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The Ring of Hurtling
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-15 10:54 PM
Brilliant! That rarity...super-short, but GREAT! The comments are good too, every one made me nod as i read it. Makes you immediately think of uses/abuses for this beautiful item. Forganthus sums it all up nicely with....Ring of Epic Badass!!

I have to ask, since no one has...what pray tell is the origin tale of this thing?!
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Halan Of Gimirrai
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-10 11:35 PM
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Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Murometz's comment on 2013-04-23 12:43 AM
Wow. I would add a press-gang element in there somewhere, unless i missed it, but holy crap this is useful. Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-08 10:55 PM
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Gypsy Names
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-15 11:02 PM
I kinda like this because its actually useful, and I don't need the meanings of the names. The names are consistently (obviously) Tsigani, meaning we don't jump around from Phalzalzafrax to...Bob. You'd be surprised how many "name groupings" don't follow suit.

one note: Tsigan means "gypsy" in several eastern European languages, so that one may not fit.

Welcome to the Citadel!
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Pendulum Puzzle
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-15 11:34 PM
What Strolen said.Classic dungeon-crawl puzzle.Love it! I would take some license with the wording on the rhyme though, if I was to use this.

Good job, these aren't that easy to pull off well, and you did! Go to Comment
Pendulum Puzzle
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Murometz's comment on 2013-10-25 03:09 PM
Not to nit-pick, because I actually love this, but I noticed you saying, "added solution outline." I reread it, and unless i'm blind, I don't actually see any "solution outline". What am I missing? Anyway, once again, good job with this! These kind of puzzles bring back great memories of golden-age gaming. I'm glad this survived the "Purge", and now, the Survivor burning tower icon somehow adds a nice touch aesthetically. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-10 06:15 PM
Some heady myth-making here. Good stuff! Evocative imagery of a crimson-stained obsidian wolf! Some nice prose.

I'm curious regarding the paragraph that begins..."Rather than possessing intelligence and sentience, Vauraki is elemental in nature. It is a primal, bestial force...."

The Ozquin Dremorix gave birth to the Vauraki based on faith-and-belief "projection". If enough believe comes to be. So far so good. When the occasional "upstart" Ouzquin Dremorix attempts to summon/control Vauraki, do they understand that it is a "primal, uncaring, elemental entity", or do they have some idea that they themselves created it, and thus *can* potentially worship/control it?

If that question doesn't make sense, fair enough, we'll move on :p

I'll close with...yet another great addition to the world of Ouzquin Dremorix! Go to Comment
The Cult of Equilibrium
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-12 07:02 PM
I find this an interesting take on how to role-play neutrality. Great comments too, pulling the idea in various directions. Go to Comment
Kashmir Orbital Annex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Space)
Murometz's comment on 2015-01-21 01:27 PM
Naturally, this orbiting hunk just begs for a session centering on it!! My favorite part is the bribing/corruption angle, which really adds verisimilitude, if one is familiar with India's colossal bribing/corruption machinery. Go to Comment
The Other Side
Plots  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-01 01:37 PM
Love this one! A joy to read and ponder. And HOLY COMMENTARY, BATMAN! :P Go to Comment
Valadaar, Hand of Ashantar
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-23 12:45 PM
What an interesting format for a character write-up! I love the "Battles attended" and the "peer quotes"! Terrific that. Go to Comment
The Citadels Name Exchange
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-22 10:08 PM
I will make no quips about the white-space (though a few come to mind). This would be an amazing sub some day when we have thousands of names here!! Will add my rogues gallery!! Good idea, val! Go to Comment
Lwausf's Intra Continental Sling Shot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-24 06:51 PM
Amusing and clever in all the right places and has that consistent dwarviness throughout. I can tell you had fun writing this! Go to Comment
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-19 12:52 PM
Hmm,solid, if a bit dry, as Dossta says. We may have to add this concept to "30 Divine Concepts"! :) Go to Comment
Angel BioModification
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-18 08:03 PM

"Worthington Biotechnologies would be later bought out and subsumed into the conglomerate of Gordon, Kingsman, and Thorne (GKT)."

Hey, I love that kinda stuff! Go to Comment
Inanna's Silver Tongues
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 11:18 AM
Sure, this works. A cult of rabid do-gooders.This could use a bit of flair though and...something. Go to Comment
The Players Cult
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-13 11:12 AM
Well, this is interesting and well written! So of course i get a whole Scientology meets Matrix vibe reading this. Very cool and modern (or post-modern. One of those) Go to Comment
The Players Cult
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-15 03:07 PM
"because the subject seems humorous but it's written in a serious way."

That's what makes it good :) Go to Comment
Specialst Damien Snow
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 11:15 AM
You know, I actually don't mind this format for a character. It does tell you everything you need to know to "use" him in whatever fashion.Since this is a character in a story you're writing, i can also understand how this format helps you plan your tale. Its just that we tend to love prose and your take on the character's history, mind-set, dynamic within story (or game), etc, as opposed to just the basic structure. Does that make sense?

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