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The Way of Divine Wealth
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-12 08:56 AM
This is probably the best described and presented wealth-religion idea I've ever seen. From the Divine Broker to the Ordinance to the High Exchange in Qurai to the Bursar's Houses, and everything in between. Splendid, rich, evocative! Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-12 03:28 PM
I would use this in a heartbeat too! And inject it with more daoisms.
Its got everything I love in an adventure...monasteries, under-water treasure, monks, chains, bloated corpses :D

But seriously, a nice tight little plot!
Great work, Myst! Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 02:40 PM
yeah, would have been more difficult if i went with: chair, battery, elephant, osmosis, gnome, and laser. :P Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 03:23 PM
Wow. Love it. Go to Comment
Art of the weilder
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-04 12:21 PM
Reminds me of Jedi. I can see axle's point in replacing age ranges with something more character-oriented, but I kind of like that approach...

Besides, if GoT has taught us anything its that kids are dangerous :) So much so in fact that I wouldn't mind playing a puberty-experiencing, angst-ridden, wide-eyed, adventure-hungry 13-14 year old Weilder prodigy, or use one as an NPC, who the PCs will most likely underestimate.

I'm curious as to the spellings. Weilder and Waren are spelled this way purposely, yes?

And since I think this is your first sub, let me give you my patented, "Welcome, Chaoticwaffle!". Good first sub! Go to Comment
Non-Euclidean Architecture: Part 2
Systems  (Architectural)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-29 11:01 PM
*brain oozes out of ear*

But Mmm-mm good!! I mean i need these 2 primers with me at all times.

I'm not smart enough to come up with points of contention. Groovy!! Go to Comment
Hagula
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:18 PM
iBasically a humanoid hagfish vampire. I don't think anyone's made quite that combination before, so kudos to you./i


I beg to differ.The eel-man, hagfish-man, remorah-man has been done ad nauseaum.

However, the details in this one are really good! (churlfish, honorable egg, manatee farms, flesh is putty in their hands, etc)

I second val's comment too. Once I saw "America" i immediately thought, "Wait, what? Wow, cool!"
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Corpsemaker
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:04 PM
The Corpsemaker's "cry" adds a nice shiver and the worm is suitably gruesome for my tastes. I couldn't help but to also think of the vile and disturbing movie, "Centipede" as I read the creature's description.

Great add to the Gallery of Undeath! Go to Comment
Duty Shrines
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 01:52 PM
Wow. Novel! For some reason my first thought upon reading this was, Doomsday Seed Vault meets Mr. Miyagi meets ancient telepathic relic meets, well meets one other thing or other :)

So many ways to go with these! The plot-hooks multiply in my brain. Go to Comment
The Glenbeard Tunnels
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Underground)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 01:46 PM
I agree with Shadoweagle and Strolen, the tale is interesting and full of dwarven psychology and a "can-do" bearded spirit and is the meat of the sub. However, I do find the idea of a dwarven subway and magnetism, stimulating to ponder as well!


The fact that this is not "slanted" toward an automatic steampunk-ish vibe, instead sticking to "fantasy", is also quite interesting!

There was an ooold Dungeon Magazine(tm) adventure involving something similar (dwarven train system) with a load of dwarven politics thrown in. This reminds me of that in a good way!! Go to Comment
Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-24 12:19 PM
Well, I think this is a really detailed description of a crown/ring/staff/*item*/etc of undead control. The voice of the misery-stricken narrator certainly adds to the pervasively gruesome atmosphere.



The most interesting part is the ambiguous 'soul-binding' between the undead and the sacrificed child. This 'unknown and untested' link is fascinating because it can potentially be used to "interfere" with the control by the main-crown wearer.

Imagine an undead almost completely controlled by a necromancer, yet at the same time, invaded by the thoughts and intelligence(?) of a child.

In this sentence, you need to add, "to believe" after "leads me"...

<i>The fact that he has given me these items and they are far from perfect
leads me that these crowns will be for a dark and nefarious purpose
hence the need for them to be vile</i>
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Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:11 PM
Hi, I'm Muro, and I love vile and disturbing undead thingies.

Group: Hi Muro. Don't be afraid to share your feelings here...tell us of your recent progress.

Me: Well, I've been trying hard. Real hard. Yesterday i almost wrote out a bile-dripping, brain-sucking, amniotic fluid-producing creature. Then I caught myself, and read a book on Unicorns and the fairy elves who ride them instead. Every day is a battle.

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Psuedo-Imaginary Dinosaurs
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-23 10:58 AM
As I started reading this, I kept thinking, well, its your basic illusion spell, but then it veers towards greatness and uniqueness! Really weird and really cool idea. Will use this somehow...somewhere. Go to Comment
The Kingmakers, Session 9
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:13 PM
I'm jealous. I wish I had a steady, weekly campaign to detail here on Strolens. :( Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-23 11:30 AM
The tale does draw you in, well written, making her quite memorable. Zombirth, as Forganthus calls it....this is a new concept for me as far as undead begetting, and I Iove it. Deliciously gruesome! Go to Comment
Ghost Ship
Dungeons  (Water)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-23 11:36 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ode to "The Temple of Doom"(A tale of Mysantia)
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-04 07:15 PM
Ode to "The Temple of Doom"(A tale of Mysantia)
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-04 09:10 PM
KALI-MAH! Go to Comment
Ode to "The Temple of Doom"(A tale of Mysantia)
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-05 10:07 AM
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