Sublime! Has a strong feel of the pre-historic and primal. I can visualize these people, as I read about the ring. Nice details everywhere, such as the crystal pool-reflection of the moon, burying it beneath the moon's surface, and the fact that the surface has changed since the ring's creation.
This almost, not quite but almost, has lovecraftian overtones. I am looking forward to the lunar worship sub.
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Plus exactly what MCoorlim said!!!! I see no disparities, only verisimilitude.