What strolen said. And I'll add that the title is great! Go to Comment

If we ever have that suggested "Take a silly thing and expand it into something good" Quest, this sub would qualify for usage. Go to Comment

This can be modified into a good Tales of Adventure addition!! 3-way-thingy

any volunteers? I believe Chi Chio is Ciao Ciao Go to Comment

Scrasamax- I lack the mental energy to say anything constructive right now, and I tire of telling you how much I enjoy your writing. :)

need to go google Grinning Reaper/King Cholera now *sigh*

Its Great! *he says meekly*

Moon's comments are ellucidating as usual too Go to Comment

You now, I kinda find myself liking the first person narrative and the style of 'Roleplaying Notes' you use. Personal experiences, who the character was, how he was used, etc

I also like the list of things he learned in the Night Below :) Go to Comment

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What Scras and Cap said! I like this one. Thanks be to manfred for reviving it. Go to Comment

very amusing, heroic, and nicely nuanced Go to Comment

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what is that? ^ Needs fixin', but i have no idea where that link is supposed to lead. Go to Comment

It is...the description of the geography, as others have said, is quite atmospheric. I'm whisked away to another world after only a few lines. Obviously, this cries out for more(!), but even as is, it manages to create a lasting impression. Nice!

A post fully exploring all the dropped hints and tangents, would be awesome! Go to Comment

Often, the better the submission the less I have to say about it.

Captain- you can change the names, baby! Go to Comment

Oh those ugly special characters. I will get rid of them someday with Mathom's help! This I vow. Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment

I would have to agree with you Captain P. I cant get the image out of my head!

when the flies sing of rot and pestilence, indeed! Go to Comment

YEE-HAW!!! Random Submission pop ups!!

I love you Bloody Smile!!!

BUMP.

No one has HoH'd this?? Since Sep. 04'? I'll just have to fix that right now!! Go to Comment

Smile, you sonofabitch!--Roy Scheider, Jaws.

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Only voted Go to Comment

BUMP This is superb!

Especially the Sea-Witch, living atop coral and her lovers skins. Go to Comment

You had me at 'semi-sentient guitar' Go to Comment

All been said. But its never too late for a 5 vote! Go to Comment