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Changing faces
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 03:09 PM
damn it! I'm starting to like the name...Grinning Bibbleflibble Go to Comment
Changing faces
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-03 04:41 PM
you'd be suspicious? yeah, so? ever hear of pc curiousity?

the "stupidname" comment is just stupid...take a look at some 4.5 and 5 vote posts BH, and you'll see that names here at Strolens run the gamut. It would have been much nicer to simply say, You weren't crazy about the name!

Your third paragraph I have no issue with.

Fourth paragraph is once again, unnecessarily cruel!

Use your powers of perception for chrissakes! Does this look like it will ever be a masterpiece? Obviously not!...but there's no reason for these type of comments. You may think your "helping" the guy get better, but you are simply deriding him, and extinguishing his enthusiasm!

See Scrasamax' and Moon's comments above for whats known as "constructive criticism"

If you feel like Drackler isnt "learning"...then simply let it go!

Sorry, but this is getting me riled up! Leave the guy alone! He's young, he's new, and at least he's semi-trying. And he happens to be a nice guy to boot! Go to Comment
Changing faces
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-03 05:03 PM
sorry...still riled up.

its the phrases he uses..."led by the nose" being my main pet peeve!

No matter how many paragraphs of pseudo-intellectual pedantic babble is posted on this sub, its obvious by now, that this one is what it is!

AG- your a human nature buff right? It just pisses me off, that its so much more pleasurable for some people to look down from high above and try to "educate" others and sounding needlessly pompous, while being anonymous no less!

GRRRR...ok counting to ten slowly...feeling better. I'll stop now. :P Go to Comment
Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 04:24 PM
This Rod has SOOO much potential. Any chance you could further flesh it out? some more history, a little more detail, that sort of thing :)

welcome! Go to Comment
Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 10:35 PM
Thanks Drackler Go to Comment
Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 02:50 PM
That Barbarian Horde comment was me...sorry timed out. Go to Comment
The Azure Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 11:43 AM
I really like their structure and hierarchy! Who is their leader? And why so many parenthesis?

well done! An intricate, believable, political animal! Now I'll have to jump over to the Greater Comet Academy Go to Comment
Zayarahausc, the Viles of Salt
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2016-02-20 10:06 PM
Just crazy evocative! Go to Comment
Seyeverasin, the Waning-Moon Musicians
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-30 10:32 AM
I actually like these a tad better...Unique! Go to Comment
Lavas, the Raging Ones
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-30 10:30 AM
"converge in packs like lice on the inconceivable walls of Hell"- nice! Go to Comment
The Old World
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 04:06 PM
Dang! I need to do something just like this!! This is great Scras! What Moon said too! A nicely rendered and textured timeline.

Whats Exalted? never mind I guess I'll google-fu it :) Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-08 02:24 PM
Cyrus and Darius? they are Persian? Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 08:33 PM
You worked hard on this I know. Your love for the knights is obvious and all the interesting details puts this over the top! The tiers were great and the different armor was a unique touch. That was my favorite. Well done!

I might be adding more comments as I re-read and fully digest the info. Go to Comment
Zibaba
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 01:13 PM
UNGAWA!! (Tarzan speak)

Sorry haven't slept in days, otherwise I'd have a more intelligent comment. I will vote for now, and come back to this soon, to share some thoughts. I love it! It feels vividly real! I can SMELL the place! I also have a feeling Scras and/or Moon will say what I want to say here for me :D


UNGAWA!! Go to Comment
Zibaba
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 03:37 PM
This will be fantastic inspiration for me, when I get around to doing my "NIGHT OF THE MANDRILL!" In fact, I may borrow some ideas from this!

baboon cops??!! I thought the hyenas were the cops..I missed something. Need to re-read...aacckk!! I need me a nap! Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 04:58 PM
I would but it vanished (?) Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 02:24 PM
Great Drackler! do a song then would ya?

I am still embarrased that I cant add a song to my own damn idea for a scroll! :P Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2007-01-06 01:11 AM
I have been pondering which song to do, since last March, Moon :D I finally settled on one. Now I just need to write it up. See you next March. Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 11:02 AM
Charlie Daniels would be proud! hmmm, I actually like the idea of a sub based on a song. I think I'll start a scroll!

+ 1/2 sword for the interesting re-vamp. Glad you finished it Cheka! Go to Comment
The Golden Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-24 05:02 PM
May I make a suggestion? "Golden Fiddle" instead of "The Fiddle Of Gold"

also, what Mourn said :D Go to Comment
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