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The Children of Ma-O
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:39 PM
ask and you shall receive! I had mentioned I could use a little more Ma-O-isms after reading the original post, and here they are! Go to Comment
Saja Jyn
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
I have to be honest. She's a bit of a cliche. But the three posts combined are well done! Go to Comment
ShadowKin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ma-O the Water Deamon
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:35 PM
I would add some more tidbits, like a Ma-O cult for example, and a maybe a little darker backstory, but thats just me. It seems it could be drawn out into a slightly longer more detailed sub. I like the overall concept quite a bit however! Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-01 12:48 AM
PFC and illegal cock-fights!

Strolen, I give your comment 5/5!! Go to Comment
Powlgraff
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-10-13 09:21 PM
thanks Wulf!

Plot Hook #1 is ok. Plot Hooks #2 (how appropriate!) and #3 (oy, the bloodshed and feathers!) are hysterical! :D

what are you waiting for? right up Mrrrrorw already! Go to Comment
Whispers Of The Thief
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-19 01:12 AM
I will be using this system for my upcoming Thieves Guild gaming session!!

Like Scras, I have heard of something similar somewhere before, but who cares? Here it is in full execution! + 1/2 sword for hoping that I enjoyed it :D I did!!

please link this and Varok Fly (like the creature, I love pomegranite juice too!) to BM if you would. Thanks! Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-17 10:48 PM
Cigarette City!! yeah baby!

Scras- I kind of thought it was blaise when we spoke about it earlier, but then you went and introduced cigarretes, for what I believe, (Moon will tell me if I'm wrong) the first time in the annals of pseudo-medieval fantasy city lore, or at least Strolens annals. GGGGgggreat!

sorry- Its St. Patty's day and I'm mildly trashed :D and I can use a Zettelette Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-13 02:22 PM
I just reread this again. I think its the perfect foil to its twin!! Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2007-01-10 10:16 PM
Lookit! Scras invented cigarettes for fantasy everyone! Go to Comment
Weather Related PlotSeeds
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2007-02-21 07:26 PM
fantastic and often underused concept, Moon! (and contributing peeps) Go to Comment
Solomontic Rug
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-16 06:11 PM
Moon, this is one of my favorite of your submissions! I've been running a LOW-magic campaign for years now and wish I had more of such items to pepper my world with! So rich in detail & texture, yet not powerful (at all)!! The symbols, the imagery!! Nowadays when I think of "wizards" and "magic" THIS IS WHAT I HAVE IN MIND!! I LOVE IT!!!

at some point tonight I'll be getting another HoH thinga-ma-jiggy, and then off you go upstairs.

THANKS!! Go to Comment
Solomontic Rug
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 06:27 PM
I wouldn't classify myself as either a geek or a follower of other's voting practices. I was drunk when I commented however :D Go to Comment
Solomontic Rug
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-19 02:44 AM
:D Ok if you put it that way...touche!

Your not going to post another paragraph explaining Scras Magnets are you?

oh wait, you did...I would disagree with that one from a personal perspective, but from an overall human nature aspect....sure, that makes sense.

I personally dont care if someone is a 10 year Strolenite or joined last week. A good idea is a good idea, and a not so good one....

Whats the difference how long someone's been a Strolenite? I joined a month ago, but have been doing whats done here for 22 years.

P.S. I do like Scras and tend to enjoy his work, for the record...yours too AG! :D

P.P.S. Sorry Moon, your wonderful Rug is going tangential!

P.P.P.S I just told Scras in chat earlier that "if I vote on one more of your subs today, AG will think I'm your kid brother!" :D Go to Comment
Filles D'Rame
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (Country/ State)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-15 08:07 PM
Pussycat Dolls doing Shakespeare! That says it all!

This adds a lot of color and realism to any world or campaign. No combat, no mystery (necessarily) as you mention, which is great! An additional plot hook might be a bard character trying to get Chardonne and Jonquille to agree to stage one of his or her original plays. Or how about one of the chracters falling in love with one the ladies or vice versa. Finally, the characters attend a play during some down time, only to be mocked when the Filles D'Rame put on a parody performance of the pc's last adventure (the ladies have heard of group's exploits through the grapevine), with some improvisational bawdry romance thrown in for laughs, or some inaccurate tragedy involving one of the characters which didn't really occur! Go to Comment
Sword of the Ocean
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-15 04:57 PM
Scras, I like all your work as you know. This is not one of my favorites, but after linking over to Leviathan, I see what the point of this is. It makes for fun reading regardless whether I like the sword or not. I like the weaknesses section and Ma-O's Disciples might make a great sub of its own.

The Thrice-Drowned-Priest leads his flock to the storm-raging seashore, damp sea-weed falling from his hair and robes. "Listen to the ROAR of Ma-O my wet ones!! From the Ocean we crawled, and to the Ocean we shall all return!!" Go to Comment
Coinlenders Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Local)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-15 12:37 AM
The conversation is key to this sub I think! (everything in italics). It makes it come alive. This is hard for me to judge for some reason. Its a great story about a basic bank/loansharking outfit, but I guess that's the idea here. So let me just say I enjoyed reading it. The details, obvious effort, and connection with Kings Paupers put it over the top for the extra 1/2 sword

I like the Templar-esque, deposit money here, withdraw money someplace else angle. And I really like the name Tam Josgar. It just fits! Not crazy about the other names however. Go to Comment
Coinlenders Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Local)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-15 11:09 PM
"Thats the key. How do you describe how a fantasy financial bank/ extortion ring comes to existance?"

IMHO, thats NOT the key. A bank is a bank is a bank. The sub has the necessary verisimilitude and backstory. I think the *key* is adding nuance, idiosynchrasies, texture and detail, both applicable and tangential(!). Its fantasy. Add something fantastic that makes it unique, without ruining the original concept. Again, this is just IMHO. Go to Comment
The Varok Fly
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-19 01:09 AM
the pomegranite juice detail is my favorite!! Go to Comment
The Black Market
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-14 09:47 AM
It can go in comments, or right into the submission if you want me to copy/paste it, with a "-by Maggot" disclaimer of course :D. Up to you! Go to Comment
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