique and memorable NPC, that makes you go huh? But then it all comes together and makes perfect sense. Good tone on this one. Good writing. Begs to be used in a game.
It is...the description of the geography, as others have said, is quite atmospheric. I'm whisked away to another world after only a few lines. Obviously, this cries out for more(!), but even as is, it manages to create a lasting impression. Nice!
A post fully exploring all the dropped hints and tangents, would be awesome! Go to Comment