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The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-05 09:14 PM
"These days, only a few Ink Drinkers remain"- why? what happened to them?

"Should the Drinker be gorged on ink, the object or body part passed through it will be soaked and splashed with it"- LOVE IT!

"Some Drinkers have even used this to their advantage, flying into other's faces and dousing them in ink"- so is the ink sustenance for them, or "just their job"?

"Ink Drinkers are not the feared swarms of destruction they once were"- why?

SparK!- I only ask these questions, because I love the concept!!

I understand your idea completely, I think, but could use a tad more explanation to wrap it all up and make it complete. Go to Comment
The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-05 10:13 PM
ask some questions, get some answers. Insidious creatures! Next weekend's game session revolves around a library. I might have to introduce one of these bad boys, just as the PCs find that ancient, dusty tome they have been looking for. Go to Comment
The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-10 02:03 PM
Bump! and another Golden vote! Go to Comment
The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2009-03-26 05:08 PM
Thanks for the BUMP, BH! Helped remind us that this is indeed a terrific creation!

(We even have a few more around. Here and there) ;) take a look

"...luring them with lines of ink" Yes, thats the stuff! Join us! Go to Comment
Keldorian Church aka Church of Creator
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-05 02:00 PM
I was going for a 4, until I got to the 'Orders'. Great addition, and great overall detail on submission. You have just officially inspired me to make my own homemade "One True Faith" into a submission.

Theology section is very nice too!

"His words had been captured by several of his followers. They came together to morn his death and compare notes"

This all reminds me of early Christianity of course, the Time of Prophets and the Apostles...before the tenets were codified and set in stone. Go to Comment
Perfumed Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-05 02:21 PM
great point Cheka- "The Piss-Walkers Guild", as they are euphemistically called, would pay top-dollar!!

fun and useful item Kassil! Go to Comment
Perfumed Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-10-06 12:38 AM
BUMP. Good one, indeed. Go to Comment
Perfumed Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-10-12 04:05 PM
Hmmm, k, I have found a use for these veils. Will link this weekend! Go to Comment
Kren, the Name of a Card
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-04 04:31 PM
well conceived, Chaos! intriguing reading. Wish I had a better understanding of your world, to put it all in perspective. I guess I can start with the links. Go to Comment
Kaboo, Gladdys, and their Dim-Witted Nephew
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-04 04:49 PM
Yeah, about that. The rumor texts are the actual "meat". This Kaboo & Co. npc entry is just the bones. I first did the rumors off-the-cuff, then added this submission the next day. Kaboo is actually named after my friend, drumroll...Kabu (he's nosy). I guess this troika could have had better names though :) Wait! hold the phone Scras! I just recalled a certain archmage named "RICHBUTBUSY"!! from the Auchinduin Mine :)

Thanks to MoonHunter for all his (still ongoing) technical help and support! The rumor links now have titles! Go to Comment
The Voice Of Blissful Enlightenment
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-06 05:24 PM
Love the properties of the item and the intricacies of the background information! I need to read more Quarsooth-related posts. Go to Comment
Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-02 03:08 AM
I LOVE LABORS OF LOVE!! and taken as a whole with every link included this is breathtaking!

I like the history and the hierarchy...Details are key, and this has details aplenty! It also has a grim feel!

My favorite is Hillbreaker.

Maybe some plot hooks on how to interact with the Clan, but thats just nitpicking.

I also have a fetish for names..and these all fit perfectly. Oh and Annealing is great!

Terrific! Go to Comment
Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2007-12-03 08:23 PM
BUMP. Inspiration for the Quest. Go to Comment
Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-02 02:59 PM
I actually had to read this twice for some reason. After the second reading I realized I loved it! 'an edge' for the city guard is rare. Obviously helps curb crime (thats not why the city is named 'cerb' is it?) :)

one nagging thought. It seems that there are no issues with the amount of these items that can be created...correct? mass production so to speak.

Is there anything stopping Cerb from farming these out to any city that orders a shipment? I mean which town wouldn't want these right? So a cottage industry forms perhaps. Does Cerb become the most prosperous town in all the land? :) Am I making sense, or did I miss something?

these are not criticisms, just thoughts that come to mind.

overall great idea!!!! I have a pc, that refuses to 'check' his weapon at any city-gate regardless of the consequences. This weekend he will be going to Cerb. Thanks! Go to Comment
Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-02 03:53 PM
I see. Actually I wont be doing that in 'my world' either. I just wanted your thoughts on mass-production. I understand re: the seal being special, was wondering if more seals could be made (and how easily). You have now answered that question however.

In fact your one sentence..."In my world, magic items are no longer being created so there is a hunt for items of magic of any kind" is an AWESOME idea, in and of itself. I will be shamelessly stealing it! (just for my campaign world). No copyrights in place for borrowing that for a game session right? :) Go to Comment
The Potion of Explosive Entrails
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2007-09-02 04:45 PM
Goblin Bombs :) of explosive entrails, no less! I am mildly amused. Go to Comment
The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-01 08:38 PM
could use some more detailed explanation. like why cant magic be cast while its unsheathed, whats the seal look like, how did the blade get to be this way, who made the first one, etc...The bit about the smith unlocking full potential is kind of interesting-could use a little more splainin'

I'll hold off vote for now. Go to Comment
Clathrates
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-28 09:20 PM
i guess i'll wait until your done with this. Great so far! Go to Comment
Clathrates
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-01 06:52 PM
Auchinduin Deep Iron Mine
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-28 09:16 PM
Richbutbusy? :)

interesting scenario on top of being a 'location'. Great details- overbuilt buildings, mining taboos, cast of characters. I like how you structure your subs, this being a perfect example. Will be reading clathrate next. I wont have a HoH vote tomorrow, unlike Cheka, but would use it if I did. Go to Comment
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