Well, i enjoyed this greatly! It's funny, pseudo-deep, and a little disturbing. Create and Destroy! Abrupt end seemed perfect to me.
I can see why Sil and knowman want to know more though...the ending begs for more!
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And yet, that's my takeaway. The reader decides why everything is clear to it now. The computer doesn't know jack shit.
My favorite part of this is Mauk negotiating with the thieves guild and the fact they produced the contractors to build the well, and later wanted their percentage upped. The behind the scenes by-play and all that. Adds a sense of "realism" to the proceedings.Go to Comment