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Daedroth
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 08:28 PM
This is Brilliant!!! Go to Comment
Dreifach
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 05:48 PM
I cant find fault with it. It reeks of reality! And as usual I love the structure of the sub. A tidy but RICH history and vibe. Go to Comment
Dreifach
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-22 11:26 AM
For whats its worth, I think Dreifach is a great name, and I think Threefold is a pretty cool name for a city as well, even if the translation was the same in Falhath. It fits.

This opens up a whole can of worms. Does this mean I cant name an island "Paa'lua'a'pa'o" because it means "Scratch my left nut" in Polynesian?

on a side note: no beer drinkers? I might have to deduct a full sword! Go to Comment
Nurin beads
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 07:10 PM
Great back story, well balanced, and many RP uses for the beads Go to Comment
The Supreme Order of Kren
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-15 08:05 PM
My favorite of the Kren entries. Well done CM! Go to Comment
The Stairs of Kienor
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-13 10:16 PM
I find it difficult to give this anything other than a 5 for 2 reasons. One, it shows your passion for your craft and subject once again. Two, there is just TOO MUCH to take from all these details and concepts not to love it! Is it the perfect seamless plot? Maybe not. But as in Black Legion, my personal favorite Opus of yours, there is so much malleable information to steal for my campaign!

Also, unlike Cheka and Roack, I LOVE not having every last detail explained regarding Long Man Death. I can do with him what I please, and have more than enough information to do so. I think it serves wonderfully as the side plot its intended to be. The main plot is explained FULLY. A somewhat vague, minor side scenario, like Long Man Death, gives the overall presentation texture and makes it even better!

"5" vote definition says 1) "Awesome!", which it is 2) "I will find a way to use it!" which I will.

One thing I dont like is the name Ackranon for some reason. Just doesnt seem to fit this dwarven character, no matter how much I want it to. It sounds like a name from a pre-teen video game. But thats personal preference I guess. Go to Comment
The Stairs of Kienor
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 01:43 AM
one last thing...the Local Legend on Long Man Death, should be identified as a children's sing-song, not unlike 'Ring around the Rosey'. Not sure if the adults would use it much. I think having the children sing this as the PCs walk by is more sinister. IMHO.

:D Go to Comment
The Stairs of Kienor
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-10 02:05 PM
BUMP and Golden vote! Just reread this again and yep, its still Brilliant!! Go to Comment
Black Oleander
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-12 05:11 PM
Four plot hooks for a flower. Very nice :)

As usual its the details that do it!

I just read about Yellow Oleanders, and how they are the leading tool for suicide in some country or other, literally seconds before seeing this sub, so that was pretty cool! Go to Comment
OBLIVION
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-12 04:38 PM
Makes Drackler's stuff look positively AWESOME! Go to Comment
The Bosques
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-12 05:05 PM
2 things make them unique. Well 3. Their strong distaste for magic is sublime! I like that they are heavy wine drinkers, but ale eludes them. Facial hair immediately makes me picture them. Thats a nice touch Nice details! Am I supposed to mention their Basqueness or not?

I have mentioned my love for LOW magic campaigns several times in previous comments, so I tend to think of Bosques as "My Peeps!" Go to Comment
Abandoned Mines
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-11 09:59 AM
Monsters- the possibilities are limitless really.

Natural Hazards- Rock slides, tunnel collapses, poisonous gas vents, water-filled passages, radioactive mineral deposits, impenetrable darkness, pressurized wind tunels, bottomless crevices.

Dwarven Legacies-

"The Bleeding Door". An two-foot thick Obsidian gate, carved from the surrounding rock, leading into the ancient dust-filled dwarven crypts. Drops of blood ooze from it, coagulating on the floor beneath it. (what it does is up to you).

"The Beard Golem". A hideous creature woven from countless dwarven beards, and ensorcelled to defend the inner catacombs, shambling among the empty halls. (holy crap! I might have to write this one up into a submission!)

"Dwarven Vampire". The rare and deadly dwarven vampire is not often expected by adventurers. This creature is the last of the dwarves!

"The Curse of Hawmeggora". A curse layed on a specific area. Once entered, the trespassers begin to slowly but irrevocably turn to stone over the course of the next several weeks.


any help? Go to Comment
Galron Stones
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-10 01:56 PM
VERY interesting!! Technical posts are not usually my cup of chai, but I like this one a lot! Go to Comment
The Order of Orders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 07:32 PM
Moon is on the case ma'am! You need not fear any longer! Sorry, watching Jeremy Brett again :D Go to Comment
The Order of Orders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 07:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Order of Orders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 09:33 PM
I just did the same thing lol Go to Comment
Corpse's Revenge
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 07:20 PM
I like it! and I'm using them! I would have liked to have seen a little more "oomph" on them though, like their environment for example. Go to Comment
Knights of the Shroud
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-09 10:53 AM
I like that you impart a lot of information with few words. One of your skills that I appreciate most. Not my favorite band of knights, but then again, everything about them makes sense, and comes together. I like that they are always dressed for death. Nice touch! Overall though, I've read and come across many similar groups. Go to Comment
30 Barkeepers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 11:10 AM
Holy Crap!! I just woke up and this is the first thing I see. How clever! How useful! hmmm...I'm sensing an underlying subtle something or other :D Go to Comment
30 Barkeepers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 12:58 PM
Hi Al! We try to stick to less complicated names here :D Go to Comment
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