I like that you impart a lot of information with few words. One of your skills that I appreciate most. Not my favorite band of knights, but then again, everything about them makes sense, and comes together. I like that they are always dressed for death. Nice touch! Overall though, I've read and come across many similar groups. Go to Comment
Very Nice Maggot! Whats not too like? Here's my favorite passage. Curls my toes..
"Selecting the choicest beauties from Nayre's harem, he coupled with them as his bothers once had with the daughters of the priest-kings of Arahuai, and from their wombs obtained numerous offspring, awarding each of them a seperate part of his invisible empire to control"
I love the detail, love the Copo's outlook on life, and and of course, I like that you included bits and pieces of my world in this :D