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The Lost City of Paldor
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 01:01 PM
OK OK OK!!!....Twist my arm!!! I'll work on a Tekumel submission!!! :D Go to Comment
The Lost City of Paldor
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2007-12-08 05:20 PM
This could have been made into a kick-ass 5 Room Dungeon Go to Comment
The Lost City of Paldor
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2011-04-16 12:41 PM


Really like this one. The  submerged city, pumps, water-ways,and the abandoned ancientness of it all (that is not a word, i know), with an under pining of Tekumel, and a dash of Venice. Good show.


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Simeon the Caretaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-08 02:29 PM
Love detailed minor npc's!! They make the world a better place :D Go to Comment
Elvenesque
Systems  (Architectural)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-08 02:32 PM
WOW! this is the type of submission I would never think of myself. I think thats why I like it so much! Subtle, memorable, and useful! Go to Comment
Copolactol
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-23 01:12 AM
Very Nice Maggot! Whats not too like? Here's my favorite passage. Curls my toes..

"Selecting the choicest beauties from Nayre's harem, he coupled with them as his bothers once had with the daughters of the priest-kings of Arahuai, and from their wombs obtained numerous offspring, awarding each of them a seperate part of his invisible empire to control"

I love the detail, love the Copo's outlook on life, and and of course, I like that you included bits and pieces of my world in this :D

Oh and I liked the constant Sarahi presence! Go to Comment
Condru-Hanra
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-07 07:38 PM
Heavy Duty NPC! A bizarre but intriguing mythology. Go to Comment
Hry'un
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-08 06:23 PM
Very interesting substance. Could still use a few more details. And I guess I'll throw a "shout out" to myself for the plot hooks :D

Could this be the near-mythical Greek Fire?? Go to Comment
Buzzards Bay
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-12 05:22 PM
"They set themselves up on empty thrones and partied in abandoned palaces"

love that line *images dancing in head*

World building, one tea leaf at a time...very nice. Here's to Falhath...Nazdarovya! Go to Comment
Elven Green Tea
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-06 09:57 PM
Great concept Scras!! Could inspire a great scroll some day..."False Impressions" Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 12:35 AM
Ayyosha is the 'resident deity' of the Cloister, and OTF has no god. THE SOURCE is a RUSE! Its a mind control cult (shhh, dont tell the people) Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-07 12:31 AM


hmmm....this might be difficult to explain properly. We wanted to minimize the demon influence and maximize the strenghth of human WILL! Ayyosha's will. An exaggerated take on what the human spirit is capable of, when faced with ultimate desperation and hopelessness, so to speak. Ayyosha achieved a new state of being due to some unknown universal force. The demon was added to make this easier to digest as an rp concept. Of course there is resistence to the One True Faith! Stay tuned! There are many that twist the nebulous ideas for their own design. Thats the OTF's beauty. Easily altered and recalibrated. See Earl Garmon Cabbagestalk in Qacha's Neck to name one such miscreant. And your damn right! It aint easy taking over the world! Passively-aggresively or otherwise. I'm sure Scras will have his own take. Thats the pleasure of working with him! We dont step on each other's toes

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Cloister of the Empty Table
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2006-12-19 05:30 PM
Umm, ok, I guess :) Go to Comment
Wolfkin
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-04 11:05 PM
2157 see this link for inspiration Colonel Drackler! Go to Comment
Wolfkin
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-11-17 11:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wolfkin
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2008-12-04 01:18 PM
Kudos on rewrite. A re-vote will be upcoming. Go to Comment
Ice Caves
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-06 10:24 PM
I guess I'll be the lone voice of dissent. Why is everyone gushing about this being such an "new" thing? "new dungeon environment?" ummm "6??".

As always, it is written VERY WELL! But I dont get the uproar??? Haven't you all sent your players through ice caves countless times? Is this really a brand new idea?? My pc's have frozen their backsides off in ice caves thousands of times!

Ice caves are cool(hehe) dont get me wrong, and fun to play in. This sub does a great job describing said caves for gaming purposes, but ummm...they are ice caves! I know you've played in them before!!

I vote 3.5 which according to rankings means "Sweet Idea", which it is. Go to Comment
Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-03 11:17 PM
He does have trouble wielding a sword as his ring finger has been severed at the base, his last words as a duke and hopeful for the throne were 'you will have to cut the ring off of my finger.' They did.

Thats the line that did it!!

This should be a template on how to make an ordinary bad-tempered "fighter" , COME ALIVE!!

he needs 10-15 squires? thats a lotta squire baby! does #15 carry his chamberpot?

and finally, is it Ouranga or Ourange? I prefer former. Go to Comment
The Kemlar Healing Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-03 11:23 PM
Cheka beat me to the Heroin line.

My pc's just finished getting banged up and will be heading to a nearby monastery they heard about next session, for some much needed healing and R&R. The monastery just became a crack addict den!! The monastery is in the pepper hills you see and.....

Thanks Nobody!! Go to Comment
The Kemlar Healing Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-10-06 12:56 PM
Actually, not heroin, more like addiction to pain-killers, me'thinks, would be a more appropriate analogy. Go to Comment
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Mining in a certain area turns all exposed skin (maybe just parts that are actively disturbing the chemicals that cause the reaction) of the those doing the mining to a dark blue color. Will wear off taking as many years/days spent in the mine. ... meeting a party of blue-skinned humans armed with pick-axes etc. Strange disease? Demon offspring? Curse? If they meet only one ex-worker, they will very carefully listen to any stories he says, no matter if drunken or insane, or just makes up to get a beer.

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