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The Whalebone Forest
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2006-07-23 05:28 PM
I HoH'd this originally! It doesnt show...huh? Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
The Whalebone Forest
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-19 12:57 PM
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-04 09:41 PM
Not bad Colonel. Like Scras, I also like the names you used. And your stuff is improving! Hope to see it get better and better (more details and story Drackler)

howda ya' like that! I give you a nickname, and people think your an actual Colonel now :D

At Ease! Go to Comment
Voting Practices
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-21 10:28 AM

"Now You're Talking!" :P

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Protoss - A fantasy version
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-22 04:53 PM
I have NO CLUE what Starcraft is or was, but the post is sublime! Delicious details, but you know what?...I could have used even more detail with such an interesting race and world, not being familiar with its scope. Well done Moon!

hmmmm...Sun-Drenched Lands, can I steal that? Go to Comment
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-19 05:04 PM
I like her for all the potential plot hooks swirling around her. Go to Comment
Capathan Spiritual Beliefs
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-18 12:20 AM
Interesting crew. Like Spartans meets Samurais meets the early
Gnostics (The Logos) meets the Moonhunter.

The ideas are great, just a little rough around the edges with the overall explanations and presentation. I like the ritual suicide bit a lot, and the last paragraph on spirits and ghosts. Nice! Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-17 04:20 PM
Thats not nice Cheka...mvcr4 is new and just actually asked for advice on how to improve.

mvcr4, you need to put some more effort into this character. Ok...lots more! The history, the personality, motivations, etc...I do like the flesh chunks missing from his arm. :D

You have something here, but its VERY little. He's a mercenary, he is an elf raised by dwarves. Thats good. Go back and fill out his whole story. If you want to PM me, I'd be glad to help.

take a look at some NPC posts by others, you'll see what I mean. And as per your request on main chat, post something in forum section, as far as what you need help with, and everyone will try to aid you. Go to Comment
The Adamant Chef
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-15 12:47 PM

Black Vinegar is unique to the famous Dwarven chefs of Degroz-Dag. It is made under the supervision of specialized dwarves who's soul purpose is the vinegar's quality control and keeping the process a secret. Black vinegar is made when the darkest dwarven meads go sour. Large amounts of sugar and other secret ingredients are added and the final product is akin to the long-aged syrupy, viscous balsamics of our world. Made properly, it requires at least ten years of aging in treated oaken barrels, away from any light sources or heat.

Black Vinegar, or Ooxsus as the dwarves call it, is then bottled and exported, as well as used by the dwarves themselves as a flavor addition to their meaty and hearty recipes. It is never used in the cooking process due to its extremely concentrated and piquant flavor, but as a final accent in the form of several gooey drops right before the meal is served. With its sharp, pungent smell and deep, smokey, muti-layered flavor, it is a favorite at all Dwarven marriage feasts.

The humans have taken to making imitation Ooxsus, but this comes out more sour and less thick than the dwarven original. This pleases the enterprising dwarves, since it just allows them to charge even more for their Ooxsus. Go to Comment
The Adamant Chef
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-15 12:49 PM
Great scroll idea for foodies everywhere like me, and of course Shadoweagle, Master Aussie Chef. :D Go to Comment
Epargner Daemon
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-15 07:36 PM
I was getting geared up to do a Homunculi entry of my own, and this is refreshing, because it re-confirms the beauty of this site. Same creature, VERY different approach.

All kinds of ideas assault my brains upon reading this. Go to Comment
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-01 10:01 AM
Love subs like this! Travel guides for campaign worlds! People, Places and Things. Though I'm now familiar with most of these places from previous subs, its nice to see it all together. Gives the world overall panache! Go to Comment
Darak One-Eye
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 05:43 PM
This is how MAN achieves IMMORTALITY. His deeds, his works, and his myth live on long after his inevitable demise.

Great character! A few dozen such NPCs and the world quivers and begins to BREATHE! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 08:28 PM
This is Brilliant!!! Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 05:48 PM
I cant find fault with it. It reeks of reality! And as usual I love the structure of the sub. A tidy but RICH history and vibe. Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-22 11:26 AM
For whats its worth, I think Dreifach is a great name, and I think Threefold is a pretty cool name for a city as well, even if the translation was the same in Falhath. It fits.

This opens up a whole can of worms. Does this mean I cant name an island "Paa'lua'a'pa'o" because it means "Scratch my left nut" in Polynesian?

on a side note: no beer drinkers? I might have to deduct a full sword! Go to Comment
Nurin beads
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 07:10 PM
Great back story, well balanced, and many RP uses for the beads Go to Comment
The Supreme Order of Kren
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-15 08:05 PM
My favorite of the Kren entries. Well done CM! Go to Comment
The Stairs of Kienor
Plots  (Travel)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-13 10:16 PM
I find it difficult to give this anything other than a 5 for 2 reasons. One, it shows your passion for your craft and subject once again. Two, there is just TOO MUCH to take from all these details and concepts not to love it! Is it the perfect seamless plot? Maybe not. But as in Black Legion, my personal favorite Opus of yours, there is so much malleable information to steal for my campaign!

Also, unlike Cheka and Roack, I LOVE not having every last detail explained regarding Long Man Death. I can do with him what I please, and have more than enough information to do so. I think it serves wonderfully as the side plot its intended to be. The main plot is explained FULLY. A somewhat vague, minor side scenario, like Long Man Death, gives the overall presentation texture and makes it even better!

"5" vote definition says 1) "Awesome!", which it is 2) "I will find a way to use it!" which I will.

One thing I dont like is the name Ackranon for some reason. Just doesnt seem to fit this dwarven character, no matter how much I want it to. It sounds like a name from a pre-teen video game. But thats personal preference I guess. Go to Comment
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Soup Dragon A Tale of Mysantia

       By: Aramax

This hedonistic dragon,sets up camp in a cities alley exchanging his hot tasty breath weapon for strong drink.

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