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Zibaba
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 03:37 PM
This will be fantastic inspiration for me, when I get around to doing my "NIGHT OF THE MANDRILL!" In fact, I may borrow some ideas from this!

baboon cops??!! I thought the hyenas were the cops..I missed something. Need to re-read...aacckk!! I need me a nap! Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 04:58 PM
I would but it vanished (?) Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 02:24 PM
Great Drackler! do a song then would ya?

I am still embarrased that I cant add a song to my own damn idea for a scroll! :P Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2007-01-06 01:11 AM
I have been pondering which song to do, since last March, Moon :D I finally settled on one. Now I just need to write it up. See you next March. Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:02 AM
Charlie Daniels would be proud! hmmm, I actually like the idea of a sub based on a song. I think I'll start a scroll!

+ 1/2 sword for the interesting re-vamp. Glad you finished it Cheka! Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 05:02 PM
May I make a suggestion? "Golden Fiddle" instead of "The Fiddle Of Gold"

also, what Mourn said :D Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-16 10:14 PM
This goes down as one of my favorite posts of yours all-time! The scope and verisimilitude is amazing. A subtle yet powerful treatise on history and religion par excellence! And it doesnt pound you over the head with a hammer. It flows smoothly.

More to come? Go to Comment
Kastraad and New Pastello
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 11:25 AM
I have no issues with the history and economics lesson. That I like. I just think that you wrote this too quickly maybe (the frequent use of parenthesis are a clue to that). Its just a bit dry, though again, I have no problem with hard-core realism! Go to Comment
The Blib
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:48 AM
great first submission Erfunden! I cant help but love these pink rubbery critters.
I enjoyed reading this entry. You have a talent for the "turn-of-the-phrase." Short, sweet, and chock full of detail. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 02:40 PM
Oh Captain My Captain! dont hog all the ladies!

love his ring! Go to Comment
Spectral Tablets
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:09 PM
This is one of my favorite subs of your Chaos! Happy Pills! (so to speak) Go to Comment
The Keepers Of Forbidden Beasts and Birds
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-24 02:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Keepers Of Forbidden Beasts and Birds
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-08-24 02:01 PM
Moraten Li
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:01 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 11:41 AM
I love the concept of 'Cathedral Village'! A community built around the massive structure makes perfect sense, and gives it such a realistic vibe. Go to Comment
The Children of Ma-O
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:39 PM
ask and you shall receive! I had mentioned I could use a little more Ma-O-isms after reading the original post, and here they are! Go to Comment
Saja Jyn
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
I have to be honest. She's a bit of a cliche. But the three posts combined are well done! Go to Comment
ShadowKin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-21 10:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ma-O the Water Deamon
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-18 08:35 PM
I would add some more tidbits, like a Ma-O cult for example, and a maybe a little darker backstory, but thats just me. It seems it could be drawn out into a slightly longer more detailed sub. I like the overall concept quite a bit however! Go to Comment
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