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The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 05:02 PM
May I make a suggestion? "Golden Fiddle" instead of "The Fiddle Of Gold"

also, what Mourn said :D Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-16 10:14 PM
This goes down as one of my favorite posts of yours all-time! The scope and verisimilitude is amazing. A subtle yet powerful treatise on history and religion par excellence! And it doesnt pound you over the head with a hammer. It flows smoothly.

More to come? Go to Comment
Kastraad and New Pastello
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 11:25 AM
I have no issues with the history and economics lesson. That I like. I just think that you wrote this too quickly maybe (the frequent use of parenthesis are a clue to that). Its just a bit dry, though again, I have no problem with hard-core realism! Go to Comment
The Blib
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:48 AM
great first submission Erfunden! I cant help but love these pink rubbery critters.
I enjoyed reading this entry. You have a talent for the "turn-of-the-phrase." Short, sweet, and chock full of detail. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 02:40 PM
Oh Captain My Captain! dont hog all the ladies!

love his ring! Go to Comment
Spectral Tablets
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:09 PM
This is one of my favorite subs of your Chaos! Happy Pills! (so to speak) Go to Comment
The Keepers Of Forbidden Beasts and Birds
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-24 02:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Keepers Of Forbidden Beasts and Birds
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-24 02:01 PM
Moraten Li
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:01 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 11:41 AM
I love the concept of 'Cathedral Village'! A community built around the massive structure makes perfect sense, and gives it such a realistic vibe. Go to Comment
The Children of Ma-O
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:39 PM
ask and you shall receive! I had mentioned I could use a little more Ma-O-isms after reading the original post, and here they are! Go to Comment
Saja Jyn
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
I have to be honest. She's a bit of a cliche. But the three posts combined are well done! Go to Comment
ShadowKin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ma-O the Water Deamon
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:35 PM
I would add some more tidbits, like a Ma-O cult for example, and a maybe a little darker backstory, but thats just me. It seems it could be drawn out into a slightly longer more detailed sub. I like the overall concept quite a bit however! Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-01 12:48 AM
PFC and illegal cock-fights!

Strolen, I give your comment 5/5!! Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-10-13 09:21 PM
thanks Wulf!

Plot Hook #1 is ok. Plot Hooks #2 (how appropriate!) and #3 (oy, the bloodshed and feathers!) are hysterical! :D

what are you waiting for? right up Mrrrrorw already! Go to Comment
Whispers Of The Thief
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-19 01:12 AM
I will be using this system for my upcoming Thieves Guild gaming session!!

Like Scras, I have heard of something similar somewhere before, but who cares? Here it is in full execution! + 1/2 sword for hoping that I enjoyed it :D I did!!

please link this and Varok Fly (like the creature, I love pomegranite juice too!) to BM if you would. Thanks! Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-17 10:48 PM
Cigarette City!! yeah baby!

Scras- I kind of thought it was blaise when we spoke about it earlier, but then you went and introduced cigarretes, for what I believe, (Moon will tell me if I'm wrong) the first time in the annals of pseudo-medieval fantasy city lore, or at least Strolens annals. GGGGgggreat!

sorry- Its St. Patty's day and I'm mildly trashed :D and I can use a Zettelette Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-13 02:22 PM
I just reread this again. I think its the perfect foil to its twin!! Go to Comment
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A Zorse Of Course

       By: Murometz

Next time you're contemplating a horse variation, but don't want to get too dramatic, how about a Zorse? An offspring of a zebra stallion and horse mare. In nature they are infertile, but in a fantasy world, not necessarily. They are also known to be extremely cantankerous.

"It soon became apparent that zorses are not the most easiest of the equine family to get along with." -- Trainer Pat Parelli, on working with zorses

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