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Lwausf's Intra Continental Sling Shot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-24 06:51 PM
Amusing and clever in all the right places and has that consistent dwarviness throughout. I can tell you had fun writing this! Go to Comment
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-19 12:52 PM
Hmm,solid, if a bit dry, as Dossta says. We may have to add this concept to "30 Divine Concepts"! :) Go to Comment
Angel BioModification
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-18 08:03 PM

"Worthington Biotechnologies would be later bought out and subsumed into the conglomerate of Gordon, Kingsman, and Thorne (GKT)."

Hey, I love that kinda stuff! Go to Comment
Inanna's Silver Tongues
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 11:18 AM
Sure, this works. A cult of rabid do-gooders.This could use a bit of flair though and...something. Go to Comment
The Players Cult
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-13 11:12 AM
Well, this is interesting and well written! So of course i get a whole Scientology meets Matrix vibe reading this. Very cool and modern (or post-modern. One of those) Go to Comment
The Players Cult
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-15 03:07 PM
"because the subject seems humorous but it's written in a serious way."

That's what makes it good :) Go to Comment
Specialst Damien Snow
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 11:15 AM
You know, I actually don't mind this format for a character. It does tell you everything you need to know to "use" him in whatever fashion.Since this is a character in a story you're writing, i can also understand how this format helps you plan your tale. Its just that we tend to love prose and your take on the character's history, mind-set, dynamic within story (or game), etc, as opposed to just the basic structure. Does that make sense?

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Specialst Damien Snow
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-15 10:48 AM
Fair enough. I guess my question then your Forum intro you mentioned that you don't role-play but like to write. So I find myself curious as to why you seem focused on a "character sheet" to begin with, instead of free-style writing? Again, just curious. Go to Comment
Mriulnarth, Heart of the Demons
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 12:27 PM
This is a pretty cool write-up with some flair. I like the demonic feel of the piece throughout, like all the names, and enjoyed the background "voice". The Wall is indeed a gruesome encounter. Good campaign fiber here. Go to Comment
Taqukaq's Trading Post
Locations  (Establishment)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-05 12:10 AM
I'm a big fan of seemingly incongruous locations in an otherwise wasteland. It has that sinister arctic flavor hidden behind a veil of the commonplace. I can see a Cthulhu mythos short-story starting out this way... Go to Comment
Fo Derarer Agger
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-07 08:34 PM
A suitable suit of super-armor for a high-magic campaign. The last quote is interesting. Somehow, i find myself wanting to know who Pivon and Avnon are now.

I guess its the name, i keep thinking of a dagger rather than armor as I read this. So subliminal, that name! :)

welcome to the Citadel, Darkornyx! Go to Comment
The Dog Pit Public House
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-03 02:44 PM
Nothing unusual, but good amount of detail and a "homey" feel to the place. I hope i didn't miss a reference to it, but I think this needs a few lines about the gambling aspects...

...which reminds me of this exchange:

horse-lover: Gambling is whats wrong with horse-racing
realist: Without gambling there wouldn't be horse-racing.

(I'd pay to see woman v gnome) Go to Comment
Is Anybody Out There?
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2013-02-22 05:02 PM
Fermi coined that? Bah! I've been asking "Where is Everybody?" since at least 89'. When did Fermi get around to it? :)

We are alone. We must love each other. Go to Comment
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-04 01:19 PM
very cool concoctions! And I like the voice of the piece, adding entertainment value to the reading. Firewater and Utterblack are my faves. Go to Comment
Griven Smartstaff, Scholar of Small Proportions
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2013-02-27 10:34 AM
What Scras said! Glad he's not a "tinkerer"! Love the tiny bookshelf! Go to Comment
Devil's Spit
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-02-21 02:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-31 06:50 PM
This is as good a primer on a world as i can imagine. You get a sense of everything and society's zeitgeist
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Kalraka Dzeik – The Lightning's Will
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-30 05:54 PM
Great creature! The detail is overwhelming (in a good way!). I like its personality too, in so far as it reminds me of a petulant child. There are so may ways to go with this in any given campaign, from the creature itself to the cult, to all the other concepts and ideas within. Superb! Go to Comment
Kalraka Dzeik – The Lightning's Will
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-30 09:30 PM
Oh and I'd like to know something about that sentient forest fire. That sounds rich. A cleansing, cyclical force of nature? The druids revere it? Does it spread itself when it so chooses? Inquiring minds want to know. Go to Comment
Kalraka Dzeik – The Lightning's Will
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-02-02 10:34 AM
"@Murometz: My sentient forest fire was a refugee from the Plane of Fire, where he had been serving in the Brass Palace as a decoration (of all things). He's made himself into something of an anti-druid bent on recreating a little slice of home on the Material Plane. He also branched out into a forest creating a linked network of fire that he moved within, like the nucleus of a growing amoeba. He summons tornadoes, gouts of subterranean flame, and treants that serve him (unwillingly) as they burn to death."

4.5/5! Go to Comment
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