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30 Dwarven Treasures
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-01 11:49 AM
Great list, quite a few original ideas and oh so dwarven in feel. Go to Comment
Slagger Tornfury
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-01 11:44 AM
His key-beard of unlocking is pure gold!! Can picture him walking up to an intricate triple-locked door. His hanging whiskers animate and dive into two key-holes like moray eels, squirming around. His beard meanwhile, (i picture it golden-blonde for some reason), contorts itself into a bizarre key-like form and enters the third key-hole. His eyes roll back into his head....clack, clack, click.

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Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-02 10:24 PM
Simply the concept of twisting the phoenix/bennu bird into its dark-winged opposite is a magnificent one! A true cosmic horror!

I'm slightly less crazy about its name. It seems modern-ish, for such a legendary being..."murder"? For my tastes, even "Deathblaze" for example, seems more epic, dunno. I feel this avian darkness deserves a more epic name.

Would love to see a bit more on the creature too. What else does it do? Where does it go, why does it go there, some character interaction of some sort. Some further legends or anecdotal horror.

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101 Useless or Trivial Super/Mutant Powers
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-28 02:52 PM
A wand of wonder for the Superheroes set. I do love these type of lists! Some weirdly useful (21, 75, 83, 31, lol, 44, etc...), some excruciatingly trivial and ridiculously annoying! (101).

(and for all its lovely silliness, its a perfect print-out page for the notebook of any Supes/Mutants GM).
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Citadel's Blaze
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-02 10:36 PM
I'm not sure what to do with this but i like the concept, I think. Also, not sure how to add to it yet. Will contemplate. Go to Comment
The Moira Chalice of Kormak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-29 01:21 PM

Sorry can't help myself...

"Kalima, KAH-LEE-MAAAAH!!!"


"I'm coming Shorty!"

Love it. Creepy, eldritch and necromantic! Makes you want to take a quick shower. Of course the image helps as well! One question. Why Moira? What does it signify? Why is this dread chalice of doom, named after an irish lass?

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The Moira Chalice of Kormak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-29 03:17 PM
Cool. I learned something new. Go to Comment
Sanguis Isles
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-28 12:35 PM

I'm torn. On one hand I agree with Dossta and Strolen's take (i even just up-voted the comment), yet I feel i have to add my 2 cents as well here, and stick up for caesar. This is a location in his world. He is describing a place, travel log style. It is geography with cultural, day-in-the-life bits, and it is as useful for gms perusing the site, as any other submission may be that features 68 plot hooks, and 900 ways to use a sub from a pc's perspective. I can actually prove my point by linking DOZENS of submissions here as examples of locations, tales, etc that feature NO plot hooks or any OVERT pc interest whatsoever, that strolenites loved and voted highly on. Why am I so sure? because *I* am a gm who peruses this site for locations (among other things) and find myself not caring at all whether or not a place has pc plot hooks or not. I can add those ,i mean, its my job to make up the evening's "adventure". But in the case of this sub, I can choose to use this geography and the cultural notes as a base, if for example, i don't feel like wracking my brains for a detailed location, where all the action happens. THEN, i can put whatever i want in these islands, and come up with 1 million different ways to hook pcs. I guess my point is i personally don't mind reading location subs that don't cry out to pcs. I can also steal the little the "shit ships" coming in full of manure. Very flavorful tid-bit (seriously) Or the ghost rumors on Pravus, etc... Having said that, I do agree this place can use a bit more "oomph" :-)

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Undead Beard Fleas
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 10:05 PM
I like them. Particularly the fact that a dwarf will "live with them", rather than cut his beard. Very dwarven. I like their necromantic origin as well, as it makes perfect sense. And I like that just by adding Beardspiders to this sub, you somehow managed to inject some verisimilitude into both, if that makes sense.

A Poosker would indeed be very fearful of these things, for it reminds them of their idea of an afterlife (to be devoured forever by Girm's Swarm!) Another legend tells of the Pooskers Hell, which refers to the Great Pit into which St. Girm led the Legions of Infestation, filled with an unimaginable number of slithering, microscopic, undead beasts.

I wonder, is this sub more dwarven or more necromantic? :) Go to Comment
Undead Beard Fleas
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-26 11:55 AM
Forgot to mention, love their latinized name...Puces Barbe Morts Go to Comment
Dwarven proverbs, sayings, quotes, anecdotes and euphemisms
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-28 12:01 PM

50. Life is a gem. Hard, multifaceted, and tough to hold on to

51. Make sure its charred and bleeding (expression used at one time for troll-slaying, but now refers to making sure any adversary is truly dead or dying. Strangely, also used to describe the dwarven preference for charred and rare meat.)

52. Does he seem chalky to you? (pale, disheveled, nervous)

53. You can tell a lot about a dwarf from his helm

54. Wear the rings you don't mind losing on your fingers (don't exhibit your wealth foolishly)

55. Make the tunnel come to you! (uttered by the legendary dwarven hero, Burdodd the Belcher, to a fellow sapper during an underground assault on an enemy castle, implying the dwarven superiority in sapping and mining.)

56. Clanging axes scare off ghosts. (Another example of dwarven superstitions regarding ghosts and other undead.Loud noise scares the undead.)

57. Touch my gold and die! (A tongue-in-cheek reference to dwarven hoards often being coated with poison, as a last resort at thwarting tomb-robbers)

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Dwarven proverbs, sayings, quotes, anecdotes and euphemisms
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-28 03:28 PM


 Lo, there do I see my father. Lo, there do I see my mother, and my sisters, and my brothers. Lo, there do I see the line of my people, back to the beginning. Lo, they do call to me. They bid me take my place among them. In the halls of Valhalla (the Forgefather). Where the brave....may live...forever.

If that doesn't give you that dwarven tingle...nuff said.


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Dwarven proverbs, sayings, quotes, anecdotes and euphemisms
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-18 08:49 PM

65. There are no Dwarven ruins (you may find cities abandoned, but dwarven architecture and masonry is too superb for ruins.)

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Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 08:11 PM

Might this make for a better stub than sub? Dunno. But they're cute and well-named. Like Beard Flies, but spiders.


Beard lizard?

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Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-18 11:56 AM
Thur Conan Doyle :) Nice quote! Go to Comment
10 Dragon Lairs, Denizens & Hoards
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 09:52 PM

Basically, 10 one-night mini-campaigns for the dragon-lovers. I also like the quick-and-neat, Entrance/Exit, Defenses, Hoard format. everything you need to know, and easily malleable.

If you do more of these, I would *love* to see a few less 'high-fantasy' dragons and more 'dark', bizarre, and unconventional types.

really like 5, 7, and 8! Go to Comment
Thirty Punchlines to Dwarven Dirty Jokes
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 07:04 PM
This would be an easy 5 for me, if the jokes to the punchlines were included. Regardless, #'s 2,15,28, 29 made me laugh. Go to Comment
Kyra's Knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 01:12 PM
A Zombie Knife powerful enough to launch campaigns and gruesome enough to end them (if necessary). The back-stories and descriptions are great!

Well done, sir. Go to Comment
Shivenhusk the Unliving Refuse
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 12:48 PM

A perfectly horrid and disgusting "thing"! Well described and imagined. Even the name alone is great, summons up mental images of fractured sanity and putrid, worm-eaten dreams. I Iike that he is worshiped/revered by various cults and madmen. Could use a a bit of a spell/grammar-check.

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Treatise on Necromancy
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-25 12:58 PM

Lots of interesting bits in this sub. Could use more of them. It feels 2/3rds done to me, though i like all the information shared! Would also have loved to see more on the "true" origins/meanings of necromancy. As with other "Mancies", necromancy originally entailed predicting the future, as in "divining the future by/through speaking/interacting with the dead." In closing, I think you will make a worthy leader for your gruesome guild! Thumb up!


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