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Murometz's comment on 2012-11-09 10:29 AM
Hmm, not what I was expecting from the title, but good idea nonetheless! Will endeavor to add an entry or two. Go to Comment
Sealed City of Roastone
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-09 09:23 AM
The premise isn't Roanoke. The premise, as i see it, is a closed dwarven city, beset by mystery, which begs exploration. Almost a LotR vibe. Can picture the PCs approaching a door in the mountain...speak friend and enter. He did also say "dwarves" a lot.
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Sealed City of Roastone
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-08 12:04 PM
I like the set-up! Its old-school yet makes me want to go adventuring asap to help the dwarves! The Roanoke twist only adds to the sense of sinister mystery. The "creature" is also fascinating. I don't know why, but immediately after reading this, I thought of combining The Devourer of Here, Moon's Sound Elemental, P-p-p-p-p-pktt and the Forge of Woe to try to explain this alien "entity" to PCs Go to Comment
Sealed City of Roastone
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-08 10:19 PM
It may lack dwarven detail as you say, but the premise oozes dwarvism.

The fact that it can be played with any ethnic group, only adds to its usefulness.

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Murometz's comment on 2012-11-09 10:35 AM
Not my cup of tea content-wise, but still found myself lost and caught up in the tale! Expertly written and presented. And what they both said! Go to Comment
30 Things That Grow in a Dwarven Beard
Systems  (Agriculture/ Husbandry)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-26 12:25 PM
Just awesome!! I immediately begin mentally festooning the beards of various dwarven npc's in my head (worlds) with these lovely add-ons. These are so fun, they beg to be used. Great details! Go to Comment
Common Horrors of the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-24 12:18 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Sons of Scorpions
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-26 12:20 PM
Zardoz of course brings to mind one of the worst sci-fi movies ever inflicted upon mankind and Sean Connery's highly disturbing outfit.

Other than that, i love this entry! Big Z's story reads like a Marvel Universe character bio--approached by a 'mysterious benefactor' and all that--great! There are also Sons of Anarchy, GI Joe, and clockwork orange vibes. Love the gang roster! Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-15 02:16 PM
I'm sure I don't know. What would any npc think, upon reading a sub about themselves? And thinking about it, I'm pretty sure I couldn't care less. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-14 11:34 PM
The journal excerpt was amazing. Very original take on a necromancer, that's for sure, she seeks immortality for everyone. I LOVE how her story begins epically, and then this line---"Her survival was purely the work of a traveling necromancer who happened to be staying in the town which massacred the clan." I really like the dichotomy there of "fated to be this way" fractured by, "happenstance and serendipity". You can tell this was written with some emotion and extra care. The comments are good too. The questions apt, and the answers satisfactory.

Powerful piece. Go to Comment
Chrome
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-19 11:49 AM
Love it. I get a big jolt of verisimilitude in this post. I can see all this coming to fruition.



A round of Chrome for all my Droogs! Go to Comment
Kin-slayer Knives of bol-Pakash
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-20 10:29 AM
I figured that for dwarves, "the lame" already carries a strong negative connotation. Spartan-esque thinking. Born lame, he was probably a useless warrior and smith. He could not "work". What could he turn to, but evil?

Also, I did a piss-poor job describing these knives. Or at least describing the idea in my head. These knives are supposed to be reason that dwarves are in fact no longer fecund. I think I left this a stub because I didn't do a good job transferring this from the brain to the page. Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-19 11:45 AM
you should, because it is yet another awesome dwarven idea.

Would love to see the various nuances of dwarven heraldry. Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2013-09-19 09:44 AM
This needs to emerge from the ranks of stubiness, and grow into an all-encompassing master-work of Dwarven Heraldry lore and detail!! I have spoken :P Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-01 01:00 PM
What Muro said! :P Go to Comment
Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 04:10 PM
Look what you made me do now, val!...private in-work-new-locations-other-other-7 ancient wonders of the Elves

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Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-17 02:44 PM
You mean help you edit it? :P

I'll give you 2 for free lol

1. get rid of the 2 commas after Enigma God
2. There is a loooong line break between Emperor's and Highway Go to Comment
Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 04:03 PM
1. Mineral oils? What are those? That sounds interesting.
2. like the tunnel maze and love the plot-hook!

3. love the name Knadric Yaar, but the maze could use some oomph.
4. great visual on the horizon

5. hmmm, its ok

6. A massive, Gothic (gargoyles) dwarven bridge is a pretty cool idea. Plot-hook: Bridge over the river Kwai!!
7. again, great visual



Ok, I LOVE!! the concept of the Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World. Wish I thought of it first! But this could really use a once-over on spelling, punct, line breaks, etc and maybe a few more inspiring bits on each.

+1/2 for the great idea. Go to Comment
Othamm, the God of Completion
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 10:47 AM
Ahh, the priest-hood of the "Concluders", or the "Closers" in sales parlance :-) I like the line about artists seeing the priests and deity as the bane of True Art.

I first read this at 2am last night, then proceeded to have a dream wherein a Mathomite challenged an Othammite to a duel to the death. The Mathomite failed to show up on the chosen day however. The Othammite waited only briefly, unsurprised, then went back to getting other things done. Go to Comment
The Hydro Club
Locations  (Establishment)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-13 01:00 PM
I also like the imagery. Reads like one of those international uber-clubs in Ibiza. I like the twist that this was done as a 5-room dungeon as well. For the right game, this could provide a barrel of fun. Go to Comment
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