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NPCs  (Minor)   (Technical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 09:45 PM
The power ability strikes me as a rather original one. Nicely done! Go to Comment
It's A Gone World
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 12:10 PM
Why would crimes like "rape and prostitution" be mostly eliminated? That sounds silly to me. Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 12:30 PM
Nice classic Marvel Dossier type of write-up. I like him! I smell shades of colossus, juggernaut, and magneto.

He seems to cry out for a buddy too. Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-17 04:05 PM
I'm ocd'ing on "Kolya Winters"...Kolya is a guys name! :P

Otherwise, can't wait to read about the rest of Force Aussie!!! Especially the Dreamtime guy(gal?) Go to Comment
Impossible Iron
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-17 09:58 PM
bwahaha, so you don't mind if I take a crack at an all-Australian Supers Team? :D Go to Comment
Legacy, Part I - Goodbye
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-10 12:52 PM
Really good read! Great job. Go to Comment
30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-06 04:35 PM
The sheer volume of data alone is...impressive. Will come back to read it all soon. Go to Comment
30 Alien Races
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-07 12:31 PM
Took a while to read through, but highly worth the time. This can basically serve as its own gm binder. Amazing collection of life forms. Well done!! Go to Comment
The Heads of Zaid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-13 12:35 PM
Like val, I like anything that reeks of past ages and things ancient-beyond-ancient. The image of half-buried simian sphinxes is a nice touch. I guess I'd add some stuff info about interacting with PCs and such, but otherwise, good stuff! Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 04:05 PM
Can I say, I feel bad for her? Which is a good thing. A somewhat tragic powerful presence, messed up in head, and a damn interesting character for a novel. I imagine you can go many ways with her...good, bad, other. The 27 pounds of brain and suspended viscera is a jolting image.

I'm going to have to look up what the heck an Ender Wiggin is now. Go to Comment
The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-29 09:21 PM

Red-rimmed eyes, red-rimmed mouth...Join the song!

I enjoyed this. Creepy and nicely written!

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NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 06:22 PM
The formatting here is awesome, aside from the tantalizing world info presented via these npc capsules. Terrific! More! Go to Comment
Luna Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-11 02:00 PM

Sublime! Has a strong feel of the pre-historic and primal. I can visualize these people, as I read about the ring. Nice details everywhere, such as the crystal pool-reflection of the moon, burying it beneath the moon's surface, and the fact that the surface has changed since the ring's creation.

This almost, not quite but almost, has lovecraftian overtones. I am looking forward to the lunar worship sub.

Plus exactly what MCoorlim said!!!! I see no disparities, only verisimilitude.

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A Game of Princes
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-03 06:51 PM
Nice one. Quite usable and malleable. The setup is definitive yet vague and pliant. Go to Comment
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-11 01:50 PM
Old fashioned death-puzzle dungeon romp. I of course, love it!! Lots of thought went into this. Kudos be upon you!

I particularly like the fact that Marghest Blair is forced to send in undead commoners.

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Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-08-21 01:11 PM
Poor Jack, he'd be overwhelmed! Love all the connectors and links and images. Really livens this up! Some of the entries are quite original too. Good one. Go to Comment
Beans - Magic Beans!
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-08-21 01:11 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Balor's Embrace
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-23 10:06 PM

Aside from some peculiarly ubiquitous fantasy names--shadowlands, waylan, balor--I like this suit of armor. As Val mentioned, it could be used in practically any game system.

I liked the tiny detail about the "numbing and unnatural cold" doing its thing.

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The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 11:23 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tools of madness
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-30 08:32 PM

Humorous actually. And in some cases powerful. All kinds of fun scenarios spring to mind. Plus I simply like the idea of magic items for the insane. New niche!! Go to Comment
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