what burns me is that i worked my backside off on my latest submission all weekend, and presented 4 items in 1 entry, with enormous amount of detail. You managed to bump me off 'recent submissions' into oblivion, with 3 individual items that each raise one score a point, and allow regeneration. Ok, needed to get that off my chest. Sorry, absolutely nothing against the entries themselves, per se. :)

would you consider entering 3 very related items with short descriptions in one shot next time. Go to Comment

good point Mourngrymn. I voted 2 because like most entries on this site these items show potential, and because I like anything made from troll bits.

p.s. how do you know its a he? :) Go to Comment

fair enough. Ask a stupid question.... :) Go to Comment

knew it! (or at least had a feeling). And sorry for the previous whining fenixphire Go to Comment

for the record, he is a she :) Go to Comment

Nobody- that makes a lot of sense actually. Go to Comment

"As he began to remove a particularly long piece of intestine from his shoulder, inspiration struck."

that line alone does it for me! 3.5/5 Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment

you've done a great job overall, taking criticism (my b*****ng), and other's suggestions, and improving all three items!

hope to see more from you soon! Go to Comment

what everyrone else said! Especially the last bit, using it as a weapon. Came as a pleasant surprise.

'he would look forward to the torture of women and children'...yikes! Go to Comment

BUMP. Memorable, atmospheric, insidious item! Go to Comment

BUMP. Love the Censer. Love it as a weapon. Love the name Mal'Mennoth. Love the ambience of the piece! Go to Comment

Hmm, i haven't bumped this lovely piece since 06'. Beware the black-smoke seeping, censer-mace! Go to Comment

Moon- I can read these all day, despite the fact that an elf has not made an appearence in one of my campaigns in ten years. The point is these are 'magical' places (lit. and fig.) and beautiful to imagine, with the help of your words. My fave so far would be musroom/bamboo! where's my favorite tree from childhood? The strong, proud, and resilient white birch :)

do you take requests? :) transport me to an elventri forests based on ferns. Not trees I know, but maybe an outcast society, who have (gasp!) turned their back on wood! oh wait I know, just like giant ferns preceeded actual trees, maybe a travel back in time to an early elventri society!

anyhoo, Im beginning to ramble. These are wonderful! Go to Comment

great! not to stare a gift horse in the mouth, but....How about the Elm? the classic Elm!!. Also Willow trees, in a swampy environment maybe (everything in this village kinda leans over as per willow).

Okay I'll stop, but not before I mention one last tree I'd love to see...drumroll...the Baobab!!

I'm only half-kidding by the way. I WOULD love to see all these entries someday. And I only say this because I know you would do a beautiful rendering of each. You once mentioned that like me your a bit obsess/comp. I just know you'll do these now! just kidding :)

Thank You Go to Comment

you do a great job with disgusting grubs! This entry and another, (I cant recall the name ) where a larvae-like worm is swallowed by mages. Very well done on both! Go to Comment

thanks Moon-I realy appreciate your feedback. I actually worked pretty hard on this one, including among other things, trying to walk the fine line between vulgarity and good taste :) Go to Comment

well..yes, I suppose she did :)

It also served to make those encounters that disgusted her, somewhat more palatable.


*slightly edited (by light of day)...spelling, grammar, extra nick-nacks* Go to Comment

hard to open yes. But the prize! 12 perfect thumbnail sized diamonds, if nothing else. Im guessing they alone would take care of any pc's finances semi-permanently, no?

and is it really that tough to open? You puke a little, box your friends ears, and take a looong walk. :) Go to Comment

um...thanks I think Go to Comment