Whoa. Lots of different ideas and concepts in this one. It could use a polishing read-through I think, but it's a poignant tale. Almost reminds me of a game of thrones type of tragic family drama...the father angry at the newborn that slew the woman he loved, by simply being born.
So, will you reveal the mystery of the fire? And what happens to Gark'ng next?
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Welcome to the Citadel, sammo!