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Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-14 11:34 PM
The journal excerpt was amazing. Very original take on a necromancer, that's for sure, she seeks immortality for everyone. I LOVE how her story begins epically, and then this line---"Her survival was purely the work of a traveling necromancer who happened to be staying in the town which massacred the clan." I really like the dichotomy there of "fated to be this way" fractured by, "happenstance and serendipity". You can tell this was written with some emotion and extra care. The comments are good too. The questions apt, and the answers satisfactory.

Powerful piece. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-15 02:16 PM
I'm sure I don't know. What would any npc think, upon reading a sub about themselves? And thinking about it, I'm pretty sure I couldn't care less. Go to Comment
Chrome
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-19 11:49 AM
Love it. I get a big jolt of verisimilitude in this post. I can see all this coming to fruition.



A round of Chrome for all my Droogs! Go to Comment
Kin-slayer Knives of bol-Pakash
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-20 10:29 AM
I figured that for dwarves, "the lame" already carries a strong negative connotation. Spartan-esque thinking. Born lame, he was probably a useless warrior and smith. He could not "work". What could he turn to, but evil?

Also, I did a piss-poor job describing these knives. Or at least describing the idea in my head. These knives are supposed to be reason that dwarves are in fact no longer fecund. I think I left this a stub because I didn't do a good job transferring this from the brain to the page. Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-19 11:45 AM
you should, because it is yet another awesome dwarven idea.

Would love to see the various nuances of dwarven heraldry. Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2013-09-19 09:44 AM
This needs to emerge from the ranks of stubiness, and grow into an all-encompassing master-work of Dwarven Heraldry lore and detail!! I have spoken :P Go to Comment
Dwarven Heraldry
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-01 01:00 PM
What Muro said! :P Go to Comment
Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 04:03 PM
1. Mineral oils? What are those? That sounds interesting.
2. like the tunnel maze and love the plot-hook!

3. love the name Knadric Yaar, but the maze could use some oomph.
4. great visual on the horizon

5. hmmm, its ok

6. A massive, Gothic (gargoyles) dwarven bridge is a pretty cool idea. Plot-hook: Bridge over the river Kwai!!
7. again, great visual



Ok, I LOVE!! the concept of the Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World. Wish I thought of it first! But this could really use a once-over on spelling, punct, line breaks, etc and maybe a few more inspiring bits on each.

+1/2 for the great idea. Go to Comment
Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 04:10 PM
Look what you made me do now, val!...private in-work-new-locations-other-other-7 ancient wonders of the Elves

:-) Go to Comment
Seven Wonders of the Dwarven World
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-17 02:44 PM
You mean help you edit it? :P

I'll give you 2 for free lol

1. get rid of the 2 commas after Enigma God
2. There is a loooong line break between Emperor's and Highway Go to Comment
Othamm, the God of Completion
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-16 10:47 AM
Ahh, the priest-hood of the "Concluders", or the "Closers" in sales parlance :-) I like the line about artists seeing the priests and deity as the bane of True Art.

I first read this at 2am last night, then proceeded to have a dream wherein a Mathomite challenged an Othammite to a duel to the death. The Mathomite failed to show up on the chosen day however. The Othammite waited only briefly, unsurprised, then went back to getting other things done. Go to Comment
The Hydro Club
Locations  (Establishment)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-13 01:00 PM
I also like the imagery. Reads like one of those international uber-clubs in Ibiza. I like the twist that this was done as a 5-room dungeon as well. For the right game, this could provide a barrel of fun. Go to Comment
Headlines from the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 07:07 PM
Solstice celebration and St. Mark's Day are deeply amusing. Ganymede one rocks, as if pulled straight from actual headlines. Human pets, i have to say, I'm not "feeling". Too controversial, even for the "future". How there can be "humans" that live 15-17 years and remain pre-pubescent as pets(!) is beyond me...

I love this sub because its a great format for letting the reader get to know the world with brief but detailed and vivid, bullet-points, without the techno-mech. Not that there is anything wrong with techno-mech  :-) Go to Comment
Headlines from the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 09:24 PM
Human pets was the one I found the most interesting.

I didn't say they weren't interesting. They are extremely interesting! I'm just saying, as I read these i sniff for "future-verisimilitude", and that one doesn't pass the smell test. Go to Comment
The Non-Assassination of Jaspar Zane
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 07:25 PM
I like it. I don't have much (or anything apparently :p) to add, but I like it.

 

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A Dwarf on the Water
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 04:15 PM
Ok, read it finally. Now have to go pass out from exhaustion :-) But not before saying, this is outstanding and I really enjoyed reading it. Some solid dwarvisms and an original voice! Go to Comment
A Dwarf on the Water
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 08:07 PM
I may just end up picking out my favorite bits from this piece, randomly over the years, and say, "i like it".

Here is the first:

 "...they are insane because no dwarf on the water can think properly." Go to Comment
A Dwarf on the Water
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-21 05:13 PM
Holy sweet Jesus! Go to Comment
Arcopolarization
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-09 08:46 PM
Amazing. I will also give this a fiver. However, it must be mentioned, there are a few societal contradictions in my opinion. Go to Comment
Arcopolarization
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-10-13 01:01 PM
Uggh, I'm not sure now what i meant. Let me get back to you. I may have meant a different sub. Don't ask :) Go to Comment
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